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| MissingData #1327467 2 months ago |
tl;dr |
| I_Like_Your_Mane #1327470 2 months ago |
So if it doesn't belong in Ponibooru or 4chan or FIMfic, maybe it belongs nowhere? Just kidding.
I hate these as usual, but at least you made the font and paragraphs look pretty. |
| Gittonsxv #1327484 2 months ago |
thats such an interesting story man, i fucking love everything in this, if you want then make more of this guy and Dawn ^-^ |
| lordanubis #1327488 2 months ago |
Awwwww. I think this is the first time I've read a fluffy story that involved g4 ponies. Good read. |
| lordanubis #1327490 2 months ago |
Also, get a pastebin if you have more than one story. |
| Mezzo #1327545 2 months ago |
I kinda feel sorry for the fluffy ponies, but Dawn and her 'dad' are great protagonists. |
| Anonymous #1327564 2 months ago |
In my headcanon ponies do exist next to the fluffies.
This was a sweet, sad and insightful story. Fits greatly with my fluffy pony canon too ;D |
| The_Mungoman #1327669 2 months ago |
^Also, I hate it when Ponibooru randomly logs me out. |
| Anonymous #1327694 2 months ago |
Kudos! :)
A most excellent story! No violence for its own sake; a good, clear explanation and compare-contrast of pony vs. fluffy pony life cycle and limitations; well thought out and executed. An 11 our of 10, IMHO. :) |
| Ferrotter #1327857 2 months ago |
Yes, this was way better than I expected. Kudos. |
| Anonymous #1327970 2 months ago |
Nice story! Don't think I've ever seen this kind of mixed society in a story before, ever. Really good one! |
| andrewmyles #1328018 2 months ago |
That was actually kind of awesome! I read maybe one or two stories in which ponies and fluffies coexisted, but they were merely greentexts. This one is pretty solid. |
| PhilSrobeighn #1328146 2 months ago |
Infodump of your headcanon disguised as a story is not legitimate just because you have the tenacity to mix humans, ponies, and fluffies.
Write a real story in this setting. |
| Shaggy #1328664 2 months ago |
Please write more of these. It fits my head cannon if g4 ponies were also in the world. |
| Bronyboy #1328694 2 months ago |
Cute story. |
| Anonymous #1329746 2 months ago |
Agreeing with 146. Posting your headcanon isn't a story if it doesn't have any in depth analysis. Well, it still wouldn't be a story, but it wouldn't be deceptively disguised as one, either.
As for the faint bits of story in there, it sucked and was too depressing. The best stories are about abusers who enjoy what they do a little too well, where you can still wind up with a smile after reading, no matter how horrific and appalling it is. However, I would like to see more stories where humans, g4 ponies and fluffies all existed in the same universe. As long as humans and ponies both abuse fluffies. And only if there's some hot human on g4 pony interspecies breeding, if you know what I mean. A story's not a good story if there's no sex and gore. |
| Tabula_Rojo #1331423 2 months ago |
Excellent, I'll admit I somewhat agree with PhilSrobeighn but I think you managed to craft some believable characters with Dawn and her owner |
| Anonymous #1449299 1 month ago |
needs more death and gore and rape |