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| The_Mungoman #1451504 1 month ago |
"lovely fluffy pony"? I beg to differ.
Damn fat prick deserved to die. The thought of an obese (non-spoilt) fluffy sounds friggin' adorable though. |
| FeralSocks018 #1451507 1 month ago |
Appleloosa wrote something and it's not mindless abuse?
Wonderful! Fluffies dying due to their own stupidity is my favorite kind of story. |
| Anonymous #1451540 1 month ago |
@FeralSocks018
I'm ok with a story as long as the fluffy dies. @The_Mungoman Even if the owner turned his own fluffy into an insufferable spoilt pet, he loved it until the end. But hey, he's favorite pasta is Fagotini. |
| NightJack #1451562 1 month ago |
I'm shocked Appleloosa, it's not your normal mindless abuse, good for you man. |
| Appleloosa #1451563 1 month ago |
^
God damn it, switched the browsers. |
| Anonymous #1451569 1 month ago |
>faggotini
Self-reference much? |
| The_Mungoman #1451603 1 month ago |
^Badda-friggin'-dum-pssh. |
| Anonymous #1451618 1 month ago |
THIS IS MORE LIKE IT |
| PandaSennin #1451623 1 month ago |
Appleloosa wrote something decent for once? It's a fucking miracle. |
| deathproofpony #1451753 1 month ago |
...and nothing of value was lost.
Only problem with the story: owner should have dished out a little discipline for temper tantrums. |
| nasir6r #1451829 1 month ago |
Ehhhhhh...
... I didn't really like this one. I would've been better if it would've lived and learned from it's painful lesson. Still, B+, good job |
| Anonymous #1451948 1 month ago |
So a fluffy dies from hot pudding to the eyes and glass shards in it's feet?
Nope,not buying it. If it had a heart attack or something, now that I would buy, but the death just feels contrived. Also, I wanted the fluffy to eat the pudding and explode, monty python style. |
| Anonymous #1452790 1 month ago |
A fluffy pony pays a fatal price for its gluttony and impatience......
I liked how the fluffy died an ironic and well deserved death, but I agree with Anon984 that the how was too contrived. Maybe added that he had a heart attack as he was panicking to make it more believable. |
| Anonymous #1453146 1 month ago |
7/10 |