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| JP #1281079 2 months ago |
That was funny :D |
| Anonymous #1281086 2 months ago |
Who calls a fluffy pone Xavier? It's like calling a hamster Nebuchadnezzar.. |
| PhilSrobeighn #1281096 2 months ago |
Nebuchadnezzar is an awesome name for a hampster |
| The_Mungoman #1281102 2 months ago |
@1086 Hey, I had a fluffy called Otto before!
But it turned out he was originally bred in Germany and they named him there... |
| deathproofpony #1281115 2 months ago |
I will now name my next hamster Nebuchadnezzar.
And if I get a second hamster I will name it Super Happy Funtime Hamster. |
| NightJack #1281172 2 months ago |
^ I had a fluffy I named Super Happy Funtime, he came from japan it seems and talked like he was a game show host. |
| NightJack #1281178 2 months ago |
He also liked to kill stray fluffies. :D |
| deathproofpony #1281183 2 months ago |
Oddly enough... Japanese fluffies don't seem to enjoy having Wasabe smeared on their anuses.
Someone needs to do a study on this. |
| Vanner #1281204 2 months ago |
Xavier's pretty smooth for a gay fluffy, if you ask me. |
| The_Mungoman #1281205 2 months ago |
@1183 True... but then again, every second Japanese fluffy is forced to commit seppuku. |
| Tabula_Rojo #1281208 2 months ago |
Someone should do a story about Fluffies in Japan there is alot of potential there |
| Tabula_Rojo #1281212 2 months ago |
also it seems Xavier did know about special hugs like I had hoped... but not in a good way |
| Anonymous #1281225 2 months ago |
It's kind of creepy that they're like babies, but they like mating. |
| deathproofpony #1281280 2 months ago |
Don't let the baby talk fool you... some of those little bastards can be quite cruel. The specific biomechanics of their mouths and throats make the language sound cute like a baby or small child, but imagine if the same animal sounded like an adult.
"I'm gonna give you special hugs... down in Uncle Touchy's naked puzzle basement." |
| Anonymous #1281293 2 months ago |
Martini lives in fluffy Oz |
| Anonymous #1281301 2 months ago |
When you see faggots like JP and The_Mungoman complimenting the story, you know it will suck. |
| NightJack #1281397 2 months ago |
^ When you see someone like this make that kind of comment, you know he has no taste. |
| Appleloosa #1281411 2 months ago |
Yeah, I have no taste for gay fluffy intercourse as some in this comment section do.
This guy's stories doesen't build up an envorinment where you can really imagine what's going on, it's all just blunt descriptionisms. Suffice to say, this writer has a lot to learn. |
| Appleloosa #1281417 2 months ago |
I don't mean to offend though, I know my stories are not that great, but as a fluffy writer, I suggest you to focus on the scenario and put a little less dialogues.
Besides that it's good though. |
| Giant_Neckbeard #1281509 2 months ago |
That's the funny thing about Fluffy Ponies, they're intelligent enough to be able to 'connect the dots', so to say, but few, if any, have the ability to remember all the details.
I imagine it would be kind of like living with extreme short-term memory loss and ADHD on a constant basis. |
| deathproofpony #1281648 2 months ago |
@Appleloosa - it's how I write. I'm not going to change it. I encourage you to filter my stuff if you don't like it.
And you have a nice day there, skipper! |
| NightJack #1282100 2 months ago |
@anon411: No, I mean that you say a story will suck from what other comment on it, try saying what you think is wrong with the story not that because so-and-so compliments a story that's how you tell it's bad. |
| Anonymous #1282176 2 months ago |
I don't normally like reading about gay sex, but when I do, it's in a fluffy pony story.
Anyway, I'm really liking this series. Bad fluffies get abused and good ones get laid. That's the way the world should be. Don't listen to Appleloosa, though. He's just jelly. I've no problem imagining what's going on and the dialogue helps define the personalities of the characters. Also, writing fluffy stories isn't the same as being a novelist. You're not supposed to bust a few brain cells trying to adhere to some people's subjective sense of what a good story is. A good story is a story that people are interested in. This is a good story. As long as it keeps adhering to basic fluffy canon. Bonus points if one of the little buggers gets fired out of an actual fluffy cannon. |
| Anonymous #1446824 1 month ago |
that made me daww all over the place at the end. |