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| etc7 #1293065 2 months ago |
way too long for a greentext. |
| Fluffy_Writer #1293083 2 months ago |
I like.
I like. |
| Shaggy #1293123 2 months ago |
Not bad. If people don't like these stories then why comment? I watched The Girl Next Door because it was interesting, messed up, but interesting. |
| Shaggy #1293137 2 months ago |
This one. That movie is just as bad as fluffy abuse. A girl getting tortured then killed for no real reason. |
| Anonymous #1293152 2 months ago |
link to first part? |
| Shaggy #1293158 2 months ago |
>>169665 |
| Anonymous #1293304 2 months ago |
This story is the stereotype of what luvfags think all abuse stories are. And that's why it's terrible. It doesn't have any passion or creativity. It's just the description of a psychopath torturing fluffies and not even getting any significant enjoyment out of it. Also, most of the abuse is physical. Physical abuse should teach the fluffy a lesson, or be the cherry on top after some psychological abuse. This...ugh. It's boring, flat and disappointing, like OP was trying to mock abuse fags.
As for constructive criticism, this story series could be improved greatly by giving the owner some goddamn character instead of keeping him a flat two dimensional psychopath that lives only to be a fluffy killing machine. I'd like to think most abuse lovers aren't batshit crazy animal abusing nutjobs, and it's really hard to relate to or enjoy a character that doesn't even seem human. |
| Shaggy #1293310 2 months ago |
I'm mainly going to write stories about some guy named The Exterminator. He kills fluffy ponies in fast and painless ways due to traumatic experiences with them in the past. He also sees how society teats them and aims to end their suffering as quickly as possible. |
| Shaggy #1293312 2 months ago |
treats* |
| Anonymous #1293373 2 months ago |
I like the graphic description of the pain and the suffering of the fluffy ponies. |
| Anonymous #1293521 2 months ago |
@shaggy Now you did it, man... Won't be long before we read about fluffies with huge boobs. |