Title:           SETUP -AJ and Shining griping about bathroom things at end of day's work -They
Author:          Anonymous
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First Edit:      Wednesday 14th of December 2016 11:46:29 AM CDT
Last Edit:       Wednesday 14th of December 2016 11:46:29 AM CDT

SETUP
-AJ and Shining griping about bathroom things at end of day's work
-They state they're tired, had a lot of crud happen, dud bills, long paper trails (try and inject comedy here)
-Aj pops the question bout how Caddy is doing, Shining says she's flipping about, but that's fine
-Some pregnancy jokes on AJ's part, AJ piles on
-Jokes focus on AJ's "girthy hips" and she rebounds by noting him as a good looker himself, hit's him with "bubblebutt" line
-Jokes go down to dwelling, AJ asks him how long it's been with Caddy, nada, Shining retorts with AJ, nada.
-They figure they're done for now, got some free time. Relish it, today';s been exasperating
-AJ says she needs some "her" time, Shining says the same
-Pop the question "Is now a good time?" "Yup"
 
LEAD-IN
-The two enter AJ's bedroom, AJ strips her stuff haphazardly; it's just a hat and some bits.
-AJ plants her hooves on the bed and lifts her tail, saying "let's get this rodeo-a-goin" Shining gets on top of her sudden like, "misses" completely
-He just wants a hug, but she's facing the wrong way. He's feeling stressed with all that's goin' on, she concurs, got her own problems.
-They just hold for a while till AJ goes "ok let's do this properly, no use half assin' it" and lev's Shining onto the bed
-He says she's getting better, didn';t smack him into the bed roof thing
-Haw
-Both plop onto the bed, AJ says "Alright, you had first go last time, Ah'm up"
 
THE SEX
-Start with facesittan on Shining
 
-Blowjob on AJ's all fours
 
-Standard mounted fuck, Shining thrusts forward, AJ thrust backs, of course
 
-69, intense
 
-Shinign eats AJ's ass and fondling of the Apples
 
-AJ gets one ass eat on Shining and a quick hoofjob
 
-cowgirl/anal, intense. AJ domming (no sub role)
 
-doggystyle anal, hair pullin. Shining domming (no sub role)
 
-Even rougher facesitting, even rougher facefucking
 
-super duper bed spring smasher missionary, the two actually kiss together in this one
 
-Flip back into XXXTREMEME THRUST mounting, AJ using wall support to thrust back, both hit limits here, cum and collapse
 
-wind down, they got what they needed, they're both a goddamn mess, both exhausted, tired hugging, zzzz
 
THE END
 
-wake up, morning, it's saturday, the bed reeks of sex, they got one more urge in em, so it's a chill, kinda tender oral into simple missionary, no kisses tho'.
 
-Finish and they just hold onto eachother, emphasise that there's this love born of a need between the two, not so much love-love
 
-Get up, bed in breakfast, wipe away the tears and sweat, Shining compliments AJ sayin she'd be a gr8 mom, she says he's already a fine dad
 
-Quick wash up and out the door, parting ways for now.
 
FIN
 
Issues
 
-how to segue between each sex position?
-How to write the morning after, what they be thinking and feeling?
-How to reconcile Shining's relationship(s) into this?
-How to reconcile AJ's solo-flyer-ness-but-still-wants-love-and-affection-from-a-special-somepony-ness into this?
-Range of emotions in later sex pos, how to ramp it up and what to ramp up?