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| PandaSennin #1332925 2 months ago |
Teenagers...true scum of the earth. Good story otherwise. |
| Anonymous #1334121 2 months ago |
WHAT THE HELL, MAN?! Spraying the grass would have harmful effects on the other animals who eat it, thus disrupting the ecosystem with toxic chemicals. Not to mention the possible long term effects it could have on the soil and what not. The should be called the dumbassinator.
Also, fluffies that are that friendly in the wild would be quickly slaughtered by predators since they'd be too stupid to aggresively defend themselves. Their very existence is unpossible. Not to mention that a submissive female smarty would be raped by a more aggressive male, either from her herd or another one, which would then take its place as the new smarty while she swells up and becomes immobile from pregnancy. All the fluffies in this story are blatant non-canonical mary sues. As for the dead fluffies, it's the exterminator's fault for not killing them himself. He had no right to take it out on the people doing his job for him. In fact, he would go out of business because most people hiring an exterminator would actually want the job done quickly and efficiently, a service all other exterminators, hunters and lone wolf badasses would provide. As for fluffsploding, darwinism already made that obsolete. The foals without their mother's milk all died off and the only fluffies left give birth naturally. As for the foals, they'd all come out tiny, underdeveloped and stillborn. The "compound" was a blatant deus ex machina used by a boring mary sue to make the story go the way you want, even though it pulls the suspension right out from under disbelief and proceeds to rape it in the ass. Suffice it to say, this story was shit. It disregarded all commonly agreed upon canon, common sense, economics, the food chain, common sense, logic and common sense. This is why there aren't many luvfag stories anymore. Most of the fluffy fandom doesn't want to read about your self insert mary sues and ass pull deus ex machinas. If you're going to write a story, try to make it a good one. One that's interesting, has drama and doesn't try to lord the author's perceived moral superiority over other, better authors. |
| Anonymous #1335478 2 months ago |
Then the teenager's parents sue the old man for assault with a firearm and attempted murder and the jury sides with the kids due to the sickening baby-boomer "think of the children" mentality, and he loses his property.
The next owner plants the fields with high yield engineered corn from Monsanto and has the fluffy herd exterminated properly so they won't eat his crops. |
| JoyKillR-II #1335498 2 months ago |
@#1335478 - It's called "defending your property." The teenagers had no business to what they did on his land, and the farmer was only trying to scare them off, NOT kill them. |
| JoyKillR-II #1335510 2 months ago |
@#1334121 - Biased blabbing, biased blabbing, biased blabbing. That's ALL I ever get from you abuse lovers. If you REALLY don't like my stories, STOP READING AND COMMENTING ON THEM. You always complain about us "luvfags" bitching on abuse posts, but what about YOU?! |
| Anonymous #1335571 2 months ago |
I'm sensing some rustled jimmies in the vicinity. |
| Anonymous #1337423 2 months ago |
Like this story. |
| why #1413285 1 month ago |
1334121 tl;dr... you mad, fgt? |