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| Anonymous #1383100 2 months ago |
Thats gotta hurt |
| Yorec #1383116 2 months ago |
>Fluffy pony starts puking blood
>You freak out, take her to the vet >Vet performs X-Ray, finds glass in intestines >Vet puts her in emergency surgery >Removed as much glass as possible, managed to stopped internal bleeding >She survives but barely >Vet says she can go home in about a month >You're just happy she's still alive |
| Anonymous #1383117 2 months ago |
@1383100
Indeed, writing this sap is painful to anyone. |
| Appleloosa #1383146 2 months ago |
>Fluffy pony squeals in pain when you hug her
>She pukes lots of blood >Fluffy pony starts to get cold >You tell her everything is going to be alright while hugging her softly >She bleeds to death minutes later |
| NightJack #1383147 2 months ago |
Pffftt, man that was dumb! |
| Yorec #1383155 2 months ago |
@Appleloosa
Well at least she died in his/her arms. |
| Appleloosa #1383294 2 months ago |
@Yorec
Indeed, at least the sied. |
| Appleloosa #1383296 2 months ago |
^she died |
| Tabula_Rojo #1383319 2 months ago |
Yorec, I'm typically on your side but that ending was ridiculous |
| The_Mungoman #1383347 2 months ago |
Well, that fluffy's dead, impaled from the inside out.
Kinda a cool way to die for a movie villain. |
| Shaggy #1383630 2 months ago |
To dumb to live stories. Love them. |
| Yorec #1383754 2 months ago |
Tabula_Rojo@1383319 said: Yeah the ending was pretty lame. Hold on. >Fluffy pony starts puking blood >You freak out, take her to the vet >Vet examines fluffy's mouth, finds cut marks and bits of glass stuck in teeth and gums >Vet tells you they can stop the internal bleeding but she may have already lost too much blood >Fluffy goes into surgery >They managed to stop the internal bleeding, but shes lost too much blood. >They give her about an hour before she dies >They move her to an exam room, shes doped up on painkillers >You ask if she can feel anything >Weakly, she says she doesn't >She asks if you are mad at here >You say no, you've been a really good girl >She smiles, says shes tired and whats to take a nap >You start to tear up, say its ok take as long a nap as you want >Crying, you give her one last kiss on her forehead >She closes her eyes >Five minutes later she stops breathing >You go tell one of the technicians that shes gone. >They apologize, ask if you want to have her cremated >You say yes, fill out all the paperwork >As you leave you see one of the technicians taking her to the freezer >You get in your car, drive home and drown your sorrows You're ending is fine too Appleloosa, just figured I'd try and take a crack at something with fluffy ponies. |
| Anonymous #1383887 2 months ago |
@754
0/10, tried too hard |
| Yorec #1383900 2 months ago |
Anonymous@1383887 said: *shrug* ok. |