
| Giant_Neckbeard #1392156 2 months ago |
OP here, throwing yet more monkey-wrenches in Blue-Horn's plans.
Tags, as always: fluffy_pony fluffy_text foals grimdark_fluffies mares on_the_rocks stallions x_part_8 Next chapter will focus on Zodd and his ever growing Herd, the Herd Alliance dealing with Leaves 'abandoning' them, and Yellow Pegasus Smarty Friend (let's call him Bitters!) leading his Herd around and trying to gather more mares. I will try to squeeze in the Cannibal Fluffies sniffing around the Underground for 'Nummies' as well, but depending upon the length of the 'post' I might save it for chapter 10, depending upon how many complaints I get about the length/lack of Loading. |
| Anonymous #1392195 2 months ago |
Why this no have sex in it!
FLUFFY SEX, EVERY CHAPTER! GO! NOW! DO IT FAGGOT! |
| Appleloosa #1392223 2 months ago |
Aren't you that faggot complaining about abuse in the other pic?
Good God, leave bipolarity for people that seriously suffer from it. Good God, I hate these guys. |
| Anonymous #1392230 2 months ago |
I hope we will get to see some fluffy pony abuse by some angry humans when the raid starts.
And perhaps a few hobbos also trying to get their stomach full with fluffy pony meat, no matter how meager it is. |
| Giant_Neckbeard #1392261 2 months ago |
Okay, I really doubt I will do a Clop-Fic involving, or Gods of the Nine Alignments forbid, Starring Fluffy Ponies.
I may add scenes with sexual overtones, but I will never make a flat out 'censored plunges desperately into the censored making censored sounds as they censored till the sun came up and censored down on them' stuff. One .... if you get a boner from a Fluffy Pony, regardless of the reason, you are a very sick individual. Two .... I believe in leaving certain scenes up to the Reader's imagination, as part of the enjoyment of a good book to me has always been to make an image of the scenes playing out before me in my mind's eye as I read. |
| The_Mungoman #1392270 2 months ago |
I want that alligator to eat that damn Claudius of a fluffy.
SLOOOWLY. |
| Anonymous #1392314 2 months ago |
I want the alligator eating most fluffy ponies and the survivors fleeing heartbroken and dejected. |
| Anonymous #1392316 2 months ago |
@Appleloosa
What's bipolar about this? Disliking abuse isn't the same as disliking violence. |
| Giant_Neckbeard #1392328 2 months ago |
I have a scene in mind for the 'Dragon' (Alligator) causing a great deal of chaos, but it's going to require some way of getting the 'Dragon', which is big enough to swallow a Fluffy Pony in one bite, out of the Bad Fluffy Pit.
Currently, the Bad Fluffy Pit leads to another layer of sewers, so unless the Dragon can find another way up, or the sewers flood, the Bad Fluffy Pit is 'reasonably' safe for now. |
| andrewmyles #1392428 2 months ago |
Poop!
That was funny. I predicted Clover and Red will be telling that the other's mare foal are worse... I think i can smell something worse coming... And Blue horn is is like Brain in the fluffy world. I like it. |
| Giant_Neckbeard #1392481 2 months ago |
Nnnn, I intend to have suffering in this 'story', and one of the goals I set out to do was to have almost no direct contact with Humans for the Fluffy Ponies.
My intent was to have all their suffering and hardship coming from their environment, the pests that inhabit Human cities, and most of all, each other. I said it before, but for me, these Fluffy Ferals in the City see Humans as these 'Elder God Abomination' type monsters that can slaughter an entire Herd just by looking at them funny, hence the ridiculous amounts of effort and suffering the Fluffies are willing to endure to avoid contact with Humans. And yes, Clover and Red will be having a great deal of conflict between them, especially when Red starts to become heavily pregnant herself. Clover is a smart, good Fluffy who takes care of other Fluffies, understands the way the world 'works' and is happy to have found a Friend who not only likes her Special Hugs, but wants to have something to do with her Foals, even if they are not his. Red, on the other hand, is, to Fluffy Ponies at least, a just-adult sex-bomb who expects to be the center of her Special Friend's world and is possessed of an extremely potent jealous nature. |
| lordanubis #1392533 2 months ago |
Can't wait to see what NoName gets to be called. My vote is for 'pimp daddy' |
| Anonymous #1392628 2 months ago |
meh, for those who wish only to see gory death, despicable abuse,heartless mistreatment to fluffy ponies, or anything grim dark, you should just look for others stories, there are tons of such stories in this site and the hell pit which they originated from. I personally don't wish the writer to cater the need of sadistically obsessed readers and devolve the story into mainstream senseless fluffy abuse or massacre. There are simply too much mindless fluffy abuse here and we don't need anymore of them.
Seriously, I can't hardly believe people still like such kind of story after reading tons of them,while most of them are intended to bring pathetic mind shock by portraying how the fluffy ponies get miserably killed by human cruelty or its own stupidity.Some of them might worth a little lulz but it get old real fast after reading so many similar poorly written story without any slightest form of creativity impart with them. Back to the story written by Giant_Neckbeard. Your stories truly amaze me due to the facts that you are still capable of expressing sophisticated emotions by merely using the limited vocabulary of fluffy ponies. Your manipulation of fluffy talk to invoke complex sense of wide emotional spectrum and flesh out fluffy ponies at the same time as the story flow is truly a remarkable ingenuity. I always like to read your story, I don't mind that if you had to put in some violence or anything gory to thicken the plot, just don't make them superfluous and ruin the whole stories. Hell, who am I talking to. I am pretty sure yourself had a knack on how to balance these story elements to compose a great fluffy ponies saga. Finally, Giant_Neckbeard, thank for keeping up the good work. |
| Anonymous #1392639 2 months ago |
Seriously, I can* hardly believe people
hell, how did I miss it. |
| Anonymous #1392783 2 months ago |
Really good story. I've said it before, but you're the best at writing fluffy perspective. |
| Anonymous #1395937 2 months ago |
Eh, it was ok. The fic is mostly depressing, though. Still waiting for something awesome, epic and uplifting to happen. |
| Giant_Neckbeard #1396685 2 months ago |
The Grimdark_Fluffies, or On_The_Rocks as people insisted I tag it as, is intended to be a depressing story.
A more upbeat story can be found under Owner_is_destined_to_suffer and Curse_these_ponies_they_drive_me_to_drink I'm currently putting that on hiatus due to some rather ... risky Private Messages. I wrote it as a funny fluffy Comedy/Romance, but some people seem to enjoy it as a Clop-Fic, so maybe no. Apple_Acres_Fluffy_Story is my 'Happy' story of the moment, that is probably more your style, Anon #5937. Yes there are sad moments, but overall, and from this point on, I am trying to push it more upbeat and 'heart-warming'. |