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| lordanubis #1469119 2 weeks ago |
I honestly don't set out to write stories this long. I just start writing the story, and it ends up taking this long to tell it.
How many stories are there about runts being rejected? Tons How many stories are there about runts surviving? Not enough. |
| Anonymous #1469177 2 weeks ago |
I liked it. |
| Anonymous #1469195 2 weeks ago |
Crap, can't find the part 1. |
| Anonymous #1469197 2 weeks ago |
Scratch that here it is. >>192680 |
| Kajet #1469221 2 weeks ago |
Oh cool, I enjoyed the other two stories in this series, and this one is just as good. I'm glad you're continuing the story. |
| Ginger_Fig #1469229 2 weeks ago |
Hmmm; you gave a good explanation for Ezekiel understanding a lot, but the mare seems a bit too smart as well.
Either way...well done. |
| Danuis #1469241 2 weeks ago |
> After arguing with Ezekiel for a minute you nudge him into the tub.
> He falls in with a heart breaking yell. > SHIT. > Save Ezekiel? |
| sigh #1469260 2 weeks ago |
Pretty cool. |
| Evil_overlord #1469350 2 weeks ago |
really nice series, hope the next part will be out soon |
| lordanubis #1469423 2 weeks ago |
@Evil
I know what I'm going to write about next in this story, but I can't say when it will be out. @Ginger How so? @Danuis >Give Ezekiel a bath. >He resists the entire time. >First time you've ever heard a fluffy swear before. >By the end, his fluff is completely soaked and dripping. >Ezekiel looks up at you indignantly. >"Change mind. You bad hooman, gif yukky bafs." >"Look on the bright side, Zeke. Now you smell pillowy fresh!" >"Piwwow deze fwuffy nuts, hooman." |
| Ginger_Fig #1469554 2 weeks ago |
^ The mother has an epiphany, and realizes she has acted wrongly. That level of logic just seems a little too complicated for a fluffy pony.
I do not dispute the idea that changing a foal's smell would change the mother's reaction to it, but I think her reaction would be a whole lot simpler...just accepting the foal as if it had always been there. |
| Anonymous #1469556 2 weeks ago |
-9001/10
>Brutalizing a mother just for following instinct would be awful. Becausing unrustling one's jimming by raping wymenz and murdering other guys who challenge your dominance in the workplace should both go completely unpunished, amirite? BECAUSE INSTINCT EXCUSES ALL SINS, AMIRITE?! Fluffy Ponies are toys with the intelligence of people (albeit really stupid people) and they should be punished as such. Also, pets are disciplined even when they follow their instincts, so not doing it to fluffy ponies is downright stupid. Broccoli was a much better rejection correction story. This was nothing more than hugboring luvfaggotry. |
| Ol_Dirty #1469589 2 weeks ago |
I'm getting tired of runt stories.
Don't get me wrong, this isn't badly written or anything, there's just too many of these. Whatever happened to fluffsplosion? |
| andrewmyles #1469600 2 weeks ago |
^Well, nothing happened. Wasn't Boomer born with fluffsplosion?
That was a great chapter, full of luv and actually pretty smart ideas for a fluffy story. |
| Ol_Dirty #1469632 2 weeks ago |
^I must've missed that story.
Good to know I'm not the only one who still likes the idea of fluffsplosion. |
| Anonymous #1469696 2 weeks ago |
Haven't read yet, but something tells me that this is yet another piece of bipolar faggotry |
| Anonymous #1469733 2 weeks ago |
-10/10
>fluffsplosion mention >calling the fluffy with known gender "it" >fluffies able to pronounce "r" >bipolar faggotry (a bit less than in previous one, but still too much) >dam has more than two teats >runt rejection >not punishing mother for that >implying that feral fluffies understand the word "runt" <sigh> The only fics shittier than this one belong to Giant_Neckbeard and our beloved abusefags  |
| The_Mungoman #1469740 2 weeks ago |
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| lordanubis #1469753 2 weeks ago |
@Ginger
She thought she had made a mistake in identifying the baby as a runt. She isn't aware the owner masked the scent. But I see what you mean. @Anon/Cyrus |
| Anonymous #1469765 2 weeks ago |
What is this? A story where the human not only doesn't kill the foals for his own amusement, but he instead saves them from a certain death? I thought we all were a bunch of bloodthirsty sickos. |
| lordanubis #1469769 2 weeks ago |
Whoops wrong insert code
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| Cyrus #1469843 2 weeks ago |
Just got back home, had a goddamn busy day.
15 minutes of reading, 5 minutes of fridge thinking and I pretty much agree with @1469556 and @1469733 (this one got the score fucked up though: text says -10/10, pic says 0/10) Less Mary Sue crap, but still a lot of mishaps @1469753 Picture is not loading @1469765 Nah. |
| Cyrus #1469847 2 weeks ago |
Forgot to add my 25 cents: masking scent will wear off soon enough, leaving foal smelling like "bad babbeh" |
| Giant_Neckbeard #1470002 2 weeks ago |
Actually, I wonder about that.
Don't forget that the Runt will have had a lot of contact with the mother and the other foals as well, which would help to 'mask' the scent. The actual 'scent' of the Runt is something of a mystery, possibly a bitter scent judging by the Dam's behaviour. It's also interesting that the Runt is always the last Foal to come out, possibly meaning that like Dog and Cat litters, the last Pup/Kitten/Foal is the one that had the weakest connection to the placenta, hence the smaller size due to deprivation of nutrients during gestation. Also, don't forget that outside, the 'odor eater' will be unlikely to get washed off, and the gradual 'decay' of the fake smell will be slow to disappear. That lack of size could also have a chemical effect, causing the baby to smell 'off' somehow. I've seen a Dog accept her runt before happily, but then she was the dumbest, happiest animal I've ever seen, spoiled absolutely rotten with bones and toys and played with constantly. Golden Retrievers are the Derpy Hooves of the Dog World, I am positive. Once eating regularly, the Runt is likely to grow, and while unlikely to be as big as it's siblings, will still likely be an 'average' Fluffy in the end. It might smell 'strange' during the first few days, but once it gets a belly full of milk and starts to get the mother's anti-bodies running through it's system, the Foal is likely to go to one of two ends. End 1: Foal grows up to be a slightly-smaller-than-average Fluffy Pony. End 2: The Foal dies due to under-developed organs not working as intended. |
| Cyrus #1470060 2 weeks ago |
>Runt will have had a lot of contact with the mother and the other foals as well, which would help to 'mask' the scent.
Plausible. Hard to tell for sure >odor eater' will be unlikely to get washed off, and the gradual 'decay' of the fake smell will be slow to disappear. If fluffies continue hugging or mother will decide to lick foals, scent will come off sooner than expected Still, being intolerant douchebag I am (or just too "eye for an eye" person), I would have impaled the dam with screwdriver (I wonder if anyone gets the reference) |
| Anonymous #1470099 2 weeks ago |
Good story, please continue it |
| cthulhlu #1470347 2 weeks ago |
i like this series, but i think that runt is going to have a hard life, once the scent washes off the fluffies will (in my cannon at least) go back to thinking its a bad baby and reject it, wich will probably lead to it dying.
wich is sad, but nature is a huge bitch.. |
| lordanubis #1470360 2 weeks ago |
There's a lot of debate regarding this, so I'm going to tell you all now: the owner resprays the baby every week or so until it reaches maturity. I didn't mention it in the story because I was going to mention it in later installments. |
| Cyrus #1470488 2 weeks ago |
^ Will you at least ATTEMPT to make them with less flaws? |
| The_Mungoman #1470573 2 weeks ago |
@Cyrus Will you at least ATTEMPT to like something?
All I hear of you is "BLA BLA BLA HATE THIS BLA BLA BLA HATE THAT." Just... try to say something positive. Just once. |
| Cyrus #1470585 2 weeks ago |
^ But I do. I love "on the rocks" fic, "fluffy farm" too |
| Cyrus #1470592 2 weeks ago |
I plan on finishing the second chapter of my foal fic tomorrow. You are more than welcome to nitpick on it |
| Dramatic_spoon #1491687 6 days ago |
@Giant_Neckbeard
>Golden Retrievers are the Derpy Hooves of the Dog World, I am positive. ....that explains alot about my Dog. |