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| Anonymous #1301319 2 months ago |
>Then you roll over on the fluffies, crushing them to death. |
| Anonymous #1301348 2 months ago |
Bland, boring and unispired. Did you had a terrible childhood or there's some kind of weird pleasure in writing this sap? |
| Saint_Braeburn #1301360 2 months ago |
@Anon348
You my friend, are a troll. |
| Giant_Neckbeard #1301392 2 months ago |
Because a random act of kindness has never helped anyone, right?
Nicely done, Ghost, nicely done. |
| Anonymous #1301409 2 months ago |
This is shit. It doesn't even take into account that the guy's floor would be covered in shit and piss. Him as well, if the fluffies were sleeping by him and didn't have anywhere else to take a dump.
This is just another hugbox mary sue oc story that lacks depth and creativity. iT can be summed up as "OHOHO I NAISU GAI LUV ANMALZ HU DUN POO OR PEE END OLWAIZ BEEHAEV WIHTOWT TRAYNIN!" And that's terrible. An uncreative but "realistic" abuse story is better than a luvfag about perfect fluffies who can do no wrong. Anyone who's ever had a pet knows that without proper discipline they misbehave. And even with it, some still misbehave. To even imply that untrained fluffies would be so polite and considerate, or that they'd even have the mental capacity to understand kindness and consideration, is nothing short of the author failing to properly do the research. Or ignoring the research in order to post some of his ego-stroking mental masturbation shit that he'd like us to believe is better than abuse stories so that it seems less like the shit that it is. I, for one, am outraged that OP went from writing decent abuse stories to luvfag shit. It's a step in the wrong direction and doesn't even offer anything new or intriguing. It's more boring and bland than the most boring and bland abuse stories. Not to mention OP complains about art, but then didn't include any with the story. Way to go, hypocrite. If you really want to write something that hasn't been covered much, do stories about owners sexually abusing fluffies or whoring them out. Also, fluffy brothels. Sure, the luvfags will whine bloody butthurt about it, but that's part of the reason it's still ripe territory for telling tales about. But don't complain about boring abuse stories and then pretend even more boring luvfag stories are better. Even if you're trolling, it's still an outrage. Fluffy stories are serious business. |
| Anonymous #1301427 2 months ago |
Very neat. |
| Giant_Neckbeard #1301445 2 months ago |
Running Anon #1409's post through Babelfish ....
"Waaaaaaaaah not what I like, waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah butt hurts, waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah don't feel like doing any writing myself, waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah!" |
| Tabula_Rojo #1301447 2 months ago |
For fucks sake Anons, there's nothing wrong with a sappy fluffy luv story now and again |
| Anonymous #1301460 2 months ago |
@1301409
I have a better idea. Stop writing. No seriously your ideas are worse than the bloody fanfiction posted by OP, if somebody wants to write; read about it, learn about it, join a writers community, take classes and please stop with the fanfictions, your're just wasting your time with them. |
| 441 #1301629 2 months ago |
@409
Owners sexually abusing fluffies was ALSO done a lot. Seriously, You abused these fucking things in every godamn way conceivable by man, all you left intact was their personal space and their taste for cheetos. |
| 441 #1301638 2 months ago |
Wait, I just noticed a pattern here, When a wub story is written, anon comes and bitches about it, when a abuse story, I come and bitch about it.
It's like the Yin-Yang of special needs. |
| Shaggy #1301682 2 months ago |
Yay, a fluffy love story with some real substance and story elements. Why can't people write more stuff like this? It's not really a sappy love story, it can be seen more as some guy conflicting as to whether he should help out animals that was dumped off for whatever reason. |
| Anonymous #1301694 2 months ago |
Beautifully done. Maybe if you do an edit, add a litterbox so the anal-retentive complaintards will be satisfied. Otherwise this is a cute a mellow story. Good job. |
| Anonymous #1301806 2 months ago |
I tend to prefer happy endings, but there's not a lot of conflict here. Extend it backwards. maybe -- show the fluffy ponies getting abandoned and growing desperate as it gets cold. You have a happy ending, but happy endings work best as a form of release from pathos, and there's not much pathos prior to this. |
| FeralSocks018 #1301882 2 months ago |
Did someone kill Ghost and post in his name, or is he just not super angry anymore?
Either way, this was a nice, relaxed story. |
| lordanubis #1301929 2 months ago |
When Ghost writes about fluffy love, I'm not going to argue with a good thing.
This story warmed my heart, Ghost. I hope you make more like it. |
| Anonymous #1302054 2 months ago |
Oooh baebes! Mama twyin! Mama twyin!
How pitifully sad. |
| Anonymous #1302219 2 months ago |
Like this story. Please write more of these, it's a pleasant change from the usual animal-abuse fantasies. |
| cthulhlu #1302951 2 months ago |
the thing about the abuse storys is that they are just plain boring, fluffy pomy dose something, fluffy pony owner kills it in horrible way, owner fells totaly justified, faces no consquences, the end. |
| Anonymous #1303496 2 months ago |
I just love how the anons crushed all the writer's hopes of thinking he made a good story. |
| Anonymous #1303549 2 months ago |
@#1303496: So the story's not good? Thanks for the warning. |
| deathproofpony #1303597 2 months ago |
^^
it's funny that you think a bunch of cowardly anons would affect what ghost writes. it's probably the same 1 or 2 butthurt abusefags posting over and over while masturbating with sandpaper and stomping on kittens. Cute story, ghost. I liked it. |
| Ghosts44 #1303869 2 months ago |
Oh for fucks sake you crybabies. YEAH GUYS, NOT LIKE I UPLOADED A SHIT TON OF ABUSE FOR YOU, A MAN CAN'T FEEL LIKE WRITING SOMEHTING HAPPY FOR ONCE? GOD DAMNIT. |
| Ghosts44 #1303884 2 months ago |
DON'T LIKE HOW I WROTE? IMAGINE YOUR OWN ENDING BUT DON'T BE A NIGGER AND COMMENT IT. |
| Anonymous #1304663 2 months ago |
@884
>wake up >take all the fluffies and dump them in the blender >WILL IT BLEND?! >yes.jpg >pour fluffy smoothie into a glass >chug it like a badass >become Adonis >an hour passes >you're now surrounded by lesbians (mythology gag hoooo!) >wonder just what the hell those scientists used to make fluffies >start selling fluffy smoothies to neckbeards >all of them become manly sex gods as well >you're filthy rich >no, not the pony >just a guy who's now king of the world >always carry a photo of the fluffies you brutally murdered for kicks >they were delicious >chug another fluffy smoothie >throw the cup at ghost >he's crying in a corner because his luvfag story sucked >lifeisgood.jpg |
| deathproofpony #1305279 2 months ago |
^^
you mad, bro? |
| Anonymous #1305393 2 months ago |
Does very one really complain when someone makes a fluffy story where there is kindness and not violence and randome abuse? If you ask me, this was a great story. It was cute, kind, and happy. Thank you for this and feel free to call me a love fag or whatever you poeple say to readers who enjoy a good non-violent fluffy story.
Yours truly, Everyone who likes cute fluffy stories |
| Anonymous #1305404 2 months ago |
Ghost you did a great job! Btw this is the same anon as ^^ |
| Anonymous #1305412 2 months ago |
Sam anon as above* is what I meant to say |
| Anonymous #1310815 2 months ago |
I bet 663's father never told him that he was proud of him or loved him. |
| PhilSrobeighn #1318011 2 months ago |
This inspires me to write a similar story where the non-fluffy-wanting but still-kind human rescues the fluffies on a temp basis during x weather disaster then they go back to finding a permanent home. |
| Anonymous #1325677 2 months ago |
That was cute. =] |