
| PhilSrobeighn #1402347 2 months ago |
I lol'ed at the concept
but this was poor delivery. |
| NightJack #1402365 2 months ago |
I agree with Phil on this. |
| lordanubis #1402375 2 months ago |
What Phil said. |
| Scumbag_Crowley #1402440 2 months ago |
Phil said what I was gonna say. |
| Anonymous #1402488 2 months ago |
The second to last line, wherein the fluffy pony drowns, ruins the delivery of the joke by being over explanatory. A snappier line would have been better. Something like:
>Owner looks over, fluffy pony drowned too Like others have said, reality defying fluffy ponies is an interesting concept, but the execution here is poor. NB4TLDR |