- I was drunk when I wrote my first story. It was post 5371161.
- There were no replies.
- maybe this will help the writefags get juices flowing and such
- >day 192 in equestria
- >you work odd jobs for the mane six for bits
- >you hear a knock on the door
- >you open the door
- >see yellow quiet
- >yellow quiet looks at you
- >can i come in?
- >she says
- >um, if thats alright
- >you haven't been raped by her yet, so you agree
- >she enters
- >she starts shaking
- >you have never allowed her to be this close
- >so very close
- >spaghetti starts falling out of her pockets
- >you look at the floor
- >you just mopped it
- >kick yellow quiet out
- fucking yellow quiet
- fin
- My second story was about half an hour later. 5371440
- >be me
- >forever alone in equestria
- >day 201
- >you work for the mane six for bits
- >only the yellow quiet one shows you any attention
- >purple smart gave up on you
- >she has nothing left to learn from a monkey
- >blue fast is also uninterested
- >you cant fly, and you arent athletic enough
- >you live comfortably enough
- >its your day off
- >you have saved enough for a treat for yourself
- >meat
- >you have longed for meat for a long time
- >occasionally you get some fish
- >but, to the the good stuff you have to go underground
- >to the bad part of ponyville
- >its far
- >can you make it without yellow quiet detecting your presence?
- >you wonder
- >that doesn't matter now
- >its been too long, far too long
- >you put on your hat and stand by the door
- >you breathe heavily
- >will this be a good day?
- >you throw it open
- >no yellow quiet... for now
- 1/?
- >you begin walking
- >not making eye contact with anyone
- anyp0ny
- >you correct yourself, half amused at your mistake
- >the ponies ignore you
- >you move with purpose
- >you start to get that feeling... that dreded feeling
- >you look around calmly
- >nothing... just your imagination
- >you too paranoid
- >there it is again
- >you do a 180 as fast as you can
- >nothing
- >you start walking again but bump into... it
- >um, sorry about that
- >yellow quiet says
- >im just on my way to the market
- >you smirk at her
- me too
- >suddenly you realize your mistake
- >you hope she didnt catch that
- >um, we could go together, if thats alright
- no yellow quiet, I have... other errands to run first
- >she looks down
- >okay
- >and runs off
- >you sigh, that was too close
- 2/?
- >a few minutes later you are there
- >the house is run down and decrepit
- >it looks like it smells
- >you knock, and two eyes peer back
- >the door opens, you have been here before
- >no words are exchanged
- >no names
- >you put your bits on the table
- >usually a griffon would push a small bag back toward you
- >not this time
- >the door closes behind you
- what do you want?
- >we've decided its more profitable to keep you here
- >that voice
- >you know that voice
- >the apple family has needs, and selling scraps of meat doesn't pay the bills
- >a bag goes over your head
- >the last thing you feel is the ground
- 3/?
- >you wake up
- >theres a fire going, and it looks dark outside
- >how long have you been out?
- >you look around
- >the room is dirty
- >the bed is stained with blood, and... other fluids
- where the fuck am i?
- >you go for the door
- >locked
- >of course
- >the window is boarded up.
- >you look around for a weapon
- >nothing
- >why didn't they tie you up?
- >you hear a click at the door
- >too late, you've wasted your time and now they are here
- >the door is unlocked, but it stays closed
- >get in the corner the voice says
- >... applejack says...
- you wont get away with this
- >get in the corner anon!
- >applejack yells more forcefully this time
- >you can take on a pony... maybe two
- >you cant fight a griffon
- >you grab the threadbare sheet from the bed and cover yourself up
- >you comply
- alright! what do you want?
- >the door opens
- >isn't it obvious sugar?
- >apple jack and rarity enter
- >their eyes... you have never seen animals so hungry
- 4/?
- >they eye you
- >rarity is foaming at the mouth
- >you could cut the air with a knife
- >now anon, yer gonna be our prize attraction
- >apple jack says while walking around
- >never lowering her eyes
- >and we will keep you around as long as you work for us
- and if i refuse?
- >rarity smirks
- >lets just say, you wont fit in a small box when we are done with you
- >silence
- >your move
- >you throw the sheet at them and charge
- >purple magic surrounds you
- >you are thrown against the wall
- >you try to move, but the magic is too strong
- >you brute! we will need to teach you some manners first
- >apple jack walks up to you slowly
- >she puts her muzzle up to your sides
- >you feel her hot breath against your skin
- >ah dont want to have to teach you a lesson anon
- >she puts her teeth into your side
- >she bites slowly, always keeping eye contact
- >a sharp pain shoots through your body
- >she stops, waiting for you to scream
- >always looking
- 5/?
- >you clench your teeth
- >you eyes are closed
- >you can feel a warmness flowing
- >terrified
- STOP!
- >you look down
- >she smiles at you
- >she has spared you, for now
- What are you doing you crazy bitch!?
- >applejack bucks you
- >you can't breathe
- >rarity lets you fall to the ground
- >you cough, you feel a warm mist
- >rarity walks over to you
- >you are holding your sides
- >your wound doesn't look too bad
- >rarity is now over you
- >you smell her sweet dampness
- >this doesn't have to be so hard anon
- >she growls
- >we just want you to use you as we will
- >you try to grab her
- >magic again surrounds you
- >you cant move
- >do you understand?
- >silence
- >DO YOU UNDERSTAND?
- >again silence
- >you can feel your hands being crushed
- >I will not ask again
- >applejack is across the room
- >the fire casts horrific shadows across her face
- >she is touching herself
- yes
- >you squeak out
- >I didn't quite catch that anon
- YES
- >marvelous
- 6/?
- >you can feel the pressure around your hands decreasing
- >you still cant move
- >the magic forces you onto your back
- >rarity positions you with your head toward apple jack
- >can this really be happening?
- >rarity squats over you
- >her juices drip onto your face
- >i dont think i need to explain that you WILL behave yourself
- >rarity laughs
- >apple jack moves closer
- >always looking
- >you nod
- >good
- >she lowers herself onto you
- >forces her marehood onto your mouth
- >the magic releases slowly
- >now pleasure me
- >you are breathing heavily
- >they are in full control
- >there is nothing you can do
- >dont keep her waiting applejack says
- >drool escapes from her mouth
- >shes nearly on top of you
- >the fire is hotter now than ever
- >you close your eyes
- 7/?
- >you move your mouth to please her
- >please rarity
- >your former friend
- >shes overflowing
- >you can barely contain her juices
- >you cough
- >you are so dirty
- >rarity says deeply
- >you are
- >you are so dirty
- >you look up
- >your vision is foggy
- >your eyes are watery
- >from you or her? that doesn't matter now
- >maybe they will let you go after this?
- >rarity is panty heavily
- >she forces herself onto you even harder now
- >apple jacks face is just above yours
- >she likes what he sees
- >raritys legs clench you
- >you can feel her magic fading
- >shes shaking
- >you cant take it any longer!
- >she lets out a shriek of pleasure
- >you choke from her juices
- >she lazily rolls off of you, breathing heavily
- >very good... very good anon
- >apple jack moves over you
- >her eyes burn with lust
- 8/?
- >that might be fine for rarity there
- >but i prefer the real deal
- >apple jack rubs her face against yours
- >any other day you would have liked that
- >she nibbles at your ears
- >she slowly moves down your body, kissing every few inches
- >raritys magic isn't holding you down
- >whats the point
- >you will never be able to face them again
- >who are the authorities going to believe?
- >two upstanding ponies that saved all of equestria
- >or you? some monkey?
- >shes arrived at the goods
- >she starts licking you
- >enjoying your taste
- apple jack stop
- >her eyes turn to you
- >that look
- >please ms apple jack
- >she smiles, and returns to her prize
- >ah thought i made myself clear earlier
- >her teeth tighten on the only thing you have left
- no one has to know about this. i wont tell anyone
- >she looks up
- >i know you wont
- >we will make sure of that
- >against you will, your manhood has risen for the task at hand
- >she climbs on top of you, relishing your fear and disgust
- 9/?
- >Apple jack lowers herself on to you
- >she teases you with her juicy parts
- >you can still stop this
- >you try to push her off
- >she feels you struggle, and stomps your chest
- >you gasp for air
- >you cant stop me anon
- >dont even try
- >your pained breathing amuses her
- >enough anon, this is going to happen
- >whether you want it or not
- >you feel her slowly squeezing down on you
- >she lets out a sigh of pleasure
- >you're bigger than i imagined
- >she smiles
- >she begins moving up and down
- >you shouldnt be enjoying this
- >ponies are disgusting
- >animals
- >she leans down on you
- >forcing everything against your body
- >you feel her hair against you
- >you shouldnt be enjoying this
- >your breathing matches hers
- >faster now
- >the room is spinning
- >you grunt as you release your seed into her
- >she stops bucking, enjoying every moment
- >after a few moments she gets up
- >rarity throws a towel at you
- >clean yourself up
- >they leave
- >and you...
- >just lay there...
- 10?
- >day one
- >you wake up on the bed
- >you dont remeber getting off the floor
- >was it just a dream?
- >no
- >this is the same room you were in last night
- >where they, enjoyed you
- >you have time to think now
- >you remeber when you first came to equestria
- >they were all so helpful
- >all of the ponies
- >especially apple jack and rarity
- >tears well up in your eyes
- >a knock at the door
- >you back away
- Go away!
- >no answer
- >a small plate is pushed under the door
- >meat
- >thats what you came here for
- >you sob
- >the dish goes cold
- 11/?
- >day two
- >there has to be some way you can get at the fire
- >you have been looking at it
- >obsessing over it
- >its is behind a locked grate
- >if you could just get a small ember
- >...
- >your thoughts are interupted by a knock at the door
- >your meal
- >you return to the fire
- >starting at it
- >worshiping it
- >you can hear training going on in the next room
- >you cringe
- >that laughter
- >you will never forget that sound
- >how quickly will that pony be broken? you wonder
- >another knock
- >rarity walks in, with another
- >you dont bother to see who
- >you throw yourself to the other side of the room
- >away from them
- >now, now anon. that is no way to act in front of a customer
- >you look up
- not you...
- anyone but you
- >there she is
- >flutter shy
- >hmmm, it seems i wasnt a good enough teacher
- >rarity says
- >shes amused at your spirit
- >then i suppose we will have to tie you up
- >she uses her magic to throw you on the bed
- >ropes tie themselves around your limbs
- >have fun
- >rarity smiles
- >flutter shy replies
- >oh, im sure we will, wont we anon
- >she can barely contain her excitement
- 12/?
- grimdark is over? thats boring
- day 2 cont
- >rarity closes the door
- >you and flutter shy look at eachother
- please help me flutter shy
- >she looks down
- >she walks toward you
- flutter shy?
- >she wont make eye contact
- >shes breathing heavily
- >her eyes are watering
- >i cant bare to see you like this
- >she says slowly
- >i wanted to have you so bad
- >but not like this
- >she climbs on the bed
- >you pull away as best as you can
- >she lays her head on your chest
- >i want to help you
- >you relax
- >she hasnt moved
- >i just needed to make sure
- >i didnt think they were serious
- >she says
- get help flutter shy
- >quiet, they expect us to be
- >she blushes
- >doing it
- >you nod
- >ive paid for you all night
- >you nod
- >she looks up at you and smiles
- >you cant hold back your tears
- >she puts her head against yours
- 13/?
- >day 3
- >fluttershy is gone
- >you are no longer tied to the bed
- >its only a matter of time now
- >until you are rescued
- >just play along you tell youself
- >you wait
- >its night
- >a knock at the door
- >twilight sparkle enters
- >she looks at you
- >fluttershy told me everything
- >you smile
- finally!
- >yes, we heard... everything
- a dark voice adds
- >a sack is thrown toward you
- >you hear squeaks and crying
- >rarity and apple jack enter
- >they are covered in blood
- what did you mosters do?!?!
- >apple jack begins
- >we coulda had so much fun
- >you coulda had any pony you wanted
- >but you had to throw it all away
- >ah would have liked keeping you around
- >they all smile
- >rarity pulls out a small box
- >you dont resist
- >its over
- >all over
- fin
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