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| Anonymous #1198211 3 months ago |
I'm bailing on this, it's just too kinky! |
| Anonymous #1198316 3 months ago |
Let it STAY in progress. Please. |
| Anonymous #1198364 3 months ago |
Too stupid. Fluffy pony doesn't need backstory. These would probably turn out as retarded as the Bruno stuff. |
| Anonymous #1198965 3 months ago |
Is it that hard to keep track of whether you're writing in first person or third person without switching between them in a single sentence? |
| Anonymous #1199051 3 months ago |
>agency to put down fluffy ponies
>first act of agency is to kill a guy's family Butthurt, butthurt everywhere. |
| Shaggy #1199134 3 months ago |
I wrote this and they're a terrorist group not the agency and the agency kills fluffy ponies in a quick and painless manner. Like I said it's a WIP and I'll keep that in mind 965. |
| FusRoDah #1199706 3 months ago |
Get your personage in line then. Swapping between first and third person makes me want to rip my eyes out so I don't have to continue reading this atrocity of writing. |
| Shaggy #1199940 3 months ago |
FusRoDah little much for a WIP piece don't you think? |
| NotThatAnyoneCares #1312598 2 months ago |
@Shaggy: No. You swing back and forth way too much to forgive it with "Oh, just WIP". |