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| IpersonallylikedCupcakes #1236217 3 months ago |
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| Anonymous #1236219 3 months ago |
She smells like potatoes & is growing a mustache, all seems normal. |
| Anonymous #1236228 3 months ago |
I AM LE OP. FRIEND LINKED ME TO THIS SO SPELLING AND SHIT IS NOT MAH JOB. SO WHATCHU TAWKIN BOUT WILLIS |
| Anonymous #1236233 3 months ago |
All the profanity blinded my eyes.I am now like Helen Keller.....too soon? |
| Anonymous #1236284 3 months ago |
Wait, six foals? But equines have only two nipples! Four of those foals will starve to death in a day or two, the mare won't have enough milk. You might as well put them out of their misery so they don't have to starve to death. Do it. |
| NightJack #1236288 3 months ago |
I like this, get the little buggers for what they did but don't take it out ion the babies, I find it to be really poor taste to pick on newborns(the whole idea of hurting them for nothing more then existing is the lowest anyone can get for anything). |
| Anonymous #1236290 3 months ago |
well atleast he didn't kill the foals |
| NightJack #1236293 3 months ago |
@Anon284: It seems fuffies are more like cats and dogs in that way. |
| Anonymous #1236295 3 months ago |
it was funny for a few minuets, sickening for the majority but beautiful for the final moments
bravo good sir or madame bravo |
| Ginger_Fig #1236302 3 months ago |
I thought the punchline was going to involve Legos.
Like; slut pony was only collecting Legos to make some simple minded gift for you. |
| Anonymous #1236313 3 months ago |
@302 GENIUS |
| NotThatAnyoneCares #1236352 3 months ago |
@284: Fluffy ponies have too much fluff to get to their nipples, according to other sources. You have to feed them yourself anyway. They'll all live.
The turnaround at the end made my brain hurt, but it was genuinely d'aww. Everything else... ewwwww. |
| NightJack #1236371 3 months ago |
YI was thinking the same thing Ginger. |
| FeralSocks018 #1236388 3 months ago |
^As was I. |
| CodenameOne #1236580 3 months ago |
God damn it!
This story was SO GOOD until that fucking pussy-ass ending. That ending was literally worse than the ending to Mass Effect 3. Author, you have no idea the kind of praise you would've received if you had the foals brutally tortured and killed in front of the mother. OP, get friends to link you to stories that involve all Fluffies raped and murdered. |
| lordanubis #1236671 3 months ago |
So the guy isn't above brutalizing full grown fluffies who are, by their very nature, not able to comprehend prostitution, but suddenly he decides to draw the line at killing baby fluffies. What a shithead.
What he should be doing is giving Squeak some serious props for understanding the concept of a business transaction. Squeak is clearly a genius as fluffies go. |
| NightJack #1236708 3 months ago |
^ The problem with that is if the fully grown one don't comprehend it then the babies even less so, they won't comprehend even the smallest part of what the grown ones do. |
| Anonymous #1236799 3 months ago |
OP here. Feel free to add you're own ending with abuse and upload. I upload to much abuse, plus sir fagsalot I even said I DIDN'T FUCKING WRITE IT. Dumbass. |
| Anonymous #1237175 3 months ago |
This was... Just fucking weird.
"I love fluffies! I don't wanna hurt them! OHH FLUFFIES MAKE ME ANGRY! HULK SMASH FLUFFIES Fluffy babies?! KILL ZEM ALL Aw, they're so cute!" Split personality, much? |
| Anonymous #1237461 3 months ago |
FLuffy pony shakespear write mORE |
| Anonymous #1237960 3 months ago |
@Anon284: the babies usually are not fed by the mother because the mother explodes at the end of the pregnancy to give birth. So the owner would have to feed them anyway |
| Anonymous #1238524 3 months ago |
All this over legos lol |
| MisterXIndeed #1238546 3 months ago |
Aren't male fluffies supposed to hardly ever survive their first orgasm, and if they do, never their second?
Also, these males have names and access to LEGOs. They can't be strays... |
| Anonymous #1238960 3 months ago |
Well if they have owners, those owners should let their fluffies get out and fuck females recklessly. |
| Anonymous #1240341 3 months ago |
There is no canon. Only what the author chooses to do. |
| Anonymous #1242010 3 months ago |
Y u no off them all and get goldfish instead? |
| Anonymous #1242952 3 months ago |
I almost cried when I read it. Fuck you, 228 T_T |
| Anonymous #1244778 3 months ago |
FUCKING
GENIUS |
| Anonymous #1482740 1 week ago |
Are you fucking kidding me?
You went through all that, all that hell with the slut, then all taht delicious torture with the dirty little bastards, and then you dont' even go through with killing the... oh, what was it... 'spawn of that whore'? Weak ass ending. Go buy a backbone. THEN start writing these stories |