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| JP #1276417 2 months ago |
Eight foals! What are they, finger-sized? Can so small foals even survive? |
| Anonymous #1276436 2 months ago |
This whole series reads like awful fanfiction. |
| Giant_Neckbeard #1276474 2 months ago |
Hug ALL the Babies! |
| Anonymous #1276545 2 months ago |
Stay tuned for the continuing adventures of "Author Self-Insert Tragic Mary Sue Meta Revenge Fantasy Meta Continuity Fanfiction" |
| Anonymous #1278198 2 months ago |
@436
That's probably because it is. It's awful fanfiction about a bunch of serial killer. @545 Do I have to? Because this series is just too sad. The serial killers always get away with killing a bunch of poor, innocent people who never did anything wrong. Law enforcement never does anything about it. It's not only nonsensical, it sparks righteous outrage about why the characters haven't all been dealt swift justice by now. Not to mention it's tl;dr for a story where fluffies are only minor characters. |
| JoyKillR-II #1278218 2 months ago |
@ #1278198 - "Poor?" "Innocent?" "Never did anything wrong?" |
| JoyKillR-II #1278234 2 months ago |
@ #1278198 - Also, do you WANT me to make all of the abusers they confront ACTUAL criminals to clear that "poor and innocent" image from you minds? I could do that if it's bugging you so much. |
| Anonymous #1278861 2 months ago |
^Wouldn't matter. Going around systematically murdering people you don't like makes you a serial killer, whether they're criminals or not. It almost makes it worse if they're real criminals, since then your characters could just call the police and let the criminal justice system do it's job.
You wouldn't, for example, support letting store managers shoot shoplifters on sight unless you're a psychopath. You're basically writing the exact same kind of ultraviolence porn fiction as fluffy pony abuse fics, just with a different abuse target and a different justification. Also filled with your terrible OCs. I'm looking at you, Mrs "strikingly beautiful woman with a dark, tragic past who lives by herself on a houseboat with her quirky animal companion and is super-humanly good at fighting for some reason and travels the world murdering people and getting away with it scott free" |
| JoyKillR-II #1278932 2 months ago |
@#1278861 - Well, when I made a post asking what the reader wanted from my stories, they said "rescue from abuse." I'm just writing what they want! |