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| Starlight42896 #1220407 3 months ago |
this short story was randomly typed up after my sister asked me to make a scary version of her OC pony, Lovestruck. She wanted me to change her cutie mark from a bunch of hearts to a broken one and thats what inspired this short story. Another reason I made this is just a writing practice. This may be rewritten or extended. hope you like my story. |
| Anonymous #1220413 3 months ago |
Eeyup. |
| Yorec #1220414 3 months ago |
Ok so if this is the scary version of her OC Lovestruck, and her cutie mark is a broken heart, should she be called Broken Heart? |
| Starlight42896 #1220438 3 months ago |
her cutie mark changed just for this picture. |
| Anonymous #1220465 3 months ago |
I realized something, it kills women to see a man happy. be it love, ponies, or anything else that saves us from this sadistic condition we suffer. |
| Anonymous #1220571 3 months ago |
Sorry, too long didn't read. |
| Starlight42896 #1220603 3 months ago |
^well, at least you clicked on it and commented. that alone makes me happy. maybe another time you can read it. its not the best story anyway. lol |
| I_Like_Your_Mane #1220919 3 months ago |
Use fonts that does not hurt the eyes. Instead of using red on black like you're some 8 year old. |
| Starlight42896 #1221585 3 months ago |
^thanks for the comment. The color changes in the text was me trying to be artsy with it. Not too much thought went into it. This was about a total of 10 minutes worth of typing and placing the text. If I ever try this again, I'll just use white text. |
| Tohob #1221631 3 months ago |
its the dark blue text that hurts for me.. cant read that |
| Starlight42896 #1222540 3 months ago |
^thanks for trying to read it. Along with trying to be artsy, it was very late and I was extremely tired. I couldn't really see what I was typing at some point lol. Again, thanks for reading. It means a lot to me. Sorry for the weird text colors. |