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| PonyRIG #1451401 1 month ago |
FLUFFY TEXT TAG!!! |
| The_Mungoman #1451424 1 month ago |
Lacks punch, a twist of some sort.
I like a happy ending, but there has to be some actual turmoil first. |
| Anonymous #1451435 1 month ago |
^ Stop acting like those goddamn abusefags, which only expect story to be "edgy" and "cool" |
| Anonymous #1451455 1 month ago |
Short and shitty hurboring is shitty |
| The_Mungoman #1451463 1 month ago |
^I'm not an abusefag. I don't want my stories always edgy or cool (though both are good attributes).
I want my stories to have suspense and emotional inclusion. This story, whilst not badly written, simply shows what has been depicted endlessly. The scenario itself is stale. |
| The_Mungoman #1451465 1 month ago |
And I meant Anon1435 by that. |
| Anonymous #1451489 1 month ago |
@1451463
It takes a couple of hours to write something longer that that I'm currently working on "foals mistake stallion's penis for mare's teat and suck on it", based on shitty edit of charcoal's drawing. No abuse or anything, just a story |
| The_Mungoman #1451521 1 month ago |
^I know. I wrote lots of non-abuse fluffy pony stories.
No abuse, no idiotic fluffy porn (Ugh...) or anything, just normal, funny stories. |
| Tabula_Rojo #1451995 1 month ago |
Lacks conflict, but not terrible |
| Ginger_Fig #1452835 1 month ago |
Well...okay...that's how it happens, same as it's been covered in a dozen stories already. You're really not covering any new ground here, Anon. |
| Anonymous #1453155 1 month ago |
^
>implying that your stories are any better and diverse |
| Giant_Neckbeard #1453704 1 month ago |
...........................................
*Whistles softly and walks away* |
| Anonymous #1453965 1 month ago |
Good short one |
| jman12351 #1454391 1 month ago |
Booooriiiiing! It could use at least a little conflict. |