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| Giant_Neckbeard #1372588 2 months ago |
Op here, as the text above says, the Scientist and the Rednecks were in the next part.
I was deciding whether or not to go back and adjust the story to have some Fluffies still caught outside when the Rednecks showed up and started blasting when some idiot ploughed into a power-pole at the end of my street. Currently on backup power from my generator, so it could be anywhere from a few hours to a day or two before I get full power back and can risk the computer long enough to tap the story out. |
| Anonymous #1372599 2 months ago |
KILL THE SMARTY. |
| Anonymous #1372603 2 months ago |
The smarty will get the nice fluffies killed.
KILL THE SMARTY, KILL THE REDNECK. Scientist and good flufflies can live. |
| The_Mungoman #1372707 2 months ago |
Wow, that smarty is a jerk.
Yeah, he'll most likely be killed. Soon. |
| lordanubis #1372766 2 months ago |
The smarty is a jerk, for sure, but he's a jerk who's doing what he thinks is best. And he is actually trying to keep his herd safe and provided for. He just can't trust humans. |
| Anonymous #1372785 2 months ago |
Really good stuff, Neckbeard. You gave Rocket a good sympathetic viewpoint here. Can't possibly be easy, leading around incredibly stupid fluffies. Good work, keep it up.
Also, he makes a pretty good point about the inside-fluffies getting lazy and weak, while the scattered herd needs their strength. |
| Anonymous #1372916 2 months ago |
Wow, the smarty friend is actually also smart, like No-Lips and Raindancer and Big Heart.
I wonder if he'll accept the human or will lead his herd to doom because of his pride and mistrust. |
| Anonymous #1372925 2 months ago |
Fortunately for the fluffy ponies, the people haven't realized yet that fluffy pony shit can be refined into even better manure by force-feeding it to the fluffies. |
| Giant_Neckbeard #1372976 2 months ago |
@ Mungoman and Lordanubis: Yeah, Rocket is a Jerk, aka Classic Smarty Friend. Don't expect him to turn over a new leaf anytime soon or be willing to step down.
Whether or not he will be killed, or become a recurring thorn in the side of the Humans, is something I am still debating. @ Anon #2785: I always try to give the Protagonists/Antagonists valid reasons for what they are doing, because it's easier to 'feel' a character if you can put yourself in their shoes. Or Hooves, as the case may be. Less being 'weak', but he sees their playing while the Herd suffers as a betrayal of trust. His trust, most of all, as Soot and Cloud were his enforcers up until a few days ago. To Rocket, they should have been fighting the Hooman or trying to escape back into the Wild. That Rocket ran like a little bitch doesn't even enter into Rocket's particular mindset... @ Anon #2925: No. Just no. I refuse to put scat-fetish-bullshit into my stories. |
| Tabula_Rojo #1373277 2 months ago |
I enjoy this story as you've managed to make it both interesting and distinct from your other stories |
| Anonymous #1373463 2 months ago |
Corrections. Remember, don't capitalize the tag lines, they're part of the same sentence as the dialogue.
>"Uhh... other than they're eating a lot of grass, no," you reply, a little surprised. >"Why?! Why happen!" you howl, [...] >"Hole some otha pwace! Mus' be!" you cry, [...] >"[...] WOOK WHILE TUMMEHS MAKE BIG OWIES AN' FOALS GO HUNGWY," you bellow at them, [...] >"[...] Hooman is nice if Fwuffies no make spawks," the younger Black-Fluffed unicorn is babbling, [...] >"Hoomans are Munstas!" you snap back, [...] >"Go wit Fwiends, get miwk!" you hear a Mare saying happily. >"WHY DUMB MARE PUT BAYBEH IN DERE?" you yell, [...] >"[...] So gif baybeh to fwiend an' baybeh get nummies," the Mare replies, proudly. >"How you get baybeh back! Stupid Mare!" you yell at her. >"Wan baybehs back, gif pwease!" they shout, [...] >"Dig! Dig unda Smaw Howwows!" he says loudly, [...] >"[...] you dig for Fwuffies," you demand, glaring at Cloud. >"Gwab Stupid Mares by Twails and pwull!" you order the Stallions, [...] >"[...] den one moar Fwuffie, no get stuck," you yell at the top of your lungs. >"... Where Fwuffie haf miwk in dis pwace?" you ask, [...] |
| Anonymous #1373532 2 months ago |
Hey Giant_Neckbeard, do you mind if your stuff gets posted to a pastebin or tumblr? |
| Giant_Neckbeard #1373632 2 months ago |
Not really, no. I don't have a Tumblr, and for some obscure reason every time I go to Pastebin my anti-virus software goes all Condition Red. |
| Giant_Neckbeard #1373634 2 months ago |
And Appleloosa, stop screwing with the tags just because you don't like stories without torrents of pointless abuse and guro, please. |
| Giant_Neckbeard #1373803 2 months ago |
OP_is_a_massive_faggot pointless_shit
Classy, Anon, very classy. |
| Anonymous #1376562 2 months ago |
Finally.
You write fun stories but too wurdy for Fluffies. This is better. Going back to stupid Fluffies and smart Smarty Friend. Humans hate Fluffies. Make the Human Farmer murder the Herd after they do something to annoy him. We edit the tags because we want you to be the best fag you can be and that's an Abuse Fag! |
| Anonymous #1376898 2 months ago |
"OP_is_a_massive_faggot pointless_shit "
This. That the smarty friend didn't die a brutal and horrific death is an outrage. |
| andrewmyles #1377052 2 months ago |
I really enjoy your stories. Keep it up! This one is very interesting. |