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| 441 #1370905 2 months ago |
Welp, Somebody's got brain damage...
...And what's up with all the corpses? What, a mere storm can kill them too? How are there so many fics where they're slowly tortured? They're less durable than my sex life. |
| Anonymous #1370987 2 months ago |
Author here. First fluffy story ever, so you don't have to tell me it sucks, but I have an idea from here.
Guess I should have specified the house was pretty well destroyed, collapsed in on everything which is why so many of the fluffies were either carried off or dead. There may be more alive amongst the wreckage elsewhere though. Tornadoes kill people all the time easily, why would fluffies be any different? |
| Tabula_Rojo #1370998 2 months ago |
no the house got his with a Tornado, it's a miracle any of them survived
anyway I like where this is going |
| Vanner #1371003 2 months ago |
Suggestions: Write up your stories in word, change the background color, take a screen shot, crop in paint. Flood filling in paint does not work. |
| NightJack #1371085 2 months ago |
What Vanner said and use a better color, this hurts my eyes. |
| lordanubis #1371140 2 months ago |
Not a bad first effort, but next time, change the background color first, before you add the text.
Also, lol, Princess cameo. |
| Anonymous #1371787 2 months ago |
Ooh, good story. Not so keen on the lettering that's shifted a bit. Keep it up. |
| Anonymous #1372230 2 months ago |
He thinks he's a fluffy pony?
I hope he dies like one. |
| Mayclore #1373530 2 months ago |
@441
Having been through a tornado, I can assure you they are not 'mere storms'. |