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| lordanubis #1458461 3 weeks ago |
Holy balls, did I really just write all that? Jesus.
This was the story I had originally had in mind when I wrote The Coward (http://www.ponibooru.org/post/view/177463). That story was going to be a flashback, while this was the main story. Aren't you glad I separated them? Read it at my Pastebin if this motherfucker of a picture refuses to load. Also, I'm open to suggestions for naming the smarty friend. |
| deathproofpony #1458478 3 weeks ago |
Very good, Anubis. A real nailbiter! |
| Anonymous #1458486 3 weeks ago |
Despite being hugbox, I like it, because it takes most facts about fluffy ponies right, and has a very responsible smarty friend, like that other smarty friend in the lone wolf harley rider story.
Good job, lordanubis. Well done. |
| Anonymous #1458493 3 weeks ago |
Dem fluffies should be glad that humans already killed off most critters for them. If there were more bears, foxes, ravens, owls, hakws, wolves and rats around, they wouldn't even get near that protag.
It's a good one, OP. |
| Anonymous #1458501 3 weeks ago |
Before the abuselovers start their endless "mourning of wasted material", sir, let me tell you that this is pretty much top class work. I must be honest, and say that I was pretty much expecting the ending, but still I loved the stuff from start to end.
Keep on the good work. |
| Anonymous #1458510 3 weeks ago |
Well that was...interesting... |
| Ferrotter #1458561 3 weeks ago |
That was very good. |
| PanzerKunst #1458565 3 weeks ago |
Smarty friend is a credit to his race. |
| Anonymous #1458710 3 weeks ago |
ITT:Bunch of soft people without a working knowledge of having a house in the woods/field, that would fail miserably living outside an apartment by his own.
Also 
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| Anonymous #1458724 3 weeks ago |
I prefer fluffy ponies suffering and dying. That said, this unexpected twist was interesting. It's like DPP said, it was a real nailbiter. |
| Anonymous #1458750 3 weeks ago |
Spamanon just spamming for the heck of it. It doesn't even have to be fluffy pony abuse anymore. |
| Wasteland_Filly #1458804 3 weeks ago |
I...Pardon..
There must something in my eyes.. Great story, my good sir... Great story.. |
| The_Mungoman #1458807 3 weeks ago |
Excuse me whilst I cry. ;___; |
| Giant_Neckbeard #1458869 3 weeks ago |
*claps* Well played, sir, well play. |
| Anonymous #1459081 3 weeks ago |
@lordanubis
Being a hugboxer, I agree with >1458710: lordanubis, you are frigging idiot. Just as a note: >1458710 wasn't me. Glad to know that there are other people hating such hypocritical stories  |
| Anonymous #1459099 3 weeks ago |
Damn good one. Also, while the "OP is a faggot lol" pictures are kinda funny, could you make them a bit smaller? |
| Anonymous #1459112 3 weeks ago |
^ We probably could, but OP's humiliation wouldn't be as great |
| Anonymous #1459116 3 weeks ago |
1459099, have you ever heard of adblock? |
| doomboy536 #1459147 3 weeks ago |
I love this. Hugbox ftw. |
| PanzerKunst #1459899 3 weeks ago |
@ 1458710
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| Anonymous #1460055 3 weeks ago |
jimmy rustler has an alternate ending up on his pastebin
much better than this hugboring shit |
| PhilSrobeighn #1460068 3 weeks ago |
This was a beautiful story. |
| lordanubis #1460194 3 weeks ago |
@122 Humiliation? You must be new here. Abusefags can hate me all they want, I don't care.
@055 Well, I'm flattered someone cared enough to write an alternate ending. Still looking for suggestions for the smarty friend's name. Preferably something symbolic as it relates to his imprisonment and self-sacrifice. |
| PanzerKunst #1460222 3 weeks ago |
How does Prometheus sound, lordanubis? |
| Anonymous #1460241 3 weeks ago |
@055
Care to post the link? I want to read a fixed version of this. |
| lordanubis #1460314 3 weeks ago |
@241
http://pastebin.com/X1hc2E5B |
| Anonymous #1460447 3 weeks ago |
Someone once said of Yukkuris in that they were to humans as humans were to the Youkai.
There's a weird logic to that that works with fluffies as well. To them, they, the fluffies are normal people, and humans are like gods or monsters, to be either worshiped or feared. Viewing it through that sort of lens, the story 'clicked' for me. |
| lordanubis #1460501 3 weeks ago |
@447 So Deities > Mortals > Fluffies? Makes sense to me. Never thought about it like that. |
| Anonymous #1460529 3 weeks ago |
Thumbs up, cute story. |
| Anonymous #1460816 3 weeks ago |
@1460194
I'm a luvfag, and this story is awful. Your OC sounds like a huge sissy faggot. For God's sake: 1. Wear boots to step on skulls 2. Willing to kill an actually smart fluffy or a pregnant mare, just because they got here To be honest: this isn't much different from abusefags |
| Anonymous #1469730 2 weeks ago |
@1460816
I think he was prepared to fight if the smart friend was like the coward one. And the other point it was a bluff to make them leave. |
| lordanubis #1475043 2 weeks ago |
Yeah, I didn't make the fact that it was originally a catch-22 trick very clear at first. He wanted to just make them leave. The smarty friend's offer threw him off and he agreed to it without really thinking about it. |