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| CodenameOne #1200057 3 months ago |
Fascinating. |
| Dramatic_spoon #1200083 3 months ago |
reminds me of the time I went to a Meat packing plant. |
| Anonymous #1200123 3 months ago |
Badly written, tasteless, and nondescript.
I really do like fluffy abuse fics, but not when they're full of run-on sentences and duplicate words and lines. Also, the descriptions really need work. The best fics go into visceral detail and don't trip over their own words when they describe it. |
| Shaggy #1200206 3 months ago |
@123 Thanks for some constructive criticism for once. I'm new to writing and would like to know anything else I could improve about my work. |
| Shaggy #1200222 3 months ago |
Please stop using the tags for petty insults. If you have something to say to me type a comment. |
| I_Like_Your_Mane #1200396 3 months ago |
Tag it with 4chan.
I lost respect for anyone jumping aboard this meme. But at least you know how to string a sentence together, Shaggy. The rest of the idiots can't. |
| Appleloosa #1200543 3 months ago |
I support you Shaggy, don't let these manchild butthurts get to you.
Keep up! |
| Anonymous #1200576 3 months ago |
i love how they first grind off the legs, and in the next post they hold them down by their legs. gj shitty writer |
| Anonymous #1200631 3 months ago |
@576 I don't see anything about them being held by their legs after getting ground off. I see a line repeated twice by accident. Learn to read. |
| FeralSocks018 #1201143 3 months ago |
Logically, wouldn't they kill and de-fluff the ponies as the first step? It would improve efficiency and decrease the awfulness of the process. |
| Anonymous #1202073 3 months ago |
Not really, removing their limbs makes them as mobile as a corpse anyway. |
| FeralSocks018 #1204443 3 months ago |
^Yeah, but fluff and hair could clog up the machines something fierce. Better to do away with it ASAP. |
| lordanubis #1216157 3 months ago |
This entire story falls apart for me because it doesn't answer a pretty important question: why the fuck does the fluffy have to be alive during all that? What possible benefit could that have? |
| TedJackson #1422708 1 month ago |
At least it's Kosher. |