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| Giant_Neckbeard #1420455 1 month ago |
Op here, getting towards the 'End' of the Autumn Chapter.
Tags, as always: Apple_Acres_Fluffy_Story fluffy_pony fluffy_text foals mares Smarty_Friends special_huggies stallions Will Cloud be able to control the new Fluffies? Will the Farmer get that bedamned fence fixed? Will Rocket's head explode that he didn't get new Fluffies for his herd? Stay tuned! |
| andrewmyles #1420634 1 month ago |
Lord of The Fluffies.
All my WHAT. |
| Anonymous #1420776 1 month ago |
I don't think Rocket can afford to have more fluffies in his herd. He doesn't even have access to the cows' milk anymore. |
| The_Mungoman #1420787 1 month ago |
Oh God, this... won't end well.
With such an amount of fluffies farmer will need a plough to cross the field soon... That sounds like the most perfect mosh-pit ever. |
| sigh #1421057 1 month ago |
I'm scared. |
| Anonymous #1421093 1 month ago |
Through the use of the word "arse" I can guess that you're British? seems like a lot of fluffy pony fans are British, maybe that's just me. |
| Anonymous #1421255 1 month ago |
Once again, I hate how the domesticated fluffies think they "tamed" the stupid human. Do they not see how much smarter humans are than them? They build houses and grow apple trees and provide for the fluffies. |
| Anonymous #1421505 1 month ago |
@255- but they made him nice.
I hope he considers letting the apples out if he doesn't let them in, since it sounds like he was quite a few apples. |
| Anonymous #1422030 1 month ago |
Seriously. Obsessing over gay sex and preaching the evils of incest. Making a couple of incestuous rednecks evil rapists just to send them to jail. And then having a bunch of animals adhere to monogamy. Mother of Celestia, are you a gay republican? Because your stories make it seem that way. They have just the right combination of dick fetishism and faux moral superiority. And they stink like someone reveling in the smell of his own brain farts.
The stories are good, but the content is horrible. It's like eating fast food that gives you wicked shit. It's fun for a moment, but at the end of the meal you just wind up with your face in your palms wondering what the fuck you were thinking. Your stories...are the pink slime of fluffy stories. And that's terrible. My only hope is that Steve and the Rednecks (band name?) get a spinoff. Only interesting characters with some semblance of depth in the entire story. The rest try so hard to be EDGY and INTERESTING that they wind up being two dimensional mary sues who do nothing but dump the author's repressed sense of misguided morality. Especially a bunch of starving self entitled fluffies sharing food with one another. That part just...all of my facepalm. Why don't you just start calling them fluffy humans if that's how you're going to depict their mentality? Because actual fluffy ponies, even nature hardened ferals, aren't anywhere near as smart as every fluffy in this story. And just when I didn't think it was possible to up the mary sue quotient, suddenly POLITE AND PERFECTLY BEHAVED FLUFFIES! LIKE MAGIC! If you'll excuse me, I need to go throw up what I ate earlier. And then go curse whoever let you out of your hugbox. TO THE HEAVENS! So that the almighty Zeus may strike you with a lightning bolt and shock some quality into your writing. Because it's predictable as fuck. Why don't you just say all the fluffies will get in, agree to live in peace and THE LAND WILL SPRING FORTH ENDLESS SUSTENANCE FOR THEM TO LIVE ON REGARDLESS OF ANY REALISTIC LIMITS TO THE NUMBER OF FLUFFIES IT COULD FEED! Please, just do that, and spare us having to read more text walls just to get to a boring, inevitable and foregone conclusion. You've already used ol' deus ex machina so many times that he nearly died of exhaustion like a fluffy pony that just had special hugs with TWO mares. Yes, I said it. A fluffy pony two timer. Go cry in your hugbox because it's ignoring your religious adherence to political correctness. |
| Anonymous #1422357 1 month ago |
how can you declare what an area can feed when there's no clear info on how much a fluffy could eat |
| Danuis #1423194 1 month ago |
I felt immense rage.
I love this series. But by the gods. I want to just walk all over the smarty friends and their damn herds. That'll be gory. I nearly ripped out my shoulder in frustration. Also, shit, Fluffies getting genetic bounties? Fuuu- |
| lordanubis #1423878 1 month ago |
With all these herds in one area, it'll be fascinating to see all the unique personality types at hand among the herds. |
| Giant_Neckbeard #1424384 1 month ago |
*hands Anon 2030 a jar of aloe-vera gel* That might soothe the chafing sensation a little.
Where is the Deus-Ex, by the way? And no, the Feral Herds will not be staying indefinitely. Let's just say we're going biblical in the next chapter(s) and leave it at that. I see Fluffies being able to eat their own body-mass, fluff included, in grass, within an hour, and be hungry again within four or five hours after that. More dense foods, such as pasta (sketties) fruits, vegetables and such, would fill up their stomachs faster, and take longer to digest, thus making it a form of sustenance that will keep them feeling full for longer. And of course, half their body mass in poop when they are done. In regards to Nail and his Sister, I'll explain where the large amounts of electrolytes in their system came from in the next chapter. Also Nail's agonizing over what he's done, and how he'll try to deal with it. I see Fluffy Ponies have a broad variety of personalities. Just look at dogs and cats, some are friendly, some are selfish, some are gentle, some are just plain vicious. A Herd that shares food is more likely to survive as a unit than a Herd whose members steal food or refuse to share their finds, as all members of the Herd are likely to have the strength to forge onwards, and provide a larger number of targets to a potential predator than a Selfish Herd who has lost their numbers due to starvation and deprivation. It's a survival trait as much as a personality trait. |
| Anonymous #1424740 1 month ago |
..... Biblical?
As in Old Testament Biblical? As in Fire and Fury Biblical? Oh yes yes yes yes yes... |
| Anonymous #1424884 1 month ago |
Oh, I seriously like that the fluffies see it as "taming" the human, that's an awesome idea. |