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| lordanubis #1488816 1 week ago |
Nice. You don't often read about fluffies in other countries. |
| Feral_Socks #1488822 1 week ago |
This was terribly anticlimactic, in my opinion. The fluffy ponies were just kind of a useless distraction until the milk scene, and that was pretty dull. |
| Yorec #1488828 1 week ago |
This was very nice. I would actually like to see more of this pilgrim and his pilgrimage through Japan, interacting with fluffy ponies along the way. |
| Splinter17 #1488837 1 week ago |
Fairly interesting and original idea. 4/5 |
| Anonymous #1488845 1 week ago |
>Naruto
Stopped reading there. And although I'm aware the Japan has several towns with this name, choosing it for a fic was a bad idea |
| Splinter17 #1488850 1 week ago |
>getting butthurt over Naruto
>2012 >costanza.jpg |
| Anonymous #1488858 1 week ago |
>butthurt
>/b/speak >mentioning of current year Go back to watching your shit, wiaboo |
| FarmZombie #1488875 1 week ago |
I recognize that the focus of the story was more on the pilgrim and not on the fluffies. My only excuse is: Meh. It's what I felt like writing. Next story will have more fluffies.
Also, I've been to Naruto. It's a lovely town with a famous university and surprisingly few ninjas. |
| Anonymous #1488877 1 week ago |
They need to pay the yakuza for getting rid of the fluffy ponies. All the fluffy ponies there would be exterminated in less than a week, since they waddle slowly and couldn't hide with their pastel-like fluff even if their life depended upon it, which happens extremely often. |
| Anonymous #1488878 1 week ago |
>It's a lovely town with a famous university and surprisingly few ninjas.
That makes sense now, thanks |
| Ginger_Fig #1488890 1 week ago |
This makes me want to quit my job and become a pilgrim.
Well...everything except the fluffy pony part. That and I think I'd rather end my day with a few Sapporo's. |
| lordanubis #1488896 1 week ago |
@Ginger ever had a Sake Bomb? Good shit right there. Kanpai! |
| Anonymous #1488897 1 week ago |
Good story. Always fascinating to see how other cultures might deal with fluffy ponies. |
| Danuis #1488926 1 week ago |
Japan would act very unique to fluffies.
..Now I'm wondering about Israel or India. |
| Anonymous #1488931 1 week ago |
>have a story or piece of art making the fluffy pony miserable in some way
>Cyrus doesn't give it a fair critique and call it shit and you wonder why people DISLIKE you, not HATE you. From your latest story though and you headcannon I guess it won't be long until you just have fluffy ponies be little mary sues. |
| Saint_Braeburn #1488948 1 week ago |
I agree with Feral. Great set up. Anti-Climatic ending. Really expected a better pay-off
@Anon931 Mary Stu = I don't like this character @Anon858 Weaboo is /b/ speak |
| Anonymous #1488955 1 week ago |
Braeburn, from his latest fic I didn't see him run into many internal conflicts, with the girlfriend dead I can only guess it's smooth sailing from there. |
| Anonymous #1488961 1 week ago |
>Cyrus
Where? |
| Danuis #1488963 1 week ago |
@955
yep. Damn cyrus and this recent lovefag activity. |
| Anonymous #1488967 1 week ago |
@Saint_Braeburn
>Weaboo is /b/ speak Then things must be even worse than I imagined |
| Cyrus #1488990 1 week ago |
Cyrus here (in case if I'm logged out)
@1488955 There will be internal conflict and last-minute addition of killing GF shall be redacted. >smooth sailing Not exactly |
| RaveTampon #1489000 1 week ago |
Great to read something that is interesting for once. |
| Anonymous #1489005 1 week ago |
@Cyrus
In that case maybe you can make her more of an antagonist than a useless character who acted like a bitch for the sake of acting like a bitch. After she died I just assumed you were going to make it to where the guy deposed of her body, no one knew she died or cared, and Squiggly just lived the rest of his life with him being pampered and getting his daily suck off from the foals. |
| Anonymous #1489008 1 week ago |
Hey Cyrus, what happened to your story anyway? Can't find it. |
| Anonymous #1489025 1 week ago |
>>197764 Found your story Cyrus, too bad no one cared enough to restore the tags though. |
| Anonymous #1489044 1 week ago |
My personal theory is that they DO speak other languages - babytalk in whatever language the country they were born in speaks.
Pity most of the writers never bother with it. It could actually make things interesting. |
| Anonymous #1489055 1 week ago |
Cyrus here
@1489005 That's what I'll do probably. Even is she died, she was cheating on him. Won't spoiler anymore though @1489025 @1489008 Thanks for the note - gonna fix the tags |
| PhilSrobeighn #1489296 1 week ago |
That was incredible. |
| Tabula_Rojo #1489933 1 week ago |
"Hewwo Hoomin! I mama fluff!"-best part, not sure why
yeah learning about Japanese Pilgrims was the most interesting part and yes, Fluffy Mamas should be harvested for their milk and sold as an energy drink that's fucking brilliant |
| Danuis #1491093 6 days ago |
All happy mother fluffs must now say
"Hewwo Hoomin! I mama fluff!" when approached for the first time by a human. ITS JUST TO CANON BY ITSELF. |
| Anonymous #1491598 6 days ago |
if you don't like it you are jelly
this is excellent, author clearly knows his shit |