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| Gittonsxv #1255432 3 months ago |
this is horrifying, fucked up like all christ, how anyone can enjoy this is beyond me and it started out so sweet and nice as well O_o |
| lordanubis #1255462 3 months ago |
Well that sure took a dark turn. I liked it, though, despite to apparent fucked up-edness of the narrator. |
| Rodman #1255466 3 months ago |
Start: Dawwwww.
Mid: Daaaaaaawwwwww. End: WHAT THE FUCKING HELL, MAN?!?! |
| FirelordofHyrule #1255484 3 months ago |
^Well, what did you expect from these stories? A happy ending? |
| Mezzo #1255501 3 months ago |
^Yes. |
| Arne #1255514 3 months ago |
Turns way too dark way too quickly for my tastes... |
| Rodman #1255517 3 months ago |
^^^
Well, seeing as there's no fluffy_abuse or fluffy_pony_dies tag, yes. Or atleast not foals being massacred infront of their mother. |
| The_Mungoman #1255557 3 months ago |
This protagonist seems like an uneducated hedonistic teratophobe.
Disgusting, creepy and unneccesarily cruel. If that was the intention, though, I digress. |
| NotThatAnyoneCares #1255609 3 months ago |
Okay, gave it its proper fluffy_abuse tag. And now I need never look at this fucking shitpile again. |
| Ginger_Fig #1255644 3 months ago |
This is one of the best "psycho owner" stories in a while. |
| Giant_Neckbeard #1255754 3 months ago |
It scares me a bit that I can look at that story, turn around and point to half a dozen people I know or have worked with that could easily be substituted for the Owner.... |
| Anonymous #1255760 3 months ago |
A serial fluffy killer. That is a great idea. And the way it turns dark fast and hard but without it coming from left field shows you're a pretty good writer. I like it. 9/10. |
| JP #1255997 3 months ago |
The first half of the story made me d'aaaawww and HNNGGGHH! many times, but the latter half took a too grim turn. Write stories like the first half, but leave out the dark stuff.
On an unrelated note, PB's servers are more fragile than a fluffy pony foal. |
| Home_Run_Fluffies #1256016 3 months ago |
I liked it due to how real it is. This stuff does happen people, I'm willing to bet the only reason you fluffy lovers only want nice stories is because of how cute these things are, if they were ugly and deformed you people wouldn't give a shit. |
| PhilSrobeighn #1256052 3 months ago |
I didn't feel good at the beginning at all. I have been around real people like this and knew where it was going.
This was really well-written. It is a more natural abuse than the sadism fluffy stories slip into frequently. |
| Anonymous #1256095 3 months ago |
I like it. Downloaded this story. All fluffy pony-abuse stories are good. |
| Anonymous #1256238 3 months ago |
I saw where this was going, a tragic story but an well written one |
| Anonymous #1256270 3 months ago |
@1255997
Fortunately for us abusers, writers will keep making stories with grim turns, you poeple liking them or not. |