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| sigh #1266715 3 months ago |
Trying too hard. |
| Ghosts44 #1266718 3 months ago |
Yep, being bored then having an idea pop into your head is, in fact, me trying too hard. |
| sigh #1266734 3 months ago |
No, I mean the abuse itself is trying too hard. It goes past the point of interestingness and turns into, "Yep. That there's some torture. Neat. *click* " |
| Anonymous #1266766 3 months ago |
Your methods are boring. You need to invent more creative ways to kill them. |
| Arne #1266775 3 months ago |
It's true. I'm pretty sure I made this comparison on another fluffy story, can't really remember what one, but it's like a shitty torture porn movie... it has violence and that's really it. There's nothing really there that grabs your attention and makes you legitimately interested. |
| Anonymous #1266779 3 months ago |
I like it. Well done Ghosts44. |
| CodenameOne #1266889 3 months ago |
MORE creative ways, anon 766?
He shoved one into the corpse of a dead friend! This story was awesome! I was literally drooling at the abuse. I'm favoriting this; kill more fluffies, Ghosts44. |
| Ghosts44 #1266920 3 months ago |
Creative? I...I..I...shoved a live one in a dead one...I...I....poured boiling lead...and cock and ball torture...I...I..okay.jpg
@CodenameOne You may want to see a doctor about that. I know a good one, hes a pretty cool guy he has a blue box and doesn't afraid of anything |
| NightJack #1267026 3 months ago |
BAD, it's bad, like I said lots of time, if you abuse and kill them just for the sake of doing it then it's just lame, no matter how creative you are it just sucks to do it like that, if you just killed then to clean out the abandoned building that is just wasting time, just use a quick method and do it like it's just rats. |
| NightJack #1267031 3 months ago |
*killed them like that just to |
| lordanubis #1267032 3 months ago |
The corpse shoving was creative. The rest, ehhhhh. |
| lordanubis #1267034 3 months ago |
Oh, and the lead. That was good too. But there was no elaboration. Just "yep, poured molten metal on the last one. that had to hurt". |
| NightJack #1267052 3 months ago |
And I'm not complaining like I don't like the killing of them, I'm not a big fan ether, but it's how the so many that do like it give mixed messages, saying both that they deserve it but also saying they are vermin, if they are vermin then why put so much effort in abusing and killing them. |
| Ghosts44 #1267138 3 months ago |
Well theres never going to be a fluffy pony abuse story where the abuse is being done any actual reason at all. By this I mean actual abuse and torture not just killing the thing with a woodchipper.... actually scratch that...I uploaded one with a reason behind it when I was an anon...
CONTRADICTING YOUR SELF FTW |
| Anonymous #1269576 2 months ago |
Eh, abuse for the sake of abuse. There doesn't seem to be an emotional aspect to it, a sadistic delight in abusing them. No slasher smile, no magnificent bastardism.
The appeal of abuse is taking refuge in audacity. In order to be a good abuse story, it needs to either be funny or so over the top it warrants a thumbs up. This is neither. Even if you type an abuse story, even if it has gratuitous violence, you still need to make the reader feel the thrill of it, as if they were doing the abuse themselves. Playing mind games with fluffies is always a fluff, but they have to be elaborate and drawn out a little in order to maximize suffering, emphasizing the emotions and gestures of both abuser and abusee. This...kind of lacks passion. Still better than a luvfag hugbox story, though. |
| Anonymous #1273110 2 months ago |
Abuse for the sake of abuse. I loved it. Please write more of this. |
| Anonymous #1407208 2 months ago |
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