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| Giant_Neckbeard #1381863 2 months ago |
Op here, tags as always:
Apple_Acres_Fluffy_Story fluffy_pony_lives fluffy_pony_punishment fluffy_text fluff_pony Nerf_Gun x_part_5 Is the shorter post easier for you to view, or is the length too short? I know people complained about the shortness of my first attempts, so perhaps I went a smidge overboard with the length. |
| JP #1381869 2 months ago |
Just passin' thru, fixing yer tags ("fluff_pony" -> "fluffy_pony") |
| Anonymous #1381892 2 months ago |
.. You mean fluffy_pony right? |
| Giant_Neckbeard #1381897 2 months ago |
Hnnnngh!
Derped it up again, thanks JP, thanks Anon. |
| The_Mungoman #1381912 2 months ago |
I was thinking about writing a fluffy story involving a Nerf gun just a few days ago.
Coincidence? I THINK NOT!! |
| Giant_Neckbeard #1381935 2 months ago |
My Mind, get out of it! |
| Anonymous #1382061 2 months ago |
Well, "wocket" asked fow it, I think. The little jerk doesn't know what gratitude is.
Of course, maybe he's just stereotyping... there are folks like the Billy bros around, so maybe he's just careful. ... Nah, he's a little racist prick. And a quickshot. Poor Rose... |
| Anonymous #1382117 2 months ago |
In the farmer's situation, i'd turn the herd against Rocket, permanently chasing him away, then claim to be leader, while appointing substitute leaders (Soot and Cloud for sure, maybe some more of the seemingly intelligent ones) to keep the herd behave (laying out basic rules, make the substitute leaders understand it, and keep the rest of them in line).
But these are just how I'd imagine I'd do it myself, I'm waiting curiously how the farmer will work it out. Also, I got happy just by seeing there's a new part out, I love these. Please keep up the good work! |
| deathproofpony #1382122 2 months ago |
Rocket needs to be made an example of. |
| Giant_Neckbeard #1382140 2 months ago |
Something I tried to portray is that, even with a self-impressed asshole leading them, as soon as there isn't a 'leader', the Herd just turns into a collection of childlike critters who can only think of their own desires and needs.
Something I've tried to put into every story I write, that the Fluffies need that 'Leader' to be the central pin in their memories, to hold it all together. If that 'Leader' loses their authority, and there isn't a new 'Leader' to step up and claim that authority, the whole Herd just falls apart. And maybe I will get rid of Rocket, but for now, if far too much fun making him the recurring comedy antagonist. K'tunk! "HOOMAN IS STIWW A BAWSTARD!" |
| Anonymous #1382206 2 months ago |
Nah, don't get rid of the little prick... just make him get what's coming to him.
Then, if he changes, good. If not, he keeps getting it. And, since he's an obvious charity case, give, give generously. :) |
| lordanubis #1382252 2 months ago |
A terrible smarty friend getting owned is always satisfying |
| Anonymous #1382264 2 months ago |
Lol, I love it.
Owned the shit out of that Smarty Friend, and did it without a single drop of blood. Kudos. MOAR! |
| Giant_Neckbeard #1382277 2 months ago |
Actually, something I have been meaning to ask, the jokes I'm slipping into the story, are they working or does it all seem 'forced'? |
| Anonymous #1382495 2 months ago |
You ARE planning to go back to school, right?
"Eenf eenf eenf!" you grunt. "Wocket... yuu stop aweady?" she asks, [...] "What Wose twying to say?" you demand angrily [...] "Wocket gif Owies if Hooman no go-waaah!" he shouts, [...] "[...] I GIF BIGGEST OWIES TO HOOMAN IF YUU NU STAWP!!!" the ambitions little fuzz-bucket shouts, [...] "Get off my lawn," you grunt, [...] "He's not very brave," you reply, [...] "No Milk until all Fluffies are back in the grasses!" you shout louder, [...] Also, lol fluffy sex all day erryday. |
| Giant_Neckbeard #1382554 2 months ago |
Honestly, I've little interest in going back and double-checking for typos, Anon #2495.
It's a Fluffy Pony story, after all. If I was going to take it to a Tumblr, then yes, I'd go back and double-check I've used all the right 'bits', but honestly, I am not going to take that much time for a 'Green Text' story when I'm already working a 58 hour week... |
| Anonymous #1382630 2 months ago |
Good chapter as always, Neckbeard. Love it.
You're really good at writing fluffy perspective, although to be honest, the sex joke at Rocket didn't fit in as well. Still good though, keep it up. Also, dumping all your stories on a tumblr might be a very good idea. I could use the RSS feed to automatically check for new additions. |
| Anonymous #1382700 2 months ago |
My advice: Get a Nerf gun that shoots foam BALLS instead of darts. If the darts don't work in making Rocket behave the third time, get something that hits harder.
Also, make all the fluffies turn against Rocket somehow. |
| Anonymous #1382722 2 months ago |
@Giant_Neckbeard You wouldn't have to double-check anything if you got it right the first time.
It's plain as day that you're suffering a misconception about the use of capital letters to begin sentences. A sentence doesn't end every time you put a period or exclamation mark inside of a quote. You need to realize that the quoted dialog is part of the same sentence as the tag line (the "he said/she said") |
| Anonymous #1382727 2 months ago |
Just read one of Dale_the_Asshole_Scientist's stories. He gets it right every single time. He's just writing "Fluffy Pony Greentext" too, but he's also writing well-formatted, style-adhering prose that just happens to have a ">" in front of every line. |
| KirbyfanNeox #1384543 2 months ago |
"Biggest Owies"...
Rocket threatened to KILL the farmer! |
| sigh #1385600 2 months ago |
Looks like Rocket....
FIRED OFF EARLY! yyyyeeeeeaaaaaahhhhhhh.png |
| Anonymous #1386409 2 months ago |
Another boring story. No death, no gore, just an owner bringing misfortune on himself by not killing the fuckers or even locking them up.
He needs to start his own fluffy fertilizer factory, complete with abusive conditions and fluffies not smelling pretty. |
| Giant_Neckbeard #1386876 2 months ago |
@ Sigh: I would have said he was blasting off again..... |
| Bronyboy #1390891 2 months ago |
Nerf guns fix every problem. |