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| Giant_Neckbeard #1407096 2 months ago |
Op here, I've cut the post in half, due to it being longer than Long Cat.
Tags, as always: abduction Apple_Acres_Fluffy_Story fluffy_pony fluffy_pony_lives fluffy_text foals mares stallions x_part_9 |
| Anonymous #1407126 2 months ago |
I'd prefer if blood is called booboo-juice, and not owies-water. |
| lordanubis #1407228 2 months ago |
It's always astounded me how you can write with such depth and complexity of story, given that these are fluffy stories. You inspire me. |
| The_Mungoman #1407242 2 months ago |
"The latest one, a tiny pink little bundle of fluff, is hugging your finger, its little eyes closed as it smiles and rubs it's head against your finger."
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| Anonymous #1407273 2 months ago |
me too |
| Anonymous #1407363 2 months ago |
yeah I agree with ANon 126, about the owie waters and booboo juice since tears could also be called owie waters.
I like that those scientists are freaked out by Nails. Lets see them interview him before they send him out. I guess they're expanding because they know that new larger herds are coming so they need more than the number they had? Are they actually studying for new extermination techniques or just trying to find ways to limit what damages the herds can do? I think the farmer should have brought some of the oats, as a sort of peace offering to Rocket. |
| Anonymous #1407413 2 months ago |
Cloud thinks the human is clumsy? umm any evidence for that remark Cloud? you're more clumsy than the human is. |
| cthulhlu #1407492 2 months ago |
weres part 8? i cant seem to find it.. |
| lordanubis #1407501 2 months ago |
Check your filters, it may be labeled explicit |
| Anonymous #1407506 2 months ago |
@413- He probably sees the guy constantly trying to step lightly to avoid stepping on fluffies and people always look clumsy when they're trying to avoid stepping on things. |
| Anonymous #1407516 2 months ago |
Nail is dang genius. |
| lordanubis #1407935 2 months ago |
To a small animal with 4 legs, a human would look clumsy. |
| Anonymous #1408004 2 months ago |
say, when they worked on Nail and Sissy did they spay and neuter them? |
| sigh #1408421 2 months ago |
So, uh, where's the other half? Or is it not done yet? |
| Anonymous #1408686 2 months ago |
Oh, how cute, Cloud thinks HE'S the one teaching the farmer! How adorable and stupid he is! What an idiot! ^___^
Nail seems to be surprisingly resilient to tazering, not to mention rebellious. Possible evolution of the species? Could be interesting...... |
| Giant_Neckbeard #1409269 2 months ago |
Having to redo the other half. Cats have stolen the thumb-drive I store the Fluffy Pony Stories I write on, so I either re-write it, or dig through their litter tray to find it.
Yeah, guess which option appeals to me most? Hopefully will have it up sometime later today. |
| Anonymous #1409888 2 months ago |
First of all, fluffies are already inbred to the point where inbreeding no longer has any effect on them. Implying it does is nothing more than a moralfag inserting his own personal morality into the story and trying to pass it off as fact and canon. Inbreeding actually serves to accelerate GREAT DARWINISM, culling detrimental traits and strengthening beneficial ones. Nail's herd would be better for it, not worse. Lern2science.
Also, stopped reading when Nail didn't lose his memory. Smarties have greater electrical stimulation in their brains, which has the effect of increasing their intelligence. They're like light bulbs. The more power there is, the brighter the light, at least until there's too much and the bulb burns out or bursts. In other words, too much either resets fluffy memories or just fries their brain into soup. The increased electrical activity in smarty friend brains makes overloading their brains and resetting their memories easier than with a regular fluffy. It would require less electricity to do it as well. You're not just disregarding the randomly thrown together fluffy canon, you're disregarding science and common sense. It's fine if you insert your headcanon, but your headcanon should at least be in some way sensible. Suspension of disbelief stretches too far if you include things like green skies or smarty friends being shock resistant AND capable of the complex thought needed to carry out acts of deception over a lengthy period of time. They're biological toys, not an actual sentient species. Making their intelligence rival a human's, making it greater than or equal to a redneck's, that's where the line is crossed. That wouldn't come about in the wild OR in an artificial lab, for fear that the fluffies would, well, do what they're doing in this story and gather en masse to take over any one location. Cloud's dimwitted herd and the random "slave fluffies" are the only reasonable fluffies in this story. As for rocket's herd, the fact that they didn't abandon their smarty for promises of a better life, even after going through the hardships they did before getting taken in, is just a show of loyalty self serving creatures like fluffies couldn't possibly be capable of. Suffice it to say, the mary sue level of this story is rising rapidly and getting worse with every chapter. By the end it'll have fluffies drinking tea with the farmer and discussing how the fluffy fertilizer stocks are doing that day. They'll even be partners in the business. And they'll be called G4 ponies instead. Because OP doesn't seem to know the difference between G4 ponies and fluffy ponies. HINT HINT. Fluffy ponies are dumb as a rock and survive based on their breeding habits, not actual intelligence. G4 ponies are the intelligent ones that don't breed much. Lern2nuance. |
| Anonymous #1410268 2 months ago |
^ Inbred to the point it doesn't count anymore? Wut? Do you even understand the difference between fucking your cousin and breeding to animals with similar traits together? Breeding direct family members together actually causes more harm than good, due to genetic faults being far more likely to crop up, let alone faulty immune systems and organs that are either under-developed or flat out not-working.
lrn2notbeafaggot So the Fluffy got a quick zap? It woke up all groggy, and there were two fluffies hugging each other, so the shock got spread between them, maybe. Rocket's Fluffies had the absolute shit scared out of them by the Human, just like their Smarty Friend said, no wonder they didn't leave, although, if you'd bothered to read, they did whine at Rocket they wanted to be in the safe place too! So, let's see if I get this right ... the story is Mary Sue because Gimped_Nudist writes the Fluffies with a moderate amount of intelligence, still having a 'broken' understanding of causality, the Fluffies have a small amount of loyalty that can be won, lost and bought, and they have a touch of Watership Downs in their veins. What, does he need to have the Farmer having glorious anal sex with every fluffy for you to like the story or what? Or do they need to look at a puddle of water and drown before you're happy. We have people writing decent fucking stories for once that don't result in pitiful 'lol ah stab u' fucktard wankfests or all the SHITEVERYWHERELOLSCATFETISHBRO! So Gaylord_Nerfspawn goofed on what, two bits? Electrical shocks and .... what again? Also, that the Fluffehs seem smarter than Rednecks? Have you ever met a Redneck? My little sister's smarter than most of those inbred cousin-kissers, and she's only just started school, ffs! |
| Giant_Neckbeard #1410291 2 months ago |
@Anon #9888
The inbred portion makes me chuckle a bit, as if they were that inbred they quite simply wouldn't be able to live past birth, if not simply abort during pregnancy due to a hilariously cascading effect of genetic defects and the mother's immune system wiping the developing fetuses out. Go and talk to a profession dog-breeder and ask them how closely they are willing to breed their animals. Most will probably only allow cousins at best to breed for a single generation, carefully monitoring which animals the bitch comes into contact with during her 'heat' period, and then breed the pups to a suitable, unrelated bloodline asap to try and create a stronger bloodline without risking an overload of genetic faults. Inbreeding is actually one of the most dangerous things animals can do. It's the reason why in the wild, males are often driven away from the Herd, Pride or Pack, so that they will drift away and mate with the females of a different group or region, spreading their genetic codes. I wouldn't say the Fluffies are 'smart', more than they have learned by rote, and had the information hammered home by watching scores of friends die every year to just about everything. Also, given that the Scientist and her Team are out there to specifically study Feral Fluffies, do you really think their equipment would be designed to destroy a valuable test-subject? I'll throw that 'Nuance' right back at you, friend. |
| Giant_Neckbeard #1410308 2 months ago |
@ Anon #0268 personal attacks, even on your fellow Anons, solve nothing. Anon 9888 does raise some valid points, but also misses a lot of the follow ups in the various parts of the Apple_Acres_Fluffy_Story series.
People are trying to push 'SCIENCE' on a fictional species that, if it were realistic, wouldn't be able to survive at all with the currently 'cannon' limitations. It's not 'SCIENCE', it's people trying to force a meme for the enjoyment of gore, guro and general sado-masochism on a mentally handicapped, child-like, defenceless target. |
| Anonymous #1414826 1 month ago |
Good one, as always. Really don't have anything to say that I didn't before. I'm especially fond of parent-child relations in writing, and Cloud's is really good. Keep it up |