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| PonyRIG #1268847 3 months ago |
please....add the "fluffy text" tag.... |
| Anonymous #1268877 3 months ago |
It's a good one. And it's funny to see how the fluffy filly is abandoned and dies with utter pain as she should. |
| NightJack #1268886 3 months ago |
That's not right at all, the ants would attack as soon as the fluffies touched the colony, not after their pee is on it. |
| Appleloosa #1268926 3 months ago |
@1268886
Can you confirm that statement for every kind of ant colony and every ant species? That's what I thought. |
| lordanubis #1268950 3 months ago |
Oh god 2 insect attacks posted in one day? I'm scared now. |
| NightJack #1268969 3 months ago |
@Appleloosa: Ya, I guess that's true, but most species I know of will attack if you even get to close to the colony. |
| Anonymous #1268989 3 months ago |
Just how badly is Ponibooru contaminated with this stupid bullshit? |
| Appleloosa #1268997 3 months ago |
@1268969
Most of ant species have an instinctive system that allows them to detec vibrations on the ground (or even in the air), that said, some of them might attack beforehand, but not everyone and always. That depends on a series of factors such as time of the year, weather, species and so on. |
| Giant_Neckbeard #1269085 3 months ago |
You were focusing a little bit too much on her bum there mate ....
Overall, a very sad story. I can imagine, if the dog doesn't get the Mare, she'll come back and cry her heart out because the Filly won't move or talk to her anymore. |
| Anonymous #1269087 3 months ago |
Appleloosa im sorry but this time its not so brilliant,its neraly just like the other,but worse...In the other,the mare choosed to let the fillies die and after that she go nothing,sacrificing her fillies in vain.In this one,the mare had to escape from a dog which surely caught her in 10 secs or less,knowing the average speed of a fluffy pony.This wasnt so good IN MY OPINION also srry for bad grammar but im not native english speaker so... |
| Appleloosa #1269136 2 months ago |
@1269087
I didn't describe what happened to the mare because it seemed pretty obvious and unecessary. Also, I never aimed to make a brilliant story. Who does anyway? It's just a subfandom that doesn't make sense of a show that doesn't make sense. |
| Ginger_Fig #1269155 2 months ago |
I liked it...creative death described in horrifying detail. That's always a plus with fluffy pony stories. |
| Fluffy_Writer #1269194 2 months ago |
I'm with you Ginger.
And honestly, Appleoosa, don't get the butthurt effect what you write! Crazy abusive owners are always fun. |
| NightJack #1269207 2 months ago |
I do like this one, the only problem I had with the last one was how the mother fluffy did at the end choose the food over the life of her babies, but only for the fact that maternal instincts in all animals override everything with fear being to only thing not to, so she should of died of starvation before letting her foals die. |
| Anonymous #1269241 2 months ago |
its 1269087 here.
hey appleloosa i thought over it and I think maybe you coul write something about a mare wich has both back legs broken and her foals are put in the way of something big and dangerous like a stone ball or something,and the mare must reach them before they get smashed by the ball. I dont feel like writing,doesnt stakc with me,but you're a good writer maybe you could put all this together and make a good story |
| Appleloosa #1269255 2 months ago |
@Fluffy_Writer
Indeed, I usually stick to my opinions when I comes of making OC, but this was a fun writing as well. @1269241 Thanks for the compliment. I will think about it, but I only make OC from times to times, I might end up making something totally different by then. |
| Mezzo #1269284 2 months ago |
Fluffy Writer, abusive owners are never fun. This is a terrible story, and only sickos will like it. Also, add death tags! I want to avoid these horrible excuses for writing. |
| Anonymous #1269315 2 months ago |
Only luvfags of diminutive intelligence with chronic rump pains would actually get offended by these sort of stories. But I agree on putting more precise tags. |
| Mezzo #1269338 2 months ago |
@Anon #1269315: Using the term 'luvfag' negates your crude attempt at sophistication. |
| Anonymous #1269708 2 months ago |
I'm butthurt that there isn't a sadistic owner in this story. Your argument for not having one is invalid.
However, because of the deadly anilingus, I suppose this story is satisfactory. |
| PhilSrobeighn #1270509 2 months ago |
When I read the title, I knew this story would prey upon one of my biggest phobias. You did not disappoint.
Yeah, I played way to much SimAnt as a kid. |