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| CodenameOne #1447461 1 month ago |
Aah, shoulda let Crimson live and suffer for all his life knowing he was a failure of a Smarty Friend and lost all his power. |
| PandaSennin #1447653 1 month ago |
Good ending though killin the fola that looked like Crimson was a bit too much. Still a good job though. |
| Anonymous #1447924 1 month ago |
Good ending, but I was hoping that Crimson to live in a cage the rest of his life. |
| lordanubis #1448139 1 month ago |
Nice ending, would have been cool to see how the old fluffies made sure the new fluffies were obedient. |
| Anonymous #1448368 1 month ago |
Crappy fic is crappy |
| S_D_J22 #1448369 1 month ago |
I admit the foal getting killed was a bit much, but I figure Fluffy Breeder would still have some scares, or just some extra anger he didn't quite get out on Crimson.
lordanubis, I may expand upon those fluffies in the future, so we may see something along those lines. However I don't see breeder being too mean to any other fluffies (and the reason for that is more of me not wanting to end up looking like a cop of DPP's Martini series) |
| Tabula_Rojo #1448380 1 month ago |
Curses My prediction about Bass was wrong :(
here's hoping one of the mares gives birth to a cyan foal with a blue mane and tail and "Hoomin" names it Rock |
| Anonymous #1448631 1 month ago |
just a bunch of hugboring shit
him not having special hugs with firefly ruined this story |
| Anonymous #1449620 1 month ago |
"just a bunch of hugboring shit"
This. |