Fun fact, I was too focused on reading that I didn't notice the garbage truck that was making a racket outside of my house for four minutes, which of course bled through to the reading. Environment-1, Me-0. In a more on task light, I tried reading a bit slower that usual, since I have a tendency to speak fast sometimes, which can garble what I'm saying. Hopefully it pays off. 

Read the fanfic too. Make voices in your head for the characters, I already know I can't mimic the voices I thought up. Link here: http://www.equestriadaily.com/2011/04/story-fallout-equestria.html

EDIT: Nothing big. Went back and changed the title once I realized that I had the same chapter title as chapter three. Dunno how I did that.