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| The_Mungoman #1255610 3 months ago |
Before anyone tells me I ripped off Fluffy_Writer's story "Abandonment", let me tell you tht this kind of story has been written before and will be written again.
I just wanted to add my own kind of twist to it. |
| The_Mungoman #1255623 3 months ago |
^I meant "Abandoned". Just a typo. |
| Rodman #1255684 3 months ago |
Now for day two! |
| Anonymous #1255844 3 months ago |
Boring. 1/10
You have no skills to write about fluffy pony abandonment without making it look like a cliché 90s dog movie. |
| The_Mungoman #1255881 3 months ago |
^Be a little more constructive with your feedback, please.
How can I improve this? I'm always willing to be a better writer. |
| PhilSrobeighn #1256111 3 months ago |
I think it would have helped to give a little more action in the part
But I think I understand why you made your choice. It leaves the reader with a question of "Did their daddy just throw them away, or is there more?" |
| Anonymous #1256153 3 months ago |
I'm pretty sure the owner just dumped them. And I want them to die slowly one by one. |
| The_Mungoman #1256985 3 months ago |
^Well, I do have something planned... >:D |
| Anonymous #1257422 3 months ago |
More fluffy survival stories?
Me gusta. |