"You Still Owe Me Dinner"
A short story based upon, and inspired by, Zajice's original character, Lilith.
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>It's late at night, and you're hitting the clubs, because you are Anon, and Manehattan is a happening place to be.
>As one of Equestria's port towns, not to mention its largest city, Manehattan is home to all sorts of interesting creatures.
>Not just ponies.
>To make a long story short, you're feeling randier than you ever had on any given day in the world you came from.
>And Manehattan is what you call "a target-rich environment".
>As an open-minded guy, you got your first taste of pony poontang shortly after your arrival in Equestria.
>And it only left you hungry for more.
>Not just more ponies, but more species.
>Griffons, Diamond Dogs, Donkeys, young Dragons, even Yaks all had special and exotic charms.
>But nowhere near as exotic as the plump white mare with the red and black mane.
>The instant you saw her in the club, her eyes zeroed in on yours like a laser.
>You got yourself a drink, and when you turned around, drink in hand, there she was.
>"Well, ain't you a tall drink of water! Don't believe I ever saw you around here before. What's your name, honey?"
"It's Anonymous, and who do I have the pleasure of addressing?"
>She immediately gives you a radiant smile.
>"Oh, and a gentleman too! I'm Lilith, pleased to make your acquaintance!"
>She offers you a hoof to shake, but you actually surprise her by bringing it to your lips and giving it a gentle kiss.
"The pleasure is all mine."
>Her smile grows wider, and you think you catch a glimpse of fangs in it, but write it off as your imagination, knowing full well that ponies are herbivores.
>"And not only a gentleman, but a flatterer as well!"
>Her eyes roam appraisingly up and down your body.
>"I think I would like to get to know you better. Would you like that?"
>Can't ask for an easier set-up than that.
"Sure thing, lovely creature. What do you have in mind?"
>"I have a long-standing association with this club. What would you say to going somewhere a little more... private?"
"How about a little social lubrication to set the mood?"
>Lilith raises her eyebrows and licks her lips at your suggestion.
>"Your treat?"
"Naturally!"
>"Ooh, I like you a lot already!"
>You wait patiently as she orders herself a drink, and pay the bartender when it arrives.
>After a first sip, she gives you the glad eye.
>"Why don't you follow me sweetie? We can bring our drinks with us."
"Sounds like a good plan."
>Lilith leads you through the dancing, writhing bodies of various species thronging in the club, towards a spiral staircase the back of the building.
>The sweaty bodies incidentally rubbing up against you only serve to heighten your sense of excitement as you watch Lilith's swaying hips ahead of you.
>At the top of the stairs is a burly bouncer-type Diamond Dog, who grins happily at your approach.
>"Hey Eduardo, Anonymous and I are going to get better acquainted."
>"Sure thing Lilith! have fun!"
>The bouncer steps aside, wagging his tail as Lilith leads you into a darkened hallway.
>She pauses before a nondescript door and gives you a wink.
>"Membership hath its perks. Welcome to one of my favorites."
>She opens the door and gestures for you to go inside.
>You find yourself in a generous-sized room, lavishly furnished with a comfy couch, armchairs, and a large, tastefully-lit bed against one wall.
>Everything looks clean and sumptuous, and though you can still hear the throbbing club music through the walls, the room is tolerably quiet as well.
>Score!
>Lilith closes the door behind you and locks it, then turns to you with a hungry look.
>"Alright, Anon, show me what you've got!"
>Lilith gasps in surprise as you step up to her and sweep her up in your arms in a princess carry.
>"My, you really are full of surprises, aren't you?" she coos as she slowly wraps her fore hooves around your neck.
"Why yes, I am. Life's too short to settle for the ordinary."
>"I quite agree with your philosophy there, tiger," she purrs, pulling her face closer to yours.
>She pulls her mouth next to your ear and whispers, "And I think you'll find that I have a few surprises of my own!"
>She finishes by drawing her tongue up your cheek and flicking it against your earlobe.
>Taking that as an invitation to continue, your turn your head slightly and bring her lips to yours.
>Her lips have a delightful, honeyed taste about them, and very soon her tongue is prodding at you, demanding entrance to your mouth.
>You part your lips slightly, and your tongue barely has time to move before hers slithers in, roving aggressively until it finds and entwines with yours.
>A tongue wrestling match begins as she writhes against you and moans into your mouth.
>You discover that her tongue is surprisingly long and dextrous, as it handily subdues and squeezes yours.
>Carefully supporting her withers, you slide your other hand down to her rump and give her cheek a playful squeeze.
>She arches her back and squeals, giving your tongue enough breathing room to slip free and begin round two.
>Her horn glows, and you feel the buttons of your shirt being undone, one-by-one.
>Lilith twists in your arms, and you feel her hind legs slide around your midsection and clasp onto you with a gentle, but needful grip.
>By now your knees are beginning to tire a bit, so pausing only briefly to breathe, you carry her over to the couch and sit down.
>Lilith breaks the kiss, and brings her fore hooves into play to spread open your now completely unbuttoned shirt.
>You smile at her, knowing that you're in pretty good shape.
"Well, what do you think so far?"
>She bites her lip and gazes into your eyes.
>"Looks delicious!"
>And without any further preamble, she tucks her head in under yours and begins licking your throat.
>Her tongue is, in fact, surprisingly long, and you soon feel it roaming over your chest.
>You can feel a series of studs in it too.
>You transfer both your hands to her backside and knead her rump as she continues to roam over your chest in a sensuous concerto of lips, tongue, and teeth.
>Here a long, studded lick at your nipple.
>There a sensuous kiss in the hollow of your throat.
>And there a playful grazing of teeth at your side.
>Your hands work their way inward on her rump, coming at last to her steamy, moist sex.
>You push in a finger, and her pussy practically grabs it and sucks it in up to the knuckle.
>Lilith cries out, arching her back once more as her hips instinctively thrust her dripping opening onto your hand.
>She meets your eyes with an appreciative smile, licking her lips.
>"It's so nice to meet a gentleman who knows how to treat a lady!"
>Now it's your turn to gasp as she presses one of her fore hooves down onto your raging erection.
>"Oh my-y-y," she purrs appreciatively, "is that for li'l ol' me?"
"Oh baby, treat me right and I'm all yours tonight!"
>You catch a glimmer of something - a predatory glint in her eye.
>"Why yes you are."
>Her horn glows again and makes short work of your belt and fly.
>Lilith presses her lips to yours once more as her fore hooves push the fabric of your shirt over your shoulders and down.
>She returns her lips to your ear and suckles on your earlobe a bit before whispering, "What say we continue this on the bed?"
>You have no objections, and you kick your shoes off as Lilith hops down off of you, allowing you to stand.
>Your fingers, already slick with her juices, miss the velvety feel of her vagina, and you can hardly wait to explore that opening more fully.
>Lilith takes a big swallow from her glass, and once you regain your feet you find your glass and do likewise.
>You feel a tingle of magic around your waist, and your pants drop unceremoniously to the floor.
>"Ooooh, nice butt!" Lilith moans, followed by a playful giggle.
>Okay, she got you there, but the night is young yet.
>Kicking the fabric free of your legs, you turn to see that she has already hopped up on the bed.
>Lilith turns her head to look at you and wiggles her jiggly rump, giving you a come-hither look with her eyes.
>Her winking sex beckons you as well.
>Now wearing a predatory grin of your own, you put one knee on the edge of the bed and begin to crawl towards her.
>Lilith turns in place, bringing her face closer to yours, and licks her lips again, her eyes locked on yours.
>You reach out to her, fully intending to lay her down gently and get to work, when in a surprise move, Lilith hooks one her her fore hooves under your shoulder and flips you onto your back, immediately straddling you.
>You have little time for surprise as with a hungry growl she pounces on your torso.
>Her lips and tongue go to work on your throat once more, and then slowly descend your sternum, down your belly.
>You find your breath quickening as she reaches the waistband of your comfy boxers.
>Fixing her eyes on yours once more, her tongue emerges from her mouth and deftly slips under your waistband.
>Your dick throbs needfully as the tip of the warm muscle flicks against it, and then she playfully withdraws and nips the inside of your left thigh.
>You yelp at the unexpected sensation of her teeth so close to the most sensitive region of your body, and she rewards you with a teasing giggle and a long lick.
>"Patience, Anon," she purrs, transferring her attention and her tongue to your other thigh.
>Fine, if she's planning what you think she's planning, you can put up with a few games.
>After a few more licks, drawing moans from you as you close your eyes, you feel her breath, hot upon your rigid member.
>You open your eyes to see her smiling at you as she gently takes the waistband of your comfy boxers between her pearly white teeth.
>Obligingly, you straighten your legs for her, and with a single tug she pulls your boxers down to your knees, freeing your trouser snake from its cotton cage.
>"..."
>"Hmmmm."
"What?"
>She sighs, looking into your eyes with a slightly disappointed expression.
>"Well, you're not packing quite as much as I had hoped."
"..."
"Seriously?"
>Her smile returns, the look in her eyes melting your resentment like ice on a stove.
>"Well, that isn't to say there isn't plenty there to work with."
>And with that, her tongue slithers out of her mouth and coils around your member.
>Once, twice, and a third time her warm, slick, dextrous tongue loops around your shaft.
>From your vantage point, you can clearly see the glint of gold studs in her tongue at regular intervals, before a muscular massage along your shaft drives all other thoughts from your mind.
>She keeps her eyes fixed on your face, clearly enjoying your reactions as her tongue squirms and squeezes around your dick.
>You were hoping for something exotic when she promised surprises.
>This has exceeded your expectations.
>And just when you think it couldn't get any better she opens wide, confirming that you did indeed see fangs in her mouth.
>You feel a sudden thrill of fear as her pointed teeth descend over your dick.
>The fear is replaced by a powerful burst of pleasure as she seals her lips around the base of your cock and applies suction.
>You groan at the sensation of her hot mouth over your member as her tongue continues to work you into a near frenzy of ecstasy.
>It's so surprising, so powerful, that you find yourself unable to arrest your building orgasm and erupt into her mouth.
>If anything, the suction grows stronger, and you feel her throat muscles working as she greedily swallows every drop, her tongue milking you for more.
>The fireworks going off in your head are spectacular, but not enough to deter you from your main goal.
>You still want her other mouth as well.
>Your orgasm goes on for longer than you expect, making you slightly dizzy.
>As the crashing waves of your orgasm begin to subside, you open your eyes to find Lilith looking at you with something of a disappointed frown.
>Panting from your release, you try to lighten the mood.
"Wow, did the world move for you as well?"
>Her frown is replaced by a tight smile.
>"Well, well. You are full of surprises, aren't you?"
>You grin wolfishly at her, getting your breathing under control.
"Oh, yes. And might I say that you are as well?"
>Her smile returns to full radiance.
>"Oh, you have no idea. So, a tough one, hmmm? Well, I do love a good challenge."
>Her horn glows again, and your drinks become airborne and drift lazily over to the bed.
>"Care to wet your whistle before we continue?"
>Oh yes. Main target in sight.
"Don't mind if I do, thanks!"
>You grasp your glass as she downs the remains of her drink in one gulp.
>You follow suit, draining your glass and relishing the sensation as the cool liquid slides down your throat, settling into a warm and comfy position in your stomach.
>You begin to sit up, fully intending to return the favor, but then something catches your attention.
>Something that has been added.
>Well, three somethings, in fact.
>For one, there is now a pair of black, bat-like wings extending from Lilith's back, reaching almost to the edges of the bed.
>That in itself almost distracts your attention completely from the third thing.
>The third thing being a throbbing, rampantly erect horse cock jutting proudly from Lilith's nether regions.
>The main reason that grabs your attention so firmly is the fact that her jet black cock is slightly larger than your forearm.

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>What.
>The actual.
>Fuck.
>How in the hell had you missed seeing that thing before?
>Noticing your expression, her predatory smile grows, fully exposing the sharp fangs in her mouth.
>"I told you that I had some surprises of my own, didn't I?"
"Well, yeah... but..."
>She appears to find your evident confusion amusing, erupting into a silvery giggle.
>"Tell you what, I'll make you a deal, Anon."
>Lilith leans closer to you, with the result that her cock rests warmly on your chest now.
>You can feel the veins on its surface throbbing in time with her heartbeat.
"What kind of a deal?" 
>Your suspicions are now fully aroused at your partner's changes, and you're curious to know what you're getting yourself into.
>"Just do a teensy little favor for me, and I'll bring you to heights of ecstasy you've only dreamed of, and beyond."
>That's a hell of a reward to be promised, considering your experiences, and it almost overwhelms your suspicions.
"Depends on the favor."
>"You'll like it, trust me."
>Yeah.
>At this point you trust her about as much as you trusted the politicians back home.
"What's the favor?"
>Lilith smiles and adjusts her stance, bringing the tip of her cock up to the level of your chin.
>"Kiss it."
>You narrow your eyes.
>"I'm not going to turn you gay or anything like that, Anon. Just kiss it, and unbridled pleasures will be yours."
>Once again, that promise of unbridled pleasures chips away at your resolve.
>And is one little kiss such a big deal?
>One little kiss, for pleasures undreamed of.
>Okay, that seems like a fair exchange.
"Yeah, alright. Sure."
>Lilith smiles warmly at you and raises the tip of her cock just up to your lips.
>It twitches just under your nose, a heady, musky scent crowding into your senses.
>You don't want to think too much about it, and you want to get on to what she has promised you, so you close your eyes and pucker up.
>Leaning forward, you feel your lips come into contact with warm flesh, and you do the best you can, hoping she is pleased with the result.
>And there is yet another surprise there for you.
>Your eyes fly open as you pull back.
"Am I imagining things, or did it just kiss me ba--MMPH!"
>Lilith bucks her hips, driving the tip of her swollen cock into your mouth.
>She laughs at your surprised expression as you feel the warm, throbbing flare on the end of her cock fill your mouth.
>And something else as well.
>It feels like just what you would imagine having a horse cock thrust into your mouth would feel like.
>It also feels like something is sucking on your tongue.
>Equal parts of surprise, confusion, and revulsion clamor for attention in your head, as Lilith's laughter rings in your ears.
>Then she gently pulls back, withdrawing her throbbing flare from your mouth.
>It still has a pretty firm hold on your tongue, however.
>She withdraws further, exerting an almost uncomfortable pull on your tongue until, with a wet squelch, it pops free from the tip of her member.
>"Sorry," she titters, "I couldn't resist. You have such a pretty mouth, after all."
"HOLY HELL!!!"
>This prompts fresh laughter from your otherworldly partner.
>"Now you're starting to get the idea, Anon!"
>Your face flushed with embarrassment, you feel an unusual warmth creeping into your groin as your dick hardens once more, rising quickly to full attention.
>"Oooh, looks like somebody enjoyed it!"
>You throw her an accusatory glare.
"Now you're just messing with me."
>There is a lingering aftertaste in your mouth, but it's so sweet and pleasant that you are loath to spit it out.
>Lilith's expression softens, and the warm, inviting, sensual smile that captured your attention to begin with returns in full force.
>"You held up your end of the bargain in style, Anon. And now it's only fair that you receive your reward."
>She places her fore hooves on your shoulders, gently but insistently pushing you back down onto the soft surface of the bed.
>"I want to try something different with you," She says, carefully lowering herself down onto you.
>You feel her warm, twitching cock trapped between your bodies, as she leans forward and softly kisses your lips.
>"I haven't done this with anyone in a long time, but you seem to be just about the right size for it."
>She kisses you again, her tongue flicking out to graze along your chin.
>"I'm not like other girls, and I did promise you pleasures undreamed of."
>Lilith begins to slide down your body, once again decorating your chest and abdomen with little licks and kisses as she goes.
>The sensation is odd this time, coupled as it is with the sensation of her warm, swollen cock dragging down your torso as well.
>It's also leaving a slimy trail of pre-cum as it goes.
>Her shaft rubs along yours, prompting your member to twitch in anticipation.
"What are you--"
>"Ssshhhh, just relax Anon. You're going to love this."
>You feel her rigid cock drop heavily onto the bed between your legs, as she continues downward.
>"I've just gotta make sure you're ready to deliver, first."
>You gasp as you feel her take your balls into her mouth.
>Once again, her amazing tongue goes to work, gently rolling your scrotum around inside the warm, moist orifice behind her lips and teeth.
>You feel your member harden further as the slick warmth works its way into your testicles.
>You are determined to hold out longer this time, and since this is round two, you have a bit of an edge there.
>Lilith slowly pulls back, finally releasing you from her mouth.
>"All good to go, and still plenty left in the tank."
>She stands now, rising to her full height over you, her wings spreading themselves out once more.
>"Are you ready for your reward, Anon?"
"Oh, hell yes!"
>For some reason, this prompts her to giggle again.
>"That's the spirit!"
>The bed wobbles as she adjusts her stance, and you feel the tip of her cock, moist with pre-cum, come into contact with the space between your legs.
>Oh shit, she's going for the back door!
>But as you wonder how she thinks she's going to get at your anus from there, the tip of her cock drags up your scrotum, leaving a moist trail, then along the shaft of your penis.
>And then something engulfs the tip of your dick.
>You gasp as you see her thick, jet-black cock suck your member inside of itself, and a warm, slimy pressure pushes in on your dick from all sides.
>"Hold on Anon, I've got you now!"
>With a lewd slurping sound, her cock descends further, ingesting more of your dick.
>"Oh, yes!" Lilith cries, "You feel so good inside of my cock! It's been so long since I last used this technique!"
>Her bat-like wings give an involuntary flutter as a shudder of pleasure causes her fleshy form to shake and jiggle.
>Another wet slurp, and her thick, twitching cock pulls yours in all the way to the hilt.
>You feel the slimy, flaring tip squirming against your groin and balls as Lilith bucks her hips, pushing you towards the head of the bed.
>"Now we'll see just who thinks they're so tough!" She says, locking her eyes onto yours once more.
>They look different this time, almost glowing red.
>A rippling wave traverses the length of your shaft as further suction tugs at you, producing a squelching sound where the tip of her cock is pressed into your skin.
>You grit your teeth at the pleasurable sensation, determined to see this ride through to the very end.
>"You won't escape me again, Anon, give yourself to me!" 
>Lilith bucks her hips, quickly building into a steady rhythm as her cock continues to suckle yours, producing lewd, wet sucking sounds.
>Her cock feels like a living thing with a mind of its own.
>It feels like it's actually trying to eat you; the waves of pressure massaging you in a way you have never felt with any of your partners before.
>Lilith's wings begin to beat in time with her thrusts, raising an unearthly wind in the room.
>You grab onto the bedclothes beneath you and hold on for dear life as she continues to suckle and milk your member.
>Her cock begins to slide up and down your member, forcibly bumping you with each thrust.
>"Almost there!  Give yourself to me Anon!"
>The pleasure is almost overwhelming as you will yourself to hold out.
>"Can you feel it coming, Anon? Because I can!"
>A pressure begins to build inside you like you have never felt before, squeezing you to the very core of your being.
>You find your own hips involuntarily bucking, bringing this unusual coupling together over and over again with ever greater force.
>"Yes, yes, yes, yes!  Yes!  YESSSS!!!  YOU'RE MINE!!!" Lilith nearly screams as her whole body begins to shudder.
>With a final thrust of her hips, her cock engulfs yours completely, as a new warmth floods over your member, and her interior walls milk you with renewed vigor and intensity.
>The sensation shatters the dam of your will and your balls practically explode their contents through your shaft.
>Your whole body goes rigid, as your vision fills once more with fireworks, your toes curling into the bedspread as you come harder than you have ever come before.
>Her interior ripples over you, drawing you still deeper into her cock with a wet squelching sound.
>You feel yourself dwindling down as every nerve in your body lights up with pleasure.
>The cacophony of sensations overwhelms you and you pass out.

>======<

>You groggily come to some time later, your whole body still tingling from the afterglow.
>You become conscious of some cooling liquid splashed all over your groin.
>You will your eyes to open, and as you gradually focus on your surroundings, you see that you are still flat on your back.
>Lilith is perched on the edge of the bed, her back turned to you, listlessly smoking a cigarette.
>You don't see wings anywhere on her back.
>She's probably mad at you for blacking out on her at the climax of her performance.
>She definitely delivered on her promise though.
>The warm feelings swimming around inside you prompt you to reassure her.
"That was the most amazing, mind-blowing experience of my entire...life."
>Lilith's head swivels around to look at you.
>"Oh, you're awake," she says simply, as though she were observing that the sky is blue, or that water is wet.
>You can't help but chuckle.
"A very astute observation."
>Lilith stubs out her cigarette and turns to face you.
>"Yeah? Here's another one for you. You're not from around here, are you?"
"Heh-heh. No, I'm not. So what?"
>Lilith frowns at this.
>"Dammit, I should have known.  Why the hell didn't you tell me you were from another world?"
>You sit up and scoot towards her on the bed.
"What difference does it make?"
>Lilith turns her head away from you and heaves a weary sigh, then turns back to you.
>"Okay, full disclosure. You saw my wings, right?"
"Yes. Among other things."
>She gives you a wry smile for that one.
>"Okay. the truth is... I'm a succubus. When I led you up here, I had every intention of draining and consuming your soul."
"..."
"Fuckitty-what?!!"
>"Calm down, Anonymous. You're not from this world, so I can't eat your soul."
>Lilith pulls out another cigarette from somewhere and lights it.
>"Them's the rules," she tells you with a shrug.
"So you tried to eat my soul, but you can't because I'm from another world?"
>Lilith gives a dry, humorless bark of laughter.
>"He can be taught."
>She takes a long drag on her cigarette.
>"All that high-energy fooling around, and I'm STILL hungry!" she pouts.
>For some reason you find this funny, and she scowls at you for your uncharitable laughter.
>As your laughter subsides, she shrugs again.
>"Well, it's not as though I lack for prey around here. It's just... I thought I'd get to try something new and different, something exotic."
>You well understand that feeling, and you reach out to gently stroke her back.
>She shivers ever so slightly at your touch, taking another drag on her cigarette.
>Then she turns to you, that warm, seductive smile once more creasing her face.
>"Well, on one level you didn't disappoint. I actually had fun with you, and I don't often get a chance to say that to my prey."
>That word, "prey", causes you to swallow nervously.
>"So I'm willing to forgive you for leaving me hungry, if you're willing to forgive me for trying to eat your soul."
>A moment passes.
"Yeah, that seems fair."
>Lilith's grin widens, giving you one more glimpse of the sharp fangs that adorn her smile.
>"Thank you, Anonymous" she says with benign sincerity.
>Despite the events of the past hour (or more, since you have no idea how long you were out), you are perfectly prepared to accept her sincerity at face value.
>She locks her eyes onto yours, her smile making your heart skip a beat.
>"Listen, um... as I said, you're a lot of fun, more fun than I've had in ages, so how about this."
>She leans over and gives you a peck on the cheek, then whispers into your ear.
>"If you're ever in the mood again for some really wild, far out sex, just give me a call, hmmm?" she purrs.
>Your eyes widen as your heart skips another beat.
>"I promise I won't try to eat you again."
>You can't help but laugh as you wrap your arms around her, drawing her warm, soft body into contact with yours.
>You look her in the eyes, and give her a quick peck on the nose.
"So, I'll see you again then, shall I?"
>Her smile returns in full force.
>"Oh yes, absolutely!" She says, her eyes brightening.
>You reward her with another hug.
>"After all, you still owe me dinner."
>Before you can ask what she means by that, she presses her lips to yours in a passionate kiss, her tongue invading to dance one last time with yours.
>And then she vanishes into thin air, the sound of her laughter ringing in her wake.