
| JoyKillR-II #1259296 3 months ago |
Here are the rest of Kristi's animal lover friends. For those of you about to say "There are no ponies here," there's a fluffy pony on Coco's shoulder, a fluffy foal in Lulu's overall front pocket, and several more fluffy foals in the box she's carrying. |
| JoyKillR-II #1259301 3 months ago |
Oh, yeah, I forgot to mention, Margaret got that claw-mark scar from on of her lifeguard rescues. |
| JP #1259316 3 months ago |
Awww those little foals. |
| The_Mungoman #1259328 3 months ago |
On Coco's shoulder.
Dat fluffy's expression. IT'S SO DERPY! :3 |
| Clopitor_the_Hydrogenous #1259329 3 months ago |
Did Captain Planet ever sleep with an of them? |
| JoyKillR-II #1259382 3 months ago |
And for those of your interested in having a say in what the next "Darla Story" will be about, go here and comment:
http://ponibooru.413chan.net/post/view/164995?search=kristi Otherwise, it will be about a trip to civilization, focus on fluffy ponies, rescuing from abuse, minimal presence of the other OC pony-protectors, and a "generous" amount of "fan service". |
| Anonymous #1259417 3 months ago |
Lulu looks like she's going to saw a fluffy pony off.
That's hilarious. |
| JoyKillR-II #1259423 3 months ago |
@#1259417 - Almost anyone would look like that if they picked fights on a regular basis. |
| Anonymous #1259439 3 months ago |
Damn, when I read the first one they appeared in I literally had iamgined the Two Hairy Bikers and had no clue they were all women. |
| JoyKillR-II #1259444 3 months ago |
@#1259439 - If you're talking about the motorcyclists Tom, Dick, and Harry, these aren't them. There women are the remaining members of the Rainbow Riders. As of now, the three motorcyclists are on their own. |
| JoyKillR-II #1259445 3 months ago |
@#1259439 - And also: Tom, Dick, and Harry are all men. They just happened to be part of a group with four females in it. |
| Anonymous #1259463 3 months ago |
Oh ok, the tags confused me. |
| Anonymous #1259879 3 months ago |
Oh look, it's the hugbox brigade, or rather Bruno's Devils.
It'd be nice to see a story about them taking in feral fluffies who "no wike munstas," demand "sketties," crap all over their floors because the litter box "no smew pwetty," break all their stuff for attention and "hugs" and let other feral fluffies in to rampage. You know, to see just how much they love real fluffies who aren't smart and only become more out of control without discipline, instead of well behaved mary sues incapable of doing any wrong that are in most fluffy love stories. |
| Tabula_Rojo #1259997 3 months ago |
I expected Coco to be more muscular and manish |
| Anonymous #1260331 3 months ago |
Are they supposed to be trannies? Cause they look like trannies. |
| Anonymous #1261158 3 months ago |
Kicking into Artist Mode for a minute here. Ignoring the content and focusing on the artwork itself.
There's some variance to their body-type and build, which is good - but a few things that stick out for me: Coco's head seems small for her frame, and the thickness of her neck draws a lot of attention to that (also, women don't typically have an Adam's apple), as well as the breadth of her shoulders - on the opposite side, Lulu's head seems too big. I think the reason for this is because they all seem to have the same size head, and the same general shape to their faces and features. I'd say vary them a little more. Look at how a black or hispanic woman's face and skull shape differs from a white woman's. Here's some examples I found on Google. Black Woman: http://www.sciencephoto.com/image/320859/530wm/P9800165-Woman_s_face-SPL.jpg http://www.imagesource.com/Doc/IS0/Media/TR4_WATERMARKED/9/7/2/9/IS392-012.jpg http://www.imagesource.com/Doc/IS0/Media/TR4_WATERMARKED/5/1/e/7/IS392-027.jpg Hispanic/Latina Woman: http://image1.masterfile.com/em_w/01/76/49/600-01764981w.jpg http://image1.masterfile.com/em_w/02/20/01/600-02200182w.jpg http://umichsph.files.wordpress.com/2011/10/207288_10100595265305373_2235442_63136782_7145866_n.jpg I'd also do something different with Coco's hair, as negroid hair tends to have a different texture and shape to caucasoid hair - it tends to kink or curl more tightly - though it can be straightened, I've noticed that's more of an African-American trend than Tribal African. Look up some hairstyles to get some ideas. These are only a few examples - the variance between two women in any race can be enormous, but take note of the shape of the face and skull, the size, thickness, definition and shape of the nose, eyebrows and jawline, etc. Race is a lot more than just skin color, artistically-speaking. Also, I like Lulu's pose more than the other two - it's more dynamic, because of the angles you put her shoulders, hips and head at, although I'd move her feet slightly forward to put her head over her center of gravity - you'd fall forward if you stood like that for too long. Coco's head has a slight tip, but her hips and shoulders are aligned in the same direction, and it makes her pose a little boring to look at, while Margaret's pose seems to be a middle ground between the two - it's not as interesting as Lulu's, but not as rigid as Coco's. Practice drawing poses from a curved line of action and get some more fluidity into them. ...that got really long. Sorry about that! Other than that - you seem to be a decent artist, and I'm kind of sorry to find you in this cesspool of a website. Keep practicing! |
| JoyKillR-II #1261676 3 months ago |
@ #1259997 - You don't call Coco muscular and mannish enough?
@ #1260331 - I assure you, they aren't trannies. |
| Anonymous #1261790 3 months ago |
@#1259879: The mary sues will turn the feral fluffy ponies into perfectly well-behaved super-smart fluffy ponies that do everything right.
That's the trait that Mary Sues have. They don't make mistake, and they can turn shitty miniature pig-sheep-horse hybrids into little Fluffy Sues... Now I want to read a story about a Fluffy Sue, who's perfect and glitters and stuff... |
| Anonymous #1261856 3 months ago |
^You sound mad. |
| Anonymous #1261873 3 months ago |
^no you silly anon. I sound insane. |
| Anonymous #1264704 3 months ago |
@1261158
Holy shit. Artistic advice on Ponibooru. |
| Anonymous #1265511 3 months ago |
Remember when fluffy pony stories were about fluffy ponies and not human OCs? |
| Anonymous #1267333 3 months ago |
What is this, is somebody trying to get people to read about their shitty characters by tossing in fluffy ponies?
I just don't get why some think there needs to be OC humans for stories about super retarded mini-ponies created by science. These aren't difficult to write, if you want the stupid thing to live, make it so. No need for an angry black guy or the village people to show up just so the writer can say "take that!" to abusefags. It's more of a lazy cop-out than anything. Disappoint, disappoint everywhere. I too would like to know if they ever slept with Captain Planet. |
| JoyKillR-II #1267837 3 months ago |
@#1267333 - LOL, "village people"... |