Title: The guitar distortion sounds a bit hollow, should have considered doubling it. Author: Anonymous Pastebin link: http://pastebin.com/GR6J6pt2 First Edit: Monday 9th of May 2016 07:04:40 PM CDT Last Edit: Monday 9th of May 2016 07:04:40 PM CDT   The guitar distortion sounds a bit hollow, should have considered doubling it. And it sounds like it's out of tune in the solos. I like the drums The bass is mostly good, could use more "groove" and dynamics but that could be my opinions interfering here Lower the voice, especially if there are long periods of instrumental. It's really overpowering. And put a shitload more reverb on that crap >that clipping noise at 6:21 in Bad Dreams Oh god tune your acoustic guitar please Is all that white noise in Nightfall intended? (~3:00 to 4:00)   Composition-wise I like Bad Dreams, the beginning and the ending of Anew, middle of Silent Tears The beginning of Nightfall is really dragging for too long At any given point in Nightfall you use the same root note, and it might be the case in the entire album. Or maybe it's just that guitar feedback noise thing, but either way it feels very repetitive.   You need these lessons man 4/10 would listen to midis