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| Giant_Neckbeard #1293439 2 months ago |
Op here, tell me what you think.
Also tags: cannibals fluffies_abusing_fluffies fluffy_pony fluffy_pony_dies fluffy_text foals grimdark_fluffies mares rats |
| Bronyboy #1293473 2 months ago |
I do love me some Zodd. I see him less as evil and more stupid. Besides, he may be a crazed fluffy rapist, but No-Lips is gonna need that power if they want to go up against cannibal fluffies.
I don't know what blue-horn counts as, but he is a dick. Clever though. |
| Anonymous #1293474 2 months ago |
It's good, but I don't really like the idea of the Crump herd being able to hurt rats and eating them.
As for the yellow pegasus, I prefer him to wait. |
| Anonymous #1293478 2 months ago |
Finally.
Good old fluffy death. |
| Anonymous #1293482 2 months ago |
@#1293474: Perhaps they eat rats that already died a few days ago from sickness and old age? |
| Anonymous #1293507 2 months ago |
Blue-horn is pretty much an asshole, but Zodd is Trouble with a capital T. Big guy is too stupid to know his own limits.
To quote one of my favorite authors, "too stupid to see that his actions will end with him dead and the whole place burning." That level of stupid. The dangerous level. |
| Anonymous #1293535 2 months ago |
Well, since Blue Horn and Zodd are both complete monsters, I'd prefer to see them die violent, brutal deaths. Also, Zodd would be better as an enemy to the herd, if only because I hate to imagine the soul crushing tragedy that would come from him staying with them.
As for the yellow pegasus smarty, he thinks fluffies are idiots, seemed to care at least a bit about the well being of his herd and had to disband it after the raid. He's positioned to go rogue as a temporary recurring antagonist. However, it'd be awesome if he got a big damn hero moment during a battle with Blue Horn or Zodd and wound up earning a place for himself in No-Name's herd. If any of the villains has the potential for a heel face turn, it would be the pegasus smarty. Heck, he'd even be with "his Mares" again. |
| Bronyboy #1293561 2 months ago |
@1293507
The way I see it, Zodd may be big and powerful but when he gets called out on his actions he turns into a big blubbering baby. He ain't evil, he's just stupid. As long as somebody keeps him in line, he's still a valuable asset to the herd. Blue Horn's just waiting for the opportunity to fuck shit up. A schemer like that can only end up causing trouble for the herd. He's obviously poised to try and take over the first chance he gets. And if that fails he'll build an army and storm Haven. Zodd's not smart enough to rally an army, at least not one big enough to storm Haven. Even if he did, he'd just end up getting himself killed. |
| Giant_Neckbeard #1293565 2 months ago |
I have plans for both Blue-Horn and Zodd, and let's just say Blue-Horn's plans are going to hit snags as time goes by. He's too impressed with himself to be a truly effective leader, and his attitude towards Earth Fluffies and Pegasus Fluffies will alienate strong allies.
The Yellow Pegasus ... I don't know. I think he might take his Herd into the Underground in search of his Mares. Or he might very well start absorbing the 'refugees' from the other Herds that were shattered during the Raid (Two dueling Unicorns Herd, Safe Bed herd) and become a powerful opponent for No-Lips Herd. Zodd, as thing stand, I think I might make him a Lone Wolf, running around and taking whatever he wants from the other Herds and gathering like-minded Stallions into an army under him. |
| Anonymous #1293579 2 months ago |
Zodd will probably end up taking out Blue-Horn in a heroic sacrafice. |
| Anonymous #1293611 2 months ago |
Maybe Zodd will end up adopted by someone just as smart as him...
"Me am Bizarro. Me am hate fluffi pone very much. Me am unhappy me not found him." (just kidding) |
| andrewmyles #1293732 2 months ago |
I smell big fluffy pony war.
The ending with cannibal fluffies made me giggle. don't like rats. Rats taste bad. Great chapter! |
| Anonymous #1293759 2 months ago |
I love the fact that you keep the 'main cast' at a steady number but keep them with different personalities.
Zodd Fluffehraeper scares the hell outta me, makes me think of a mentally retarded circus freak. Blue-Horn reminds of of Starscream. No-Name should have a Heroic Hairstyle (lol). Tricks, Wittles and Honey are going to be the comedy relief. No-Lips is a grizzled veteran. I see Romantic Conflict between Clover and Wed for No-Name's affections. But you'll probably turn it into Love-love Hugbox Sugarshit... |
| Giant_Neckbeard #1293774 2 months ago |
For the last time, I do not go to 4Chan, nor do I post there. Please stop tagging this as 4Chan.
And Mods, is this Explicit-Worthy or just Questionable? @ Anon 3759 I honestly never thought of putting Honey, Tricks and Wittles as the Comedic Trio .... might be worth pursuing, actually. And no, while the Fluffy Armada, aka Curse_these_ponies_they_drive_me_to_drink could certainly be seens as a 'love-fic', Grimdark_Fluffies is most certainly NOT going to head that direction. I'm aiming for an ending that, while 'happy', is still going to be hopelessly stained with tragedy and heartache as I can when a story involves sentient child-minded miniature horse-sheep-things. |
| Anonymous #1294075 2 months ago |
I read the bit about the Fluffies and the Bed and I cried.
Poster/Writer is a terrible person. Poor Fluffies only wanted to be warm and hug each other. Instead we got "HURR DURR bits of wood impaling every Fluffy on the Bed!" Fucking Sick. |
| Anonymous #1294078 2 months ago |
^where can I read about that story? |
| Giant_Neckbeard #1294114 2 months ago |
@ Anon #4078, I am assuming you mean the 'happy' Story? Just search for Owner_is_destined_to_suffer and curse_these_ponies_they_drive_me_to_drink
The other chapters of this particular story can be found under grimdark_fluffies. |
| Anonymous #1294124 2 months ago |
No, I actually meant the story about the bed which impales the fluffy ponies Anon 4075 has mentioned. |
| Giant_Neckbeard #1294168 2 months ago |
Ah. It's about the middle of the 'text page'. Quite literally the 'main event' of this chapter.
I'm sorry you disliked that, Anon #4075, but at the same point I wanted to try and bring forth the image that Feral Fluffies are inherently more selfish, as people in harsh circumstances are often selfish, driven and absorbed with the day-to-day struggle. A Well Cared For Fluffy would probably give their Owner the fluff off their back if it was asked. A Feral Fluffy would probably try to steal your food and run away the first chance they get. |
| Giant_Neckbeard #1294189 2 months ago |
^ Continuing, you'd probably need to read from the start to understand what's going on.
For the TL;DR, Blue-Horn incites a riot amongst the Feral Herd, hoping to distract them long enough for him to steal away a few mares. He sneaks into the Herd and gets the Herd to believe that if they can sleep with the Pregnant Mares in the old wooden bed, they can be warm too. It works too well, and the rest of the Herd starts to crush the pregnant mares, and then tear each other to pieces when none of them can get warm. He manages to 'steal' two pregnant mares, then realises he'll never get them away before the Herd's Smarty Friend figures out what's going on, so he pushes more buttons and then watches as the Herd self-destructs as the rotting wooden bed starts to fall to pieces, the wooden supports snapping and driving up into the Fluffies still on the bed, and then the whole thing collapses, trapping the survivors in the remains. |
| Anonymous #1294194 2 months ago |
Ah, found it. Thanks, Giant_Neckbeard. Didn't remember about the beds collapsing and the survivors slipping on fluffy pony blood and dead foals. |
| Anonymous #1299674 2 months ago |
Blue Horn definitely sounds racist here, but he's not EVIL persay. Just dickishly pragmatic. He NEVER expected the conflict he sparked to escalate to such a level of brutality.
Meanwhile Zodd is slowly turning into a sex obsessed rapist. I think at this point he's too stupid to KNOW he's doing anything wrong and is merely pleasing his libido the only way he knew how, but it could change quickly. I would like to see more of that cannibal fluffy herd. Interesting villainous counterpart to the Haven herd is say. |
| Anonymous #1302451 2 months ago |
Will ferals meet their doom?
Sorry, but I deeply hate feral fluffies, so I like feral-fluff-abuse. |
| Anonymous #1433596 1 month ago |
Equines are herbivores, how many times do I have to remind about this? <sigh> |