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| sigh #1267021 3 months ago |
Now THIS is how you do a proper fluffy abuse story. |
| Chance #1267027 3 months ago |
I feel like I have just become slightly less intelligent. How odd. |
| Anonymous #1267028 3 months ago |
Ah, I love it how the fluffy protagonist immediately forgets all about the dam being abused and killed.
Well done, deathproofpony. |
| Anonymous #1267029 3 months ago |
Yeah, like this bipolar writer deserved to use the fluffy_abuse tag. |
| deathproofpony #1267035 3 months ago |
lolwut |
| Anonymous #1267042 3 months ago |
@1267021
You're one of those that kisses the ass of every writer that writes fluffy luvfaggoty stories. What does a faggot like you know about fluffy abuse? Go choke in the next dick you suck. |
| CodenameOne #1267043 3 months ago |
Yeeeees.
Annoying bratty Fluffies like Violet piss me off, especially since she was so selfish and was more concerned with food than creating life to continue her species!!! |
| sigh #1267044 3 months ago |
Is bipolar the new autism? Is that a thing now? |
| Anonymous #1267047 3 months ago |
@#1267035
You're trying to bring luvfags into abuse stories by using bipolarity shifts in them, and let me say you something...they're shitty. |
| 441 #1267050 3 months ago |
Everytime I see one of these stories, a little bit of my soul dies.
Once it all dies, so will all the traces of my humanity, and I won't have any qualms about killing people. |
| sigh #1267055 3 months ago |
Good luck with that 441. Best wishes. |
| Anonymous #1267066 3 months ago |
@1267050
Do you consider this sad? Haha what a newfag. |
| Anonymous #1267091 3 months ago |
Special hugs. I love that euphemism. It takes away all innocence that fluffy ponies have.
They are stupid vermin, raping each another, not caring or showing empathy towards anybody once it is out of their sight, make terrible accidents harming themselves and other fluffy ponies, and in their stupidity, the only way they can try to make something better is to hug something, which will in every case just make things worse. Fluffy ponies are despicable vermin, now and forever! |
| Anonymous #1267092 3 months ago |
Cute ending. |
| 441 #1267093 3 months ago |
^Am I supposed to feel bad that I think abuse of sentient creatures, fictional or not, is disturbing and saddening? |
| mindcannon #1267096 3 months ago |
I'm sorry but every time I see the words BIG MAN I think sweet Bro and hella Jeff. |
| Anonymous #1267110 3 months ago |
violet deserved it. okay, actually, all fluffy ponies deserve every kind of imaginable cruelty to them. |
| 441 #1267115 3 months ago |
Seriously, What's up with all the fluffy pony abuse? Am I missing something here? Is this some troll mindset? Are Fluffy ponies considered despicable in the fandom? Am I the only sane person in a world of madmen or the only madman in a world of sane people? |
| Saint_Braeburn #1267118 3 months ago |
So was Violet acting like that because she was spoiled, starving or experiencing some pregnancy related mood-swing? |
| mindcannon #1267121 3 months ago |
So they deserve pain just for existing? |
| 441 #1267136 3 months ago |
I mean, fuck, this is a My Little Pony fandom, Why are we a bunch of bloodhounds? |
| Saint_Braeburn #1267153 3 months ago |
@Anon110
Why? I mean I enjoy well written Grimdark, stories like this, but I never understood, why some people believed that fluffy ponies deserved cruelty and death just for living. |
| Anonymous #1267157 3 months ago |
There are texts and pictures far far worse of the main ponies being abused and killed than there is about fluffy ponies. |
| Saint_Braeburn #1267161 3 months ago |
^
And your point is? |
| 441 #1267163 3 months ago |
^A massacre doesn't excuse a murder.
This is STILL fucked up. |
| Anonymous #1267180 3 months ago |
^implying killing and abusing fictional creatures in fiction is fucked up.
Go grow a thicker skin, son. Next you're going to claim that all these people will go murder little kids and eat their entrails or something equally stupid like a soccer mom. |
| NightJack #1267181 3 months ago |
>A massacre doesn't excuse a murder.
Umm 441, you do no that a massacre is basically murder just to a group not one, right? |
| NightJack #1267183 3 months ago |
*do know |
| Saint_Braeburn #1267195 3 months ago |
@441
Like I said before, I like this story because it was compelling, dark, and interesting. Raging against it just because It had Fluffies getting hurt is like raging against "Old Yeller" just because a dog got shot. I don't understand the people that declare that all fluffies should die or that there death is justified because they have the same faults that are present in nearly all mammal species, but I don't think there views represent the majority of the people who like these stories. So did I answer your question? |
| NightJack #1267199 3 months ago |
Me, I don't mind this story, it's not pointlessly killing all the fluffys, Martini does what he is told and as such not getting abused, the ones calling deathproofpony bipolar and stuff need to shut up, you don't like it then shut up and stop whining about it. |
| 441 #1267201 3 months ago |
^Yes, what i mean to say is just because something really bad happened, doesn't mean that something bad stops being bad.
Maybe I used a comparison a bit too dramatic, but hey, I couldn't pound my caveman brain for anything better, so... yeah. Also, Anon, It's not that I think people should be jailed for writing abuse stories like this, It's just that I find pointless gore and abuse stories like this to be really unapealling, that and I have a personal belief that any fictional story offers some insight on how the author's mind works. Granted, I may be full of shit on that one, but hey, at least I KNOW I may be full of shit. |
| 441 #1267211 3 months ago |
@Saint
Also, I Didn't rage, I stated my opinion in a civilized, if a bit acidic manner. You want rage? FUCK YOU STUPID SHITHEADS, WHY ARE YOU WRITING THIS SHIT? YOU SHOULD ALL BE COMMITED FOR PRODUCING THIS CRAP, I MEAN WHAT THE FUCK, WHO GOES AROUND SHOVING DRILLS UP TINY FLUFFY PONIES HEADS? I HATE ALL OF YOU, NOW I WILL GO HATE ON FURRIES AND WHINE ABOUT SHIT NOBODY CARES BECAUSE I KNOW THERE WILL BE NO REPERCUSSIONS FOR IT AS I MASK MYSELF BEHIND THREE NUMBERS. |
| Saint_Braeburn #1267212 3 months ago |
@Anon180
I do love it when a person on a site for cartoon ponies, tells another person to grow up. |
| 441 #1267217 3 months ago |
@212 You tell that meanie poopie head! I bet he drinks his own pee and wets his bed at night! |
| Anonymous #1267218 3 months ago |
@441
You seem that kind of guy that comment with "dawww" and "nghhh" in every sugary shit pictured posted in this site And there's something wrong with that AS WELL. |
| 441 #1267225 3 months ago |
@218
Why is there something wrong with that? Not that I do that, I comment, not write a combination of letters expressing my feelings about a particular picture....wait.... |
| Mayclore #1267226 3 months ago |
You magnificent bastard. |
| Anonymous #1267230 3 months ago |
Oh come on guys. 441 is only pretending to be some shitty luvfag who is really getting offended by fluffy pony abuse. In truth, nobody gets his jimmies rustled about fluffy ponies being offed. |
| 441 #1267231 3 months ago |
@Mayclore
...Godammit, I'm the biggest fucking idiot in the world. |
| Saint_Braeburn #1267251 3 months ago |
@441
1)I meant "Rage" as in speak out against. 2) You didn't answer my question. |
| 441 #1267257 3 months ago |
@Saint
Yes, You did answer my question. Now if you excuse me, I will beat myself in the head for being a utter tool. |
| Anonymous #1267272 3 months ago |
The two parts I've read of this have been really well written. I hope this doesn't turn into pointless gore -- it's been incredibly compelling so far. |
| Saint_Braeburn #1267285 3 months ago |
You know I might be mistaken but no Fluffy had sex in this story. So I'm going to get rid of the "Fluffy_sex" tag. |
| Saint_Braeburn #1267288 3 months ago |
@Anon272
There was a part before this? |
| Mayclore #1267315 3 months ago |
@441 You are? |
| Appleloosa #1267395 3 months ago |
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| deathproofpony #1268848 3 months ago |
@ Saint_Braeburn
this is actually part 3. The "Martini" series. And for the record: I don't get any enjoyment from fluffy torture. what happens in this series are the horrors seen from the point of view of a breeder fluffy. And, sadly, most of these instances of abuse are based on actual news stories from violent breeders. I believe someone was going to write a fluffy pony mill story... THAT'S going to be some fucked up shit. I've heard horror stories about puppy mills and I've seen the results of their "work". If you don't like abuse, avoid the Martini series and read my other stuff. It's much more fluffy-friendly. I just write this stuff as it comes to me. I don't pretend to be any sort of skilled writer but I'm an absolute shite artist so it's the only way I can contribute something creative. It relieves boredom, especially at work. This one got a lot darker than I thought it would... I think you'll find part 4 isn't this gory. previous Martini stories: Part I: 166712 Part II: 166830 (sorry - don't know how to make weblinks on here) |
| Anonymous #1268896 3 months ago |
^saying that part 4 won't be gory
That's a little bit sad. But then again, Martini is given a walk so that it can go rape other fluffy mares, so it's okay. |
| Anonymous #1269617 2 months ago |
Good Fluffy Martini knows not to cross Boss Man. |
| Mayclore #1270142 2 months ago |
@deathproofpony Yeah, I'm writing the fluffy mill story now.
Spoiler: It's not pretty. |
| catrianheir #1317201 2 months ago |
Is it just me or are these dudes who read these abuse things coming off as claiming that "fucked up abuse is the only way; any form of emotion other than bloodlust is a sign of weakness; any word with the root being pathy is for pussies; sadism is the only way to truly get off." That is the vibe I'm getting. I mean I get off to this stuff perhaps more so than your average male human, but damn, it's good to take a break every once in a while. Like I always say: You know it's time for a change of pace once you realize you have a boner playing Dead Space. The great thing about that is that I actually say that IRL, a lot.
I just realized that that ryhms..... fuck. What I'm trying to say is: abuse, sadism, masochism, and any other type of "thing" stemming from such is all well and good, but only when you can adequately stomach, understand, and perhaps even enjoy everything else can you feel true happiness. |