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| Ghosts44 #1261868 3 months ago |
http://ponibooru.413chan.net/post/view/164416?search=lesbian
THIS WAS WRITTEN AS IF IT IS GOING THROUGH THE MIND OF A FLUFFIES MIND THUS THE HORRIBLE GRAMMAR AND LACK OF PERIODS AND COMMAS ETC |
| deathproofpony #1261888 3 months ago |
liked it. |
| NightJack #1261959 3 months ago |
That... was... odd... |
| Anonymous #1261978 3 months ago |
Peaches is the bitch diva pony, Sweetie is awesome. |
| Ghosts44 #1261979 3 months ago |
Did you read the first part? Makes moar sense if you read that. |
| Anonymous #1261997 3 months ago |
This version is much sadder than the human POV version |
| lordanubis #1262000 3 months ago |
In the future, Ghosts, please do a quick spellcheck before publishing. It's a cute story. |
| NightJack #1262005 3 months ago |
I did, I still find it odd, it's from having fluffy sex explained by a fluffy. |
| Anonymous #1262026 3 months ago |
Lord anubis: I did a spellcheck but felt like editing the thoughts of a fluffy that I already screwed up in terms of punctuation was a lost cause. |
| Anonymous #1262093 3 months ago |
I am disappoint. Not that the story's bad or anything, it just would've been more enjoyable if Grape simply said "buck this" and had his way with both Peaches and Plum whether they liked it or not. |
| Ghosts44 #1262105 3 months ago |
@093
Both Peaches and Plum? INCEST BRO. INCEST. I had to follow part one so meh. |
| Anonymous #1263185 3 months ago |
@2093 Evidently little Grape doesn't have a single nasty bone inside his fluffy body. They say no, he accepts no, even if that makes him sad. |
| Anonymous #1263313 3 months ago |
@Ghost
Retcons and remakes are magic. FIM BRO. FIM. @185 Graep clearly needs his owner to give him a crash course in bosshood. |