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| eleven #1281202 2 months ago |
and part 5 of 5, immediately precedes 168750; yep, I'm a sick fuck |
| NightJack #1281226 2 months ago |
>War and Peace of fluffy stories
Nope, to short for that. |
| eleven #1281228 2 months ago |
Also, the "Wear and Peace" joke is because I assume this thing is a lot longer than it should be |
| eleven #1281231 2 months ago |
"Nope, to short for that."
Well, that is a relief |
| NightJack #1281255 2 months ago |
I say that because I've read fanfic shorter then this but fell longer, you didn't add unneeded details, like when the one falls from the table, you just that it broke his neck not going into long details about it. |
| PhilSrobeighn #1281521 2 months ago |
This was actually too short in my opinion
I would have liked to see the owner's entire slow decent into madness with Cocktor Wanghattan Pone |
| lordanubis #1282287 2 months ago |
You must be new to fluffy stories if you thought that was long. My Scootato Gun story was longer than that. The Lake was even longer, as was The Shipwreck.
Also, learn to tag your posts properly. |
| Anonymous #1282358 2 months ago |
This was decent, but not great, if only because 521 is right. It would've been nice to slowly see the owner go from idealistic and fluffy loving to cynical and fluffy hating. |
| Tabula_Rojo #1285114 2 months ago |
yeah bro story was not very long and honestly didn't need the explicit mark |
| eleven #1344778 2 months ago |
It was indeed my first attempt; one of those situations where I just sort of wrote half of it, forgot about it, found it again a couple days later, and then just shrugged and decided to finish it
Honestly, it was received a lot better than I expected it to be |