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| Giant_Neckbeard #1353420 2 months ago |
Op here, I'd like some feedback on how you'd prefer the story to progress.
As always, Tags. Apple_Acres_Fluffy_Story fluffy_pony fluffy_pony_dies fluffy_pony_lives fluffy_text |
| NightJack #1353447 2 months ago |
I don't see what the Apple_Acres_Fluffy_Story tag is for, nothing is stated in the story for that tag, it should be removed as it has no point. |
| Gittonsxv #1353452 2 months ago |
a human that feels guilt and has a heart?
i dont think i have ever seen that before, would love a happy story, they help each other somehow maybe... |
| FeralSocks018 #1353482 2 months ago |
I'd like to see him take the flagged that remain in.
Then, at a latter date, the original herd returns to try and reclaim them, having completely forgotten what happened the first time. The fluffies must then choose between "Daddy" and the Smarty Friend. |
| FeralSocks018 #1353486 2 months ago |
Take the fluffies in.
Stupid autocorrect. |
| Anonymous #1353531 2 months ago |
Make the herd accept the fella as friend...
And please, hurt "wocket". Not kill, just hurt. The little coward deserves it. |
| Anonymous #1353544 2 months ago |
Have Wocket somehow miraculously gather other fluffy pony herds to attack the protagonist. Most of them die and cause harm on each another when making an ill-fated attack, and the protagonist decides to take in the surviving fluffy ponies and heal them, who then see him as their 'daddy'. |
| Giant_Neckbeard #1353568 2 months ago |
here are some of the ways I can see this going:
Monsters in the Dark: the Farmer is trapped in an isolated area by a gigantic Herd of Fluffies led by a small 'tribe' of Mutants, the progenitors of the Fluffy Pony race that fled to this abandoned Farm, and they don't want the Humans to find them again .... Healing: The Farmer comes to take care of a small band of Fluffies, dealing with his fears and their needs, while also countering the red-neck yokels and their blood-sport, and also the feral Herds who attempt to 'take over' the Farm. Alfred Hitchcock: A handful of Fluffies is no match for anything. A hundred Fluffies, all feral, hardened and desperate for food and shelter, with just one human in the way? Tom and Jerry: The Farmer ends up in a friendly rivalry with the Feral Herds, entertaining himself by setting up obstacle courses for them with food at the end, non-lethal of course, and the Fluffies come to see him as some sort of God-Like Figure that rewards only Smart and Loyal Fluffies. |
| Anonymous #1353592 2 months ago |
Healing or Tom and Jerry, please :) |
| Appleloosa #1353633 2 months ago |
Wheter the pony lives or dies you have to tag it properly as abuse or luv in order to save people their time. |
| Appleloosa #1353706 2 months ago |
Answering your question, do what the hell you want to do, life is too god damn short to be preocupied with people's opinion.
Luvfags gonna luvfag, abuse gonna abuse and so on. Just be clear of your intentions with your story, please don't be a god damn bipolar. That's a serious disorder that people struggle to live with, you have the choice of living a normal freaking life. |
| Anonymous #1353773 2 months ago |
Oooh, go for the Tom and Jerry one. Also, being bipolar isn't really a choice in itself, dealing with in in any way is. Better in stories than slapping people around at home.
Nice story, as always. |
| Anonymous #1353818 2 months ago |
I'm for healing, if it's necessary.
The Alfred Hitchcock's "the birds"-scenario wouldn't work for me, because a single human would still triumph over several thousands of fluffy ponies. They are that pathetic and miserable. |
| Anonymous #1353880 2 months ago |
I'd go for a silly story, where the smarty pony returns after years of training, and has basically become a parody of dragonball z, to the point to being a legit threat to the farmer. Farmer still manages to dunk the fluffy in the pound though. |
| douseron #1353934 2 months ago |
its a great story and i think it should have a happy end for all. and rocket should enter again |
| Anonymous #1353986 2 months ago |
Personally, I prefer healing.
As one who is currently healing from getting shot, I'm fighting through the same pain as the storys protagonist. I really feel for the guy, and would like to see him get his mental wounds healed. |
| NightJack #1354075 2 months ago |
Stop saying someone is bipolar for having both both some love and some abuse in one story and it's mixed well, if it did swing form one to the other it might be so but there is a middle ground.
And no one go telling me I don't know what I'm talking about, my brother is bipolar and I see it a lot when he is off his meds, he's balanced when on them but he's sporadic when off. |
| Anonymous #1354133 2 months ago |
I vote for bittersweet story. |
| The_Mungoman #1354248 2 months ago |
Interesting.
I'd like to see where this is going. I also love that Tom and Jerry option of yours, Neckbeard, that sounds really entertaining. |
| FeralSocks018 #1354367 2 months ago |
Seeing what you've offered, go for Tom and Jerry or Healing. |
| Tabula_Rojo #1354380 2 months ago |
the HEALING idea sounds best |
| lordanubis #1354502 2 months ago |
I want to see the guy interacting with the fluffies as a form of therapy. |
| Anonymous #1354519 2 months ago |
Just wondering, are you doing anymore liquor fluffies? |
| Anonymous #1354878 2 months ago |
Happy story!
There are too much sad stories out there. |
| Anonymous #1354977 2 months ago |
It should be a "fluffies slowly devour and defecate all over his land like a plague, eventually invading his home and trying to kill him so that the land will be theirs" story. One that leads him to grow another pair and start exterminating the fluffies ANIMAL ACTIVISTS BE DAMNED! |
| Job_for_a_Cowpony #1355170 2 months ago |
Fluffies kill humans?
AW HELL NAW |
| Giant_Neckbeard #1355275 2 months ago |
I'm not stopping the Stories of Fluffy Guy and Gin, Vodka, Rum, Bourbon and Whiskey, or No-Name and the Feral Herd. Just started a new story in a different direction to give some brain-muscles a squeeze and try to get around the writer's block.
The 'Alfred Hitchcock' bit would have been interesting because he's out on his own, only has a crossbow for a ranged weapon, and hell, the movie 'Birds' made damn pideons scary.... But the vote is made. Tom and Jerry and Healing. May the Love warm you all. I can see the Abusers writhing in agony as they read the next few chapters. |
| Anonymous #1355327 2 months ago |
It's nice to read something Fluffy related that has a good protagonist and an actually interesting Plot. I'd go the Healing route but don't make it easy, there's a shit-load of Fluffy-abuse/slaughter stories. Many of them revolving around the concept of a "Smarty Friend." Who dares to stand up to a Human being brutally killed. The Healing route has a lot more potential for a complex and involving narrative if you bring Rocket back into the story and examine his motivations for acting the way He does. Plus if you go into his Back-Story, you can write plenty of Horrific Fluffy-Snuff scenes to keep the Fluffle-Snuffers Happy. |
| Anonymous #1355354 2 months ago |
@Giant_Neckbeard: I vastly prefer fluffy pony abuse stories, but I seriously doubt you would have done a good abuse story if using the 'The Birds'-scenario, so I voted for the 'healing' instead.
But if you say it's going to be saccharine, then okay, thank you for the warning. |
| feels_fluffy #1355417 2 months ago |
>“Don’t shoot sparks at me.” You say, your hand still extended.
>You say, your hand still extended. What did I just say about sentence fragments?! Look. >“Don’t shoot sparks at me,” you say, your hand still extended. Now this line LOOKS like it could be two sentences, but it is just too awkward that way. They don't flow together. >“Just don’t shoot sparks at me again.” You whisper, feeling tortured. >“Just don’t shoot sparks at me again.” >You whisper, feeling tortured. It's actually one sentence, so write it that way. “Just don’t shoot sparks at me again,” you whisper, feeling tortured. |
| Ferrotter #1355868 2 months ago |
Enjoyable, good backstory. |
| Anonymous #1356483 2 months ago |
@Giant_Neckbeard
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| Anonymous #1357061 2 months ago |
Loving how the fluffies are a novel sight for the protagonist. It's an entertaining and, dare I say it, original hook.
It's also hilarious as all hell, given that even after months of existence and infamy, the sight of them still generates a "da FUCK? .__." response from our guy. The fact such a feeble 'attack' on them caused so much terror and suffering was also pretty clever. By making them even more pitiable and frail than they usually are, it makes abusing them seem totally unnecessary (or at least more so than it already was). |
| Anonymous #1357089 2 months ago |
Fluffy pony abuse is never unnecessary, 061. It is the duty of every living being. |
| Anonymous #1361688 2 months ago |
This requires more Fluffies fighting on a Bed.
Seriously, do more of that. I read that and I laughed so hard it wasn't funny. It reminded me of the mindless consumerism that thrives in our societies, where people will trample each other to death for first crack at low-priced goods. MOAR FLUFFIES screaming in agony and fear as they are trapped in the ruins of their own home! More Giant Fluffy Butthole Rapers! Less Tears! More Terror! |