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| PandaSennin #1472836 2 weeks ago |
Whoa...sad but genuine. Great work. |
| Ferrotter #1472837 2 weeks ago |
A good story. Reminiscent of something Ginger Fig would write. |
| Giant_Neckbeard #1472846 2 weeks ago |
Dammit .... dust in my eyes. |
| Cyrus #1472892 2 weeks ago |
Last two paragraphs look like they were pulled out of ass |
| Tabula_Rojo #1472924 2 weeks ago |
sad story is sad, mission acomplished |
| Wilhelm_II_Kaiser #1472968 2 weeks ago |
...I see. |
| Ol_Dirty #1473139 2 weeks ago |
">The new home is only a few hundred meters away from their old home, but from a fluffy pony's perspective it could be thousands of kilometers
>And the journey claims the live of several fluffies" ^More stories with lines like these, please. |
| Anonymous #1473297 2 weeks ago |
8/10 |
| PandaSennin #1473379 2 weeks ago |
@Cyrus
How then? |
| Anonymous #1473385 2 weeks ago |
Very good.
Also: Cyrus should commit suicide. |
| Anonymous #1473715 2 weeks ago |
VERY good story - no retarded sci-fi subplots about mad scientists, cyborgs or brain transplants, no stupid pop culture references or memes (well, except fuck.jpg), just pure fluffy misery. Yes, more like this, please. +1 |
| Feral_Socks #1473894 2 weeks ago |
Well done, sir. |
| Ironweaver #1474106 2 weeks ago |
I'm no nutritionist, but if the milk didn't have any nutrients, then wouldn't it look at least somewhat different?
Oh, and I don't think I've ever hated a smarty friend as much as this one. |
| Cyrus #1475611 2 weeks ago |
@PandaSennin
Ok, let me start: >"you killed your babies" Nice way to bring news to grieving mother, especially since she had no intention of doing it >the herd was right: she kills her babies She doesn't, not willingly at least >she is sobbing >kill her Without even trying to console her and possibly cheer her up to the point where she would like to live Also, why she didn't tell them that stallion had sex with her? The best possible resolution was to put her in the cage with non-pregnant mares at the first place and let someone adopt her |
| fluff474 #1477126 2 weeks ago |
>perhaps she could be neutered
>she >neutered @139: Agreed. The fight scene in http://pastebin.com/V77uHCXf was also sort of like that. @106: Agreed on the milk. I know not everything can be 100% medically accurate, but it does take you out of things when it's that blatantly contrived. @611: Underpaid pound workers aren't angels, film at 11. |
| Anonymous #1478645 2 weeks ago |
Damn that was heavy. Excellent job, outstanding |
| Anonymous #1482405 1 week ago |
You don't neuter females - it's called "spaying."
Also, "You killed your own babies," and "we had to put them to sleep because they were so badly injured by your milk," aren't exactly the sorts of things you should say to a grieving mother. Even if she IS as smart as a brick, she didn't intend to do it - and the way those are phrased makes it sound like she did. |