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| Wilhelm_II_Kaiser #1478804 2 weeks ago |
I see.
As a brit I must say, a Cockney? KILL THE VERMIN, KILL IT WITH FIRE. Fluffy > Cockney |
| Dramatic_spoon #1478813 2 weeks ago |
>Short Ratty Man named Spoon.
....coincidence? |
| The_Mungoman #1478814 2 weeks ago |
@Wilhelm I already layed out the story in my head.
You'll see what happens. |
| Anonymous #1478816 2 weeks ago |
Interesting... This sound like a Monk mystery. |
| Feral_Socks #1479073 2 weeks ago |
To be honest, I skipped a lot of Spoon's dialogue. It was kind of a pain in the ass to read. Other than that, I'm interested to see the continuation. |
| The_Mungoman #1479080 2 weeks ago |
^
I kinda feared that might be the case. I'll try to make the fic less dialogue-heavy. |
| sigh #1479209 1 week ago |
I'll be very disappointed if there's no hilarious shenanigans that come as a result of this. |
| Tabula_Rojo #1479994 1 week ago |
reminded of MouseTrap for some reason |
| Anonymous #1482598 1 week ago |
A pair of petty crooks trying to find their treasure, and their only clue is an entire room fulla fluffy ponies.
This will be entertaining....... |
| Anonymous #1482620 1 week ago |
Fluffytard dialogue should be restricted to only a few key sentences. It's better to just write about what a fluffy pony says/babbles/mewls/coos indirectly. |
| Anonymous #1487078 1 week ago |
^But if we didn't have monologues -- oh, excuse me, "but if da fwuffies didn't hawve mownowogues, how cwuould we mawke shuuuwe ouw gweentewks stwowees wewe wong enough?" |