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BP's first and second stories

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  1. I was drunk when I wrote my first story. It was post 5371161.
  2. There were no replies.
  3.  
  4.  
  5. maybe this will help the writefags get juices flowing and such
  6.  
  7. >day 192 in equestria
  8. >you work odd jobs for the mane six for bits
  9. >you hear a knock on the door
  10. >you open the door
  11. >see yellow quiet
  12. >yellow quiet looks at you
  13. >can i come in?
  14. >she says
  15. >um, if thats alright
  16. >you haven't been raped by her yet, so you agree
  17. >she enters
  18. >she starts shaking
  19. >you have never allowed her to be this close
  20. >so very close
  21. >spaghetti starts falling out of her pockets
  22. >you look at the floor
  23. >you just mopped it
  24. >kick yellow quiet out
  25. fucking yellow quiet
  26.  
  27. fin
  28.  
  29. My second story was about half an hour later. 5371440
  30.  
  31. >be me
  32. >forever alone in equestria
  33. >day 201
  34. >you work for the mane six for bits
  35. >only the yellow quiet one shows you any attention
  36. >purple smart gave up on you
  37. >she has nothing left to learn from a monkey
  38. >blue fast is also uninterested
  39. >you cant fly, and you arent athletic enough
  40. >you live comfortably enough
  41. >its your day off
  42. >you have saved enough for a treat for yourself
  43. >meat
  44. >you have longed for meat for a long time
  45. >occasionally you get some fish
  46. >but, to the the good stuff you have to go underground
  47. >to the bad part of ponyville
  48. >its far
  49. >can you make it without yellow quiet detecting your presence?
  50. >you wonder
  51. >that doesn't matter now
  52. >its been too long, far too long
  53. >you put on your hat and stand by the door
  54. >you breathe heavily
  55. >will this be a good day?
  56. >you throw it open
  57. >no yellow quiet... for now
  58.  
  59. 1/?
  60. >you begin walking
  61. >not making eye contact with anyone
  62. anyp0ny
  63. >you correct yourself, half amused at your mistake
  64. >the ponies ignore you
  65. >you move with purpose
  66. >you start to get that feeling... that dreded feeling
  67. >you look around calmly
  68. >nothing... just your imagination
  69. >you too paranoid
  70. >there it is again
  71. >you do a 180 as fast as you can
  72. >nothing
  73. >you start walking again but bump into... it
  74. >um, sorry about that
  75. >yellow quiet says
  76. >im just on my way to the market
  77. >you smirk at her
  78. me too
  79. >suddenly you realize your mistake
  80. >you hope she didnt catch that
  81. >um, we could go together, if thats alright
  82. no yellow quiet, I have... other errands to run first
  83. >she looks down
  84. >okay
  85. >and runs off
  86. >you sigh, that was too close
  87.  
  88. 2/?
  89. >a few minutes later you are there
  90. >the house is run down and decrepit
  91. >it looks like it smells
  92. >you knock, and two eyes peer back
  93. >the door opens, you have been here before
  94. >no words are exchanged
  95. >no names
  96. >you put your bits on the table
  97. >usually a griffon would push a small bag back toward you
  98. >not this time
  99. >the door closes behind you
  100. what do you want?
  101. >we've decided its more profitable to keep you here
  102. >that voice
  103. >you know that voice
  104. >the apple family has needs, and selling scraps of meat doesn't pay the bills
  105. >a bag goes over your head
  106. >the last thing you feel is the ground
  107.  
  108. 3/?
  109. >you wake up
  110. >theres a fire going, and it looks dark outside
  111. >how long have you been out?
  112. >you look around
  113. >the room is dirty
  114. >the bed is stained with blood, and... other fluids
  115. where the fuck am i?
  116. >you go for the door
  117. >locked
  118. >of course
  119. >the window is boarded up.
  120. >you look around for a weapon
  121. >nothing
  122. >why didn't they tie you up?
  123. >you hear a click at the door
  124. >too late, you've wasted your time and now they are here
  125. >the door is unlocked, but it stays closed
  126. >get in the corner the voice says
  127. >... applejack says...
  128. you wont get away with this
  129. >get in the corner anon!
  130. >applejack yells more forcefully this time
  131. >you can take on a pony... maybe two
  132. >you cant fight a griffon
  133. >you grab the threadbare sheet from the bed and cover yourself up
  134. >you comply
  135. alright! what do you want?
  136. >the door opens
  137. >isn't it obvious sugar?
  138. >apple jack and rarity enter
  139. >their eyes... you have never seen animals so hungry
  140.  
  141. 4/?
  142.  
  143. >they eye you
  144. >rarity is foaming at the mouth
  145. >you could cut the air with a knife
  146. >now anon, yer gonna be our prize attraction
  147. >apple jack says while walking around
  148. >never lowering her eyes
  149. >and we will keep you around as long as you work for us
  150. and if i refuse?
  151. >rarity smirks
  152. >lets just say, you wont fit in a small box when we are done with you
  153. >silence
  154. >your move
  155. >you throw the sheet at them and charge
  156. >purple magic surrounds you
  157. >you are thrown against the wall
  158. >you try to move, but the magic is too strong
  159. >you brute! we will need to teach you some manners first
  160. >apple jack walks up to you slowly
  161. >she puts her muzzle up to your sides
  162. >you feel her hot breath against your skin
  163. >ah dont want to have to teach you a lesson anon
  164. >she puts her teeth into your side
  165. >she bites slowly, always keeping eye contact
  166. >a sharp pain shoots through your body
  167. >she stops, waiting for you to scream
  168. >always looking
  169.  
  170. 5/?
  171. >you clench your teeth
  172. >you eyes are closed
  173. >you can feel a warmness flowing
  174. >terrified
  175. STOP!
  176. >you look down
  177. >she smiles at you
  178. >she has spared you, for now
  179. What are you doing you crazy bitch!?
  180. >applejack bucks you
  181. >you can't breathe
  182. >rarity lets you fall to the ground
  183. >you cough, you feel a warm mist
  184. >rarity walks over to you
  185. >you are holding your sides
  186. >your wound doesn't look too bad
  187. >rarity is now over you
  188. >you smell her sweet dampness
  189. >this doesn't have to be so hard anon
  190. >she growls
  191. >we just want you to use you as we will
  192. >you try to grab her
  193. >magic again surrounds you
  194. >you cant move
  195. >do you understand?
  196. >silence
  197. >DO YOU UNDERSTAND?
  198. >again silence
  199. >you can feel your hands being crushed
  200. >I will not ask again
  201. >applejack is across the room
  202. >the fire casts horrific shadows across her face
  203. >she is touching herself
  204. yes
  205. >you squeak out
  206. >I didn't quite catch that anon
  207. YES
  208. >marvelous
  209.  
  210. 6/?
  211. >you can feel the pressure around your hands decreasing
  212. >you still cant move
  213. >the magic forces you onto your back
  214. >rarity positions you with your head toward apple jack
  215. >can this really be happening?
  216. >rarity squats over you
  217. >her juices drip onto your face
  218. >i dont think i need to explain that you WILL behave yourself
  219. >rarity laughs
  220. >apple jack moves closer
  221. >always looking
  222. >you nod
  223. >good
  224. >she lowers herself onto you
  225. >forces her marehood onto your mouth
  226. >the magic releases slowly
  227. >now pleasure me
  228. >you are breathing heavily
  229. >they are in full control
  230. >there is nothing you can do
  231. >dont keep her waiting applejack says
  232. >drool escapes from her mouth
  233. >shes nearly on top of you
  234. >the fire is hotter now than ever
  235. >you close your eyes
  236.  
  237. 7/?
  238. >you move your mouth to please her
  239. >please rarity
  240. >your former friend
  241. >shes overflowing
  242. >you can barely contain her juices
  243. >you cough
  244. >you are so dirty
  245. >rarity says deeply
  246. >you are
  247. >you are so dirty
  248. >you look up
  249. >your vision is foggy
  250. >your eyes are watery
  251. >from you or her? that doesn't matter now
  252. >maybe they will let you go after this?
  253. >rarity is panty heavily
  254. >she forces herself onto you even harder now
  255. >apple jacks face is just above yours
  256. >she likes what he sees
  257. >raritys legs clench you
  258. >you can feel her magic fading
  259. >shes shaking
  260. >you cant take it any longer!
  261. >she lets out a shriek of pleasure
  262. >you choke from her juices
  263. >she lazily rolls off of you, breathing heavily
  264. >very good... very good anon
  265. >apple jack moves over you
  266. >her eyes burn with lust
  267.  
  268. 8/?
  269. >that might be fine for rarity there
  270. >but i prefer the real deal
  271. >apple jack rubs her face against yours
  272. >any other day you would have liked that
  273. >she nibbles at your ears
  274. >she slowly moves down your body, kissing every few inches
  275. >raritys magic isn't holding you down
  276. >whats the point
  277. >you will never be able to face them again
  278. >who are the authorities going to believe?
  279. >two upstanding ponies that saved all of equestria
  280. >or you? some monkey?
  281. >shes arrived at the goods
  282. >she starts licking you
  283. >enjoying your taste
  284. apple jack stop
  285. >her eyes turn to you
  286. >that look
  287. >please ms apple jack
  288. >she smiles, and returns to her prize
  289. >ah thought i made myself clear earlier
  290. >her teeth tighten on the only thing you have left
  291. no one has to know about this. i wont tell anyone
  292. >she looks up
  293. >i know you wont
  294. >we will make sure of that
  295. >against you will, your manhood has risen for the task at hand
  296. >she climbs on top of you, relishing your fear and disgust
  297.  
  298. 9/?
  299. >Apple jack lowers herself on to you
  300. >she teases you with her juicy parts
  301. >you can still stop this
  302. >you try to push her off
  303. >she feels you struggle, and stomps your chest
  304. >you gasp for air
  305. >you cant stop me anon
  306. >dont even try
  307. >your pained breathing amuses her
  308. >enough anon, this is going to happen
  309. >whether you want it or not
  310. >you feel her slowly squeezing down on you
  311. >she lets out a sigh of pleasure
  312. >you're bigger than i imagined
  313. >she smiles
  314. >she begins moving up and down
  315. >you shouldnt be enjoying this
  316. >ponies are disgusting
  317. >animals
  318. >she leans down on you
  319. >forcing everything against your body
  320. >you feel her hair against you
  321. >you shouldnt be enjoying this
  322. >your breathing matches hers
  323. >faster now
  324. >the room is spinning
  325. >you grunt as you release your seed into her
  326. >she stops bucking, enjoying every moment
  327. >after a few moments she gets up
  328. >rarity throws a towel at you
  329. >clean yourself up
  330. >they leave
  331. >and you...
  332. >just lay there...
  333. 10?
  334. >day one
  335. >you wake up on the bed
  336. >you dont remeber getting off the floor
  337. >was it just a dream?
  338. >no
  339. >this is the same room you were in last night
  340. >where they, enjoyed you
  341. >you have time to think now
  342. >you remeber when you first came to equestria
  343. >they were all so helpful
  344. >all of the ponies
  345. >especially apple jack and rarity
  346. >tears well up in your eyes
  347. >a knock at the door
  348. >you back away
  349. Go away!
  350. >no answer
  351. >a small plate is pushed under the door
  352. >meat
  353. >thats what you came here for
  354. >you sob
  355. >the dish goes cold
  356.  
  357. 11/?
  358. >day two
  359. >there has to be some way you can get at the fire
  360. >you have been looking at it
  361. >obsessing over it
  362. >its is behind a locked grate
  363. >if you could just get a small ember
  364. >...
  365. >your thoughts are interupted by a knock at the door
  366. >your meal
  367. >you return to the fire
  368. >starting at it
  369. >worshiping it
  370. >you can hear training going on in the next room
  371. >you cringe
  372. >that laughter
  373. >you will never forget that sound
  374. >how quickly will that pony be broken? you wonder
  375. >another knock
  376. >rarity walks in, with another
  377. >you dont bother to see who
  378. >you throw yourself to the other side of the room
  379. >away from them
  380. >now, now anon. that is no way to act in front of a customer
  381. >you look up
  382. not you...
  383. anyone but you
  384. >there she is
  385. >flutter shy
  386. >hmmm, it seems i wasnt a good enough teacher
  387. >rarity says
  388. >shes amused at your spirit
  389. >then i suppose we will have to tie you up
  390. >she uses her magic to throw you on the bed
  391. >ropes tie themselves around your limbs
  392. >have fun
  393. >rarity smiles
  394. >flutter shy replies
  395. >oh, im sure we will, wont we anon
  396. >she can barely contain her excitement
  397.  
  398. 12/?
  399.  
  400. grimdark is over? thats boring
  401. day 2 cont
  402.  
  403. >rarity closes the door
  404. >you and flutter shy look at eachother
  405. please help me flutter shy
  406. >she looks down
  407. >she walks toward you
  408. flutter shy?
  409. >she wont make eye contact
  410. >shes breathing heavily
  411. >her eyes are watering
  412. >i cant bare to see you like this
  413. >she says slowly
  414. >i wanted to have you so bad
  415. >but not like this
  416. >she climbs on the bed
  417. >you pull away as best as you can
  418. >she lays her head on your chest
  419. >i want to help you
  420. >you relax
  421. >she hasnt moved
  422. >i just needed to make sure
  423. >i didnt think they were serious
  424. >she says
  425. get help flutter shy
  426. >quiet, they expect us to be
  427. >she blushes
  428. >doing it
  429. >you nod
  430. >ive paid for you all night
  431. >you nod
  432. >she looks up at you and smiles
  433. >you cant hold back your tears
  434. >she puts her head against yours
  435.  
  436. 13/?
  437. >day 3
  438.  
  439. >fluttershy is gone
  440. >you are no longer tied to the bed
  441. >its only a matter of time now
  442. >until you are rescued
  443. >just play along you tell youself
  444. >you wait
  445. >its night
  446. >a knock at the door
  447. >twilight sparkle enters
  448. >she looks at you
  449. >fluttershy told me everything
  450. >you smile
  451. finally!
  452. >yes, we heard... everything
  453. a dark voice adds
  454.  
  455. >a sack is thrown toward you
  456. >you hear squeaks and crying
  457. >rarity and apple jack enter
  458. >they are covered in blood
  459. what did you mosters do?!?!
  460.  
  461. >apple jack begins
  462. >we coulda had so much fun
  463. >you coulda had any pony you wanted
  464. >but you had to throw it all away
  465. >ah would have liked keeping you around
  466. >they all smile
  467.  
  468. >rarity pulls out a small box
  469.  
  470. >you dont resist
  471.  
  472. >its over
  473.  
  474. >all over
  475.  
  476. fin
  477.  
  478. 14/14