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#1258008
3 months ago
Oh god my heart.
deathproofpony
#1258017
3 months ago
good/bad? Sort of got inspiration from The Sixth Sense on this one. It's a bit darker than my other stuff.
NightJack
#1258058
3 months ago
Interesting and nicely done.
Mayclore
#1258071
3 months ago
Well done.
lordanubis
#1258109
3 months ago
I like it.
Saint_Braeburn
#1258158
3 months ago
What A twist.
FeralSocks018
#1258235
3 months ago
Loved it. 10/10.
PhilSrobeighn
#1258238
3 months ago
Now we have human-on-human abuse in fluffy stories

Wow
JP
#1258287
3 months ago
That was good
Anonymous
#1258388
3 months ago
Credit to M. Night Eyeamafluffy for inspiration. ;)
Anonymous
#1258849
3 months ago
Damn you are a good writer!
Ginger_Fig
#1258881
3 months ago
Well done, deathproof!
Giant_Neckbeard
#1258897
3 months ago
So Many Feels ....
Bronyboy
#1259027
3 months ago
Sad now.
Also daw.
CletusDugumphry
#1259380
3 months ago
My tears, oh god my tears, nicely done op.
Anonymous
#1259693
3 months ago
Well, shit.
OP is fucking hypocrite.
He can't stand fluffy abuse, but killing a child is ok with him. What a sick fuck.
Anonymous
#1259816
3 months ago
Miranda was a bad hooman. She should've got the sorry stick, been disciplined in the basement and had her limbs removed so she could never be a bad hooman again. That it didn't happen makes me very disappoint. Bad waifus are best dealt with by their owners.
Tabula_Rojo
#1260003
3 months ago
#1259693 OP never condoned of Child murder, it just happened in the story
deathproofpony
#1260705
3 months ago
@693 butthurt?

You know what happens when you make an assumption? It makes an ass out of you and umption.

Way to assume I'm okay with child abuse because I wrote a story (which was inspired by a movie, anyway)
Anonymous
#1277135
2 months ago
Intresting story, but how did the EMT know to arrive.

That just looked like a big Deus Ex Machina to me.

They could've been called after finding out about the incident, I don't know.
Anonymous
#1278163
2 months ago
He called the paramedics earlier in the story. That's why there are EMTs there. Emergency Medical Technicians. They're there to do what they can for the baby.