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| Giant_Neckbeard #1459282 3 weeks ago |
....... Curse you. Funny and Oh-So-Wrong, at the same time. |
| Cyrus #1459294 3 weeks ago |
Forgot to say: any suggestions and corrections (grammar and otherwise) are welcome
@1459282 I was going for both. The story isn't finished yet |
| Anonymous #1459301 3 weeks ago |
So you're the one who is pestering the fluffy pony-general thread with your shitty foalcon-fluffy pony story. |
| Cyrus #1459319 3 weeks ago |
@301
i take it you are abusefag? |
| Anonymous #1459326 3 weeks ago |
Behold the picture that inspired OP to make this story
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| Cyrus #1459333 3 weeks ago |
@301
Just as a note: by "any suggestions" I meant "constructive criticism", not "lol, your story is shit" remarks I should probably be say it more clear next time |
| Cyrus #1459334 3 weeks ago |
@1459326
Shitty edit is shitty, but yes, that was the inspiration |
| Anonymous #1459341 3 weeks ago |
Abuse-edits are the best, because they are inspirational. |
| Cyrus #1459358 3 weeks ago |
@1459341
This isn't much of an abuse, per se. Just a bad mspaint edit |
| Anonymous #1459372 3 weeks ago |
^
>implying using microsoft pain isn't abuse |
| Cyrus #1459393 3 weeks ago |
^ it pretty is, just not a hardcore one
btw, mspaint is a good thing for a quick-crop of an image, if you don't have anything else installed on your pc right now |
| Cyrus #1459398 3 weeks ago |
^ it pretty mush is |
| Pest_Control #1459428 3 weeks ago |
Cool story bro (No sarcasm)
Pretty wrong about that one part (you know the one) Yet I find it completely believable because there are Fluffies involved...and it actually sounds useful when surviving...for animals. |
| Anonymous #1459444 3 weeks ago |
I bask in the knowledge that Cyrus and his story is my creation. |
| Anonymous #1459495 3 weeks ago |
Lol cum guzzlers. |
| Anonymous #1459762 3 weeks ago |
Tags:
/mlp/ 4chan cyrus_is_buttmad_lol cyrus_spams_faggot_pictures Fellatio fluffy_dam fluffy_pony fluffy_pony_abuse fluffy_pony_foals foalcon ginger_slut Squiggly_the_stallion_mother_chapter_1 |
| PhilSrobeighn #1460057 3 weeks ago |
I'm going to vom.
Which I think was the intention, so well done. |
| Anonymous #1460076 3 weeks ago |
ginger_slut?
Srsly though, awesome story. A fluffy stallion raising babies by feeding them a steady diet of cum has yet to be done. Originality ftw. As for constructive criticism: When the foals grow enough to be able to eat solid food and no longer want to make Squiggly feel the good feel, I'm hoping he'll just start raping 'em to get his jollies off. Because nothing ruins a good story like an uneventful and pointless hugboring ending, especially when the OC has a chance to ascend to magnificent bastardom instead. |
| lordanubis #1460137 3 weeks ago |
That's an unsettling read, but not bad for a first fic. I'm interested to see where you go with it. |
| Anonymous #1460385 3 weeks ago |
It's very cute. Please continue writing the story. |
| Anonymous #1460484 3 weeks ago |
fluffy pony pedo . . . . |
| Anonymous #1461230 3 weeks ago |
I feel so cool. I was the guy who suggested someone make this story. You're awesome Cyrus. Keep up the good work. |
| Anonymous #1461268 3 weeks ago |
You're a dork. Cyrus made that story because he was inspired by the edit of charcoal's picture that 4chan made.
All of ponibooru is just a 4chan-lite dumpster. |
| Anonymous #1463987 2 weeks ago |
/r/ the story be continued |
| Cyrus #1470463 2 weeks ago |
Sorry for being such a slowpoke - gonna continue writing right now |
| Cyrus #1472674 2 weeks ago |
Sorry for the delay - trying to integrate some ideas, which makes me rewrite the initial parts a bit |
| Anonymous #1473481 2 weeks ago |
Im pretty sure you cant live on semen . . . |