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| nasir6r #1485560 1 week ago |
My first attempt at hugbox |
| Danuis #1485583 1 week ago |
I genuinely want Oreo to live a good life.
But still,can a prequel be made,telling how Oreo got there? |
| lordanubis #1485586 1 week ago |
A very sweet first attempt. It's nice that you focus on the people, and the fluffy is more of a vehicle for the story, rather than the main focus.
But you don't need to make the text that big. 14 point font is more than enough. 800-1300 pixels wide, however long you need it to be, and 14 point font make for a readable fluffy story. I wouldn't mind reading more hugbox from you. |
| nasir6r #1485599 1 week ago |
@danuis
I was going to write a prequel. Was going to name it 'Sick Fuck' for lulz. @lordanubis Ah, yeah, well, I'd rather the font me too big than too small. Still smaller than Neckbeard's giant stories, though. I'll try something a little smaller next time. |
| Danuis #1485618 1 week ago |
@nasir6r go for it! |
| deathproofpony #1485710 1 week ago |
Cute story... the font was just a little big. |
| Feral_Socks #1485737 1 week ago |
How lovely! |
| Anonymous #1485748 1 week ago |
And then Cousin Melvin came one day and curb stomped poor little Oreo into street Pizza. Saying with a smug look that he saved you some pest control and a clean billing. Nobody likes Cousin Melvin. |
| Anonymous #1485809 1 week ago |
Story is good, except for:
>referring to filly as "it" @1485748 >"hurr-durr" Please, repeat what you just said, but with your mouth clear |
| sigh #1485885 1 week ago |
While a good Fluffy dies story is always entertaining, some of the best are those that break free from that pattern and make stories that actually make us have feelings without resorting to cheap tricks like having cancer. |
| Tabula_Rojo #1485951 1 week ago |
you certainly broke the hugbox world record here
but considering your the author of a story about what are basically Nazi fluffies I will not hold it against you |
| Anonymous #1485994 1 week ago |
Am I the only one who thinks that this story plays in Britain? It sounds like England. I like England :3
Also, this is an adorable story. Good job. |
| Ferrotter #1486049 1 week ago |
Oreo is loved, she makes me happy. |
| Cyrus #1486165 1 week ago |
@1485994
I kinda assume Nasir is British too |
| Anonymous #1486226 1 week ago |
I loved this story. |
| Staccato_ #1486386 1 week ago |
Good job! I like hugbox stories when they're done tastefully and actually have a meaning. |
| Splinter17 #1486571 1 week ago |
Didn't make this black shriveled heart feel things, but it was okay. liked the focus on the humans. 3.5/5 |
| Anonymous #1486815 1 week ago |
Hey, pretty damn good story |
| PhilSrobeighn #1486907 1 week ago |
Good work. |
| Anonymous #1487047 1 week ago |
I liked this story - it's good to see rescue stories amidst the sea of teenage abuse fantasies.
But I have to say, I really wish people would STOP saying "NO SMEWW PWETTY" when a fluffy smells something bad. It's getting EXTREMELY irritating to see that and other buzzwords shoved into every single story, and sometimes it even throws off how the writer has them talking before, sounding nothing like the way they speak in the rest of the story. There IS more than one way to say something smells bad, you know - with fewer words, even! >"Stinky!" >"Smell bad!" >"No like smell!" >"Poopoo smell!" >"Eww!" |