Title:           TRUTH OR DEER, by TwinkiePinkie
Author:          Anonymous
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First Edit:      Monday 1st of April 2013 05:23:59 PM CDT
Last Edit:       Monday 1st of April 2013 05:23:59 PM CDT

TRUTH OR DEER, by TwinkiePinkie
 
---ACT 1: INTRODUCTION---
 
>fluttershy in whitetail forest, helping some critters
>antlers coming out of a bush
>pov from the bush, someone is spying on her
>she notices, thinks it's a deer, "what could a deer be doing here" and stuff
>actually a pone, dan dan dan!
>(credits roll in here?)
>treebark runs away
>she tries to chase him, with no avail
 
>at the library
>fs:"poor colt was all lonely and scared, we gotta help him! can i haz tracking spell pls?"
>they find deers, fs and ts are curious about them (general thought is they're uncivilized)
>"look there's the poor colt"
>"hey colt, ur a pone" "am not, i got no wings or horns!" "u got no antlers either"
>he's unsure
>deer: "ur a pone son"
>he's shocked, he accepts to go with them
 
---ACT 2: CONFLICT---
 
>back to ponyville, rest of mane6 are introduced: rd think he's nuts, rarity whines about uncivilized savages (may have to tone down this two a bit); aj, thanks to applebloom, remembers zecora's episode, and pinkie remembers "over a barrel" ("we all have hooves at the hand of each legs")
>introduce him to ponyville with a song ("the pone way"?), very refined, broadway-style
>>pinkie holds a party, introduces too many people (CMC too loud?)
>>twi show him books, he can't read, she's shocked (he eats them? maybe there's the drawing of a leaf)
>>rarity makes him clothes, he's uncomfortable with them (he eats them too? i'd like to show him to really be kinda nuts)
>>possibly more (at school with cherilee?)
>>ends with ponyville chorus?
>maybe while he's resting they talk a bit more about the issue.
>remember: fs and twi unsure (deers seemed kinda ok, still he's nuts), rd and rarity for keeping him away from deers, aj and pinkie for letting him go
>they find he's run off again
 
---ACT 3: RESOLUTION---
 
>back in whitetail woods, where they first found deers, they're not there anymore
>treebark's there, crying
>mane6 realize he cares about them, "we'll help you find 'em!"
>he's good at tracking and all that crap, gains confidence (rd is impressed)
>he sings the second song, very rough and savage (bongos? celtic?), while finding clues for deer's passage. something about how he likes living with deers, and finally BEING a deer
>deers join in the last chours, maybe same melody of the first song but very different vibe, showing they're "civilized" too
>"we've been looking for you everywhere, son"
>a wild cutie mark appears
>mane6 realize and say goodbye
 
>back at the library, letter to celestia
>sometimes you think what's better for somebody, but...
>sometimes different doesn't mean worse
>spike wants to add that ur race (dragon, phoenix...) is unimportant, it's what *stuff* that truly determines what you are