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| DrBeard #1232677 3 months ago |
I saw this fic a few days back, and really liked it, so I felt like editing it for the few lapses in grammar that were there, all story credit goes to Blissful Dreams, I hope she doesn't mind. |
| Clopitor_the_Hydrogenous #1232736 3 months ago |
I doubt she will. Do a self-insert to it and then we'll talk. |
| Blissful_Dreams #1233272 3 months ago |
You misspelled "find" in the third line of paragraph one. |
| Blissful_Dreams #1233275 3 months ago |
Overall, I don't see much difference other that the correction of my dyslexia. |