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| Festefolly #1383426 2 months ago |
Well, I'm joining the fray of magnificent bastards who write this shizzle, so consider this an acid test. Feel free to criticize grammar n' stuff, or alter the tags within sufficient reason. |
| PhilSrobeighn #1383447 2 months ago |
>"Words fail me, newbie."
That is simultaneously a comment on how promising your first fluffyfic is and a wondering on how Dr. Cox that is supposed to come out. |
| Anonymous #1383452 2 months ago |
I like it. Feels like the predecessor to the automated fluffy pony centers. |
| Tabula_Rojo #1383453 2 months ago |
I'm curious to see where this goes |
| The_Mungoman #1383522 2 months ago |
Reminds me of a Brazil-esque society a little with the bureaucracy and the overworking and all that.
Pretty friggin' grim stuff, man, but not bad at all. |
| lordanubis #1383540 2 months ago |
Another factory story? Well, let's see if you can bring something new.
Also, find a better color than radioactive green for a background. |
| PandaSennin #1383618 2 months ago |
Not a bad story but use a different background please. |
| Ginger_Fig #1383671 2 months ago |
Your first effort is a successful effort, Feste. Butt-Flo laxative shall be the remedy of choice for all fluffy constipation issues. |
| Anonymous #1384426 2 months ago |
What kind of retarded factory instantly explodes when a blade is not turned on? Shitty engineering deserves punishment. Kill the people who work there too, imo |
| Anonymous #1386440 2 months ago |
Looking forward to part 2 |
| Strategia #1434844 1 month ago |
"Fluff-blender" made me lol.
Also, said fluff-blender sends its victims to..... the air conditioning system? Did some plumber get his wires crossed when laying the pipes for that place, or is it normal for finely-ground fluffies to be sprayed all throughout the building? |