
| Wilhelm_II_Kaiser #1474135 2 weeks ago |
Swag. |
| PhilSrobeighn #1474178 2 weeks ago |
Pregasus. |
| PanzerKunst #1474208 2 weeks ago |
Oh look, more people who don't understand how the fuck evolution works. If you're gonna make pseudo-scientific pretenses for your torture porn, at least make it correct.
Also, you can tell that these are all written by teenage boys. Because there's no way in hell anything could confuse labor with going poop. They are in totally different areas and feel nothing alike. Yeah, we get it. You guys have a scat fetish. But everytime a pregnant dam going into labor says "big poopsies", it just makes the author sound more retarded than the fictional fluffies he feels superior to. |
| sigh #1474218 2 weeks ago |
Relatively decent story but the guy who made this really needs to learn how to greentext properly, I see at least a dozen areas where he either didn't hit the return key to make the arrow go to the next line, or he made a new line much too early and now it's just three or so words for one arrow. |
| sigh #1474227 2 weeks ago |
Panzer I think you underestimate how stupid fluffies are. |
| PanzerKunst #1474256 2 weeks ago |
No, I don't. Most often, it's a fluffies intelligence and curiosity that gets it in trouble. They have just enough rope to hang themselves, but not enough to really think anything through. |
| sigh #1474310 2 weeks ago |
There's a difference between situational stupidity and biological stupidity, or do you think that the girls who think they're dying the first time they have their period have a blood fetish or something? |
| Job_for_a_Cowpony #1474391 2 weeks ago |
Agreeing with sigh here. Poop confused with birth has been canon in the fluffy universe for a very long time now.
Besides, IMHO, fluffies do not deserve the slightest shed of respect because they are created for that purpose. I mean to say that they were created to discharge hate in a way that it could be relieved as unfiltered , satisfyingly unreal violence. TL;DR: Mad because of this = Mad because someone punches a sandbag |
| Tabula_Rojo #1474431 2 weeks ago |
the birth/poop thing is just funny really, that's why I support it |
| Fillialcacophony #1474913 2 weeks ago |
i saw an article on wikipedia about the bird mentioned and how mothers will actively kill another's offspring to claim its nest and the fathers will respond with indifference seeing a mate as a mate... i'm not claiming to be smart here, i'm simply stating that i wrote this yesterday afternoon and whipped it out without much though/work/talent behind it, might try some others though....
my bad about the greentext, first time trying it also here is the pic that goes with it: ponibooru.413chan.net/post/view/195883 |
| fluff474 #1475029 2 weeks ago |
@913: The bird thing came off as more of a red herring. Fluffy ponies as selfish spoiled toddlers has spread so widely that this comes off as normal fluffy behavior. |
| Anonymous #1475038 2 weeks ago |
Reached the part where sucker kills the dam. Fuck you, Fillialcacophony, this is freaking ridiculous. |
| Anonymous #1475117 2 weeks ago |
Grammar is horrible, wording too. Even mwike can into English better than cacophony |
| Fillialcacophony #1475176 2 weeks ago |
Not thrilled with the 'foal talk'
Might require some effort and actual planning next time |
| fluff474 #1475183 2 weeks ago |
I'm mainly against the babies having a full vocabulary from birth. |
| PandaSennin #1475940 2 weeks ago |
Foals talking makes no sense, just like the pregnant dam killing the other baby fluffies. Otherwise not too bad but still far from decent. |
| Ol_Dirty #1478303 2 weeks ago |
Tabula_Rojo gets it.
Fluffy pony stories are supposed to be funny, as opposed to scientifically accurate. |