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| Anonymous #1198182 3 months ago |
At least they can't die from their own stupidity anymore. |
| PhilSrobeighn #1198239 3 months ago |
YAY!
FLUFFY PONE HEAVEN! |
| Anonymous #1198247 3 months ago |
>Then the barn shattered with the sounds of a million flies swarming
>The two fluffy ponies instantly halted in their tracks >The landscape turned to a rusty red >A vicious mocking laughter was heard by the fluffy ponies >Spikes ripped out from the earth, each one impaling several fluffy ponies >They were crying and yelling in pain >One of them cried "Wun... wun... bad pwace... ouchie much why no wun" >Bluebell and Twinkle cried in unison >Monstrous birds of indeterminable size swooped down on the several of the fluffy ponies >Bluebell was crushed in half by its giant claw >The giant bird picked Bluebell's eyes out of its socket, devouring it raw >Bluebelle screamed "Ouchie ouchie ouchie why ouchie why why?" >Other fluffy ponies also shared this fate >Twinkle started defecating and urinating on the spot, the horror she saw shattering her tiny mind >She laughed at the absurdity >She was in a beautiful place >Everything was good >Then suddenly everything was bad >A pit opened below Twinkle and other fluffy ponies, swallowing her >Flames burned Twinkle, giving her never-ending pain, but never killing her >"Why dis happen why dis happen why dis happen", she repeated in agony to herself >The fluffy ponies screamed >The cruel laughter never stopped, each fluffy pony hearing it in the voice of their previous owner >The monstrous birds took away with the screaming fluffy ponies in their claws to go to a place that should never exist >The impaling spikes retreated back into the earth with their ghastly prey >The burning pits in the earth closed, silencing whatever scream exited a fluffy pony's mouth abruptly inside >Then the hellish scenery stopped >The barn returned >There was no trace of any fluffy pony anymore >Everything was beautiful again >It was only for a short time >New fluffy ponies arrived >This place was tainted with them >But the place knew how to get rid of them >It did this since the first of them got here >And it would repeat this again and again, until no fluffy pony would ever desecrate this beauty again |
| Anonymous #1198255 3 months ago |
OP here ^8247 I was wondering where part 2 was. |
| Mezzo #1198267 3 months ago |
@Anon#1198247: Thanks for ruining a great story, you pathetic bastard. |
| Anonymous #1198272 3 months ago |
Fluffy ponies don't deserve to be happy. They are a product of man, the ultimate evil. |
| Mezzo #1198278 3 months ago |
^Up yours! |
| Anonymous #1198286 3 months ago |
Mezzo: Up my ass? Don't mind if I do baby. |
| Anonymous #1198295 3 months ago |
Is 'the place' sentient? That's quite horrific. |
| Mezzo #1198314 3 months ago |
@Anon #1198286: Use the @ sign when you're responding. Otherwise, other posts with your level of stupidity might mistake it as me saying it. |
| Anonymous #1198350 3 months ago |
Mezzo: Penis penis penis. |
| mindcannon #1198360 3 months ago |
@350
Okay, I found that funny. |
| Mezzo #1198381 3 months ago |
@350 and (to a much lesser extend) mindcannon: STFU |
| mindcannon #1198387 3 months ago |
@Mezzo
Hey man. I neutral in this whole thing. |
| mindcannon #1198392 3 months ago |
*im |
| Anonymous #1198396 3 months ago |
Mezzo: GOD DAMMI-! |
| Anonymous #1198397 3 months ago |
Something must have rustled up Mezzo's jimmies. |
| Anonymous #1199041 3 months ago |
Mezzo: Why do you love fluffy ponies dying? |
| Anonymous #1199990 3 months ago |
@Anon1198255 - There IS NO Part 2. I saw the original story on "Pastebin.com," and all it showed was what is shown here in this post. No sentient evil land, no fluffy pony torture, etc. |
| Anonymous #1332814 2 months ago |
Regardless, the story was improved by the comment made by 1198247. Fluffy ponies don't deserve any happiness unless it meant to lead to a false sense of security like here. Fluffy ponies only have two rights: the right to suffer horribly and the right to die horribly. |