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| NightJack #1289779 2 months ago |
Just going to point one thing out.
>you have zero feeling towered them >so you hate them more then anything So do you have no feeling or do you? |
| PandaSennin #1289793 2 months ago |
^ Probably not which is to be expected of people who write most of these stories. |
| Anonymous #1289795 2 months ago |
Thanks for the warning.
This is actually a very interesting description of senseless sadism. Uncanny. I particularily love how the exposition states you have no feelings for fluffies, but you proceed to murder them. That's not "having no emotions", that's called hate. |
| Ginger_Fig #1289899 2 months ago |
There's a little gender swapping here...when you saw the green unicorns horn off. You saw his horn off then shove it up her ass.
Also, if they're so terrified of you why did the blue earth fluffy have the nerve to puff up her cheeks and threaten you? |
| Giant_Neckbeard #1289901 2 months ago |
Wasn't there a horror-thriller movie set to this, psycho in the woods kidnapping people to torture because he'd run out of other taboos, lost the 'thrill' of them and murdering folk was all he had left. |
| Anonymous #1289967 2 months ago |
This was actually really awesome! |
| deathproofpony #1289982 2 months ago |
Well, it's still cheaper than killing hookers. |
| Bronyboy #1290283 2 months ago |
Its pretty much your standard "fluffy ponies get abused by a guy who has little to no feeling for them and gets his jollies from killing them" with a bit of a sympathetic back story. But there was one thing I liked. The fluffies realized that if they talked they'd get singled out. They're learning. I'd love to see that explored. |
| FeralSocks018 #1290425 2 months ago |
Oh my god this is boring. You're trying too hard and the methods of death are unimaginatively over-the-top.
0/10 |
| NotThatAnyoneCares #1290458 2 months ago |
At this point I'm starting to suspect there's a computer program that just churns this garbage out.
You type in a number of fluffy ponies to be brutalized and a setting, and it spits out some mechanical violence. I dub this computer Tortureporn XL. |
| Anonymous #1291064 2 months ago |
I didn't like this story. It was better than the luvfag hugbox shit, but it's rather bland. There's not enough description, so it's hard to really enjoy the abuse. There's also no significant motive or psychological torture. This is just...flat. It's not even played for comedy. There's just nothing redeeming about the story, even if there's nothing terribly wrong with it either. |
| Anonymous #1291086 2 months ago |
@NotThatAnyoneCares: Somebody really ought to build that computer. It would become our new overlord. |
| Appleloosa #1294182 2 months ago |
Wow, awesomely detailed death and torture. |